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    Great ending Sarah.

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    Wonderful idea and brilliantly written!

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    Sarah your Calhoun story was phenomenal.

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    Thank you As a reward is there A CHANCE that someone else might write something???

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    Well Sarah, apparently you didn't like the end to any scenes with SE/JR. LOL Let me watch a scene or two and refresh my memory on some things I didn't like and yes there's plenty for me too and I'll see what I can come up with. Don't anyone be surprised or shocked but I think Jenna's about to die. ROFLMAO

    And Sarah, you know I love your writing. Your scenes rocked.

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    Well Sarah I tried writing a new challenge but I've about written one for all scenes Pam related. I thought I'd post this one just to put something up. I'm still working on a newer one. PR

    Episode 64
    Executive Wives

    {This is one when Bobby was showing his stupidity. In this episode he brings Pam flowers and makes up with her after a fight and promises to take her to dinner. Of course he calls later and cancels and she has dinner with Alex Ward instead. Well this is what I say should have happened and would've if Bobby hadn't been like the scarecrow needing a visit with the wizard}
    Rated M: for mature readers

    Bobby had been neglecting Pam while running Ewing Oil. He seem to be so preoccupied with the company that he couldn't take thirty minutes to have lunch or diner with her. She was not at all happy about the situation. She understood his need to prove to his father that he was just as capable as JR of running Ewing Oil but still JR found plenty of time while president of that company to have more women than you shake a stick at. Pam had came in late from work and she and Bobby ended up in an argument because she'd been trying to tell him she'd found her mother for several days but he was too busy to hear her. Once she relayed her news he told her he was sorry but he'd been really busy lately. They argued a bit more about that being with Ewing Oil and how he didn't seem to have time for anyone or anything else. He got angry and stormed out staying at one of the Ewing condos for the night.
    That next morning she went to work as usual. She was supposed to be picking out samples for some new clothes but she couldn't concentrate. Her mind was on Bobby and how things used to be between them. He used to bring her flowers and always found time to have lunch or dinner with her alone. He'd call her during the day when they first got married just to tell her he loved her. They'd go for walks on Southfork talk about the day, make plans for the future and find little spots to be together. They'd never go to sleep without making love but lately Bobby didn't have time for that either. She missed him. She stood looking at the material samples in front of her but not really seeing them. She heard a voice say, "Hi." She turned to see him standing there with flowers in his hand. She smiled. "Well hi. I missed you." she said looking in his eyes. "I missed you, too. And I'm sorry I blew up at 'cha." "No it was my fault Bobby. I was being selfish." "No, no, no, no, no. No more apologies." He moved his head forward and bent down and kissed her softly. "Dinner tonight?" he asked. "You mean it?" "I promise. I'll pick you up at seven." She smiled. "I love you." "I know." he said handing her the flowers as he leaves.
    Later that night he came and picked her up and they went to dinner. They dined alone in a small place out of the way. They got in the car and he drove them to a little bed and breakfast outside of Dallas. "Bobby what is this place?" she asked. "Well I wanted to be alone with you. I had Phyllis find us a place where no one could find us and before you say anything, I had Phyllis do some shopping for us and it's all in a bag in the trunk." She smiled as they went inside and went to the room. It was a colonial style little place. The room was very pretty and lavishly decorated. "Wow this is really nice Bobby." she said. "Yes it is." he agreed putting his arms around her waste and kissing her neck. "I'm sorry Pam for the way I've been acting." he said. "Hey I thought you said no more apologies?" she said. He started unbuttoning her blouse, "You're right. I did." He finished with the buttons and slipped his hands around her breasts. She leaned back against him. He watched in the mirror of the dresser as she closed her eyes and he massaged both her breasts. "I've really missed being with you Pam." he said. She turned in his arms and helped him out of his suit jacket. She unbuttoned his shirt and kissed his naked skin. "I've missed you." Their lips came together in a heated kiss and they finished undressing. They made their way to the king size bed and lay down. He kissed her from head to toe and back again. Their lips came together again and she felt him pressing against her thigh. "I need you Pam." he said. She opened her thighs to let him position himself to enter her. He got on his knees and took one of her legs and put it over his shoulder while straddling the other. He thrust inside her and she moaned in delight. He watched as he disappeared in and out and watched her face change with every stroke. The fire in him was so intense he thought his body may be giving off steam. She touched a place in him no one else even knew about. He wondered how he could think anything was more important than being with her. She watched him as he loved her like never before. She hated fighting with him but she sure loved making up with him. They moved together for a long time, something which always amazed both of them. Afterwards they lay holding each other. He ran his fingers up and down her side as she kissed him over and over again. "I love you Bobby." "I love you." He said as they let their bodies rest and come to life again for a second go round.

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    Great ending.

