You did a great job in writing the dialogue between Mario and Afton! I especially liked this part of the conversation: “Of course we’ll have to keep a low profile until you’ve met my parents and if they approve we can place the ad in the paper and look for rings and new clothes.” “Is there something wrong with my clothes?” Afton asked. “Well they are a bit provocative. As a society wife you will need a certain finesse, but don’t worry dear we’ll figure it out,” Mario said patronizing. However, I don't think that there was a need for this scene (except for the obvious drama) when you look at it from a bigger perspective! Sorry! And quite frankly, the same could be said about the scene between Jenna and Martha! I'm just indifferent about scenes like these! Sorry, but I am! As I was reading through the scene, I couldn't help but think ... ... please let's move on to a scene which includes the main characters of "Dallas"!