I like that you are including so many characters in your story and while I think it is nice to see Ray and Jenna happily married for a change I just can't picture Donna telling Jenna that she is the love of Ray's life at this point! If that conversation had taken place 10 years or 20 years later on then yes. But not in 1988 when Jenna and Ray had been married less than a year and Jenna was still unluckily in love with Bobby and Ray had cheated on Jenna with Connie. The arsenic poisioning is so evil. Poor Sue Ellenthinking JR is back to his cheating ways when Afton's child must be Cliff's. What a weird detective photographing Afton in her underwear. I love JR looking out for Lucy. I am confused about if Lucy is still married to Mitch now though. She was on the show when she returned since Mitch came after her a few episodes later and asked when she was coming home. But she wasn't so they divorced. However that happened after your story picks up so I think you might have established that they were divorced again when Lucy first showed up in your story, or? I love the way you write JR/SE. Your story does have many plot twists which keeps us at the edge of our seats wondering what will happen next! I'm looking forward to read more!