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    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Go PR GO PR GO PR!!! Beautiful stuff!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Principal Rules View Post
    Well Sarah, apparently you didn't like the end to any scenes with SE/JR. LOL Let me watch a scene or two and refresh my memory on some things I didn't like and yes there's plenty for me too and I'll see what I can come up with. Don't anyone be surprised or shocked but I think Jenna's about to die. ROFLMAO

    And Sarah, you know I love your writing. Your scenes rocked.
    Certain ones. Which usually end with nudeness.

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    Great job PR.

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    CROSSROADS

    No one knew what to think or expect. All the news reports had said was that one of the Ewing cars, as yet unidentified, had been in a serious automobile accident. Rumour had it that there had been a collision with an oil truck, that there had been no survivors and that the occupant had perished in the flames. Some said the driver of the car was female, others said a male had been killed.

    As Ellie Ewing Farlow fended off press calls and the Ewing maid Teresa struggled to keep the Southfork telephone lines free, JR Ewing pulled up in his silver convertible, placing his hat onto his head as he walked towards his mother who sat close to tears on the patio.

    "Oh JR!" Miss Ellie sobbed as she stood to greet him.

    "Mamma??" JR's pace increased as he walked towards her. "Teresa, what the hell's happened?" JR said as he embraced his shaken mother. Miss Ellie's normal steely reserve had faded, which was unusual for JR, or indeed any of the family, to witness. She struggled to speak as she eventually said,

    "Someone...one of the family....oh JR there's been a terrible accident!"

    "What....how do you know this Mamma?" JR said, his concern turning to panic as he thought of his own immediate family, Sue Ellen and John Ross.

    "It's been on the news Mr JR..." Teresa interjected, seeing how upset Miss Ellie was, "And the press have been calling all day."

    JR reached instinctively for his cell phone and pushed the keypad. It rang briefly but went straight to voicemail.

    "Sue Ellen...it's me honey...can you call me as soon as you get this?"

    "No answer?" Miss Ellie said, sniffing into a tissue.

    JR shook his head.

    The phone rang for what seemed like the hundredth time as Bobby pulled into the driveway. Momentarily confused, Miss Ellie realised that her youngest son was driving his wife's car.

    "Mamma? JR..I've been hearing reports on the news..."

    "Bobby..." Miss Ellie sobbed again. "You're alright..." Bobby too embraced his mother.

    "We need to find the girls..."

    "Sue Ellen's secretary says she left a couple of hours ago....."

    "I can't get hold of Pam..."

    The muddled conversations on the brothers' cell phones blurred into one another, as they desperately tried to trace the movements of their spouses and children. Clayton alternated between the patio and inside the house, helping manage the various telephone lines and requests from the press.

    "I'm madder than hell that the press have gotten hold of this before we even know what is going on!" Clayton barked.

    No one said anything in response but it was clear all agreed. It was a highly unusual situation, putting everyone involved under an immense amount of strain. The children had finally arrived home and Teresa had taken them under her wing, with strict instructions that they weren't to watch the television and that they had to keep distance from the adults for now. John Ross, forever curious was charged with not asking too many questions but to keep Christopher occupied.

    After what seemed like an eternity, the Sheriff's car pulled up alongside JR's as the family took what seemed to be one huge simultaneous intake of breath.

    Fenton Washburn set his brown stetson atop his head as he approached the small circle of people, JR and Bobby standing at each side of their nervous mother.

    "Fenton what the hell is going on?"

    "Now steady on Mr Ewing", Washburn started, instructing JR to settle.

    "What the hell do you mean talkin' to me like that?"

    "JR!" Miss Ellie scolded.

    "Something has happened to someone in this family and we have to hear about it on the news Fenton?" Bobby interjected.

    Fenton took off his hat, a sure sign of the delivery of bad news. "I'm sorry...to all of you...but Mr Ewing...it's your wife..."

    Fenton looked at Bobby. Bobby's heart started to race as he whispered, "Pam...."

    JR steadied his mother and looked to his brother. Between feeling relief that his own wife was safe and not knowing what way to react to the news, JR was momentarily speechless.

    "Is she seriously hurt?" Miss Ellie said, tears again forming in her eyes.

    "I'm afraid so M'am..." Fenton said quietly.

    "She's not...?"

    "No sir...but her injuries are critical...She's at Dallas Memorial now...Mr Ewing, your wife is with her..."

    "Sue Ellen? Is she alright?"

    "She's fine sir...she went to the hospital as soon as she heard the news it seems..."

    "I'll drive you Bobby...." JR offered.

    Bobby was already on his way to his brother's car, opening the door and climbing in in shock. Christopher appeared on the balcony, shouting 'Daddy where are you going?' as Teresa moved both the children back inside.

    JR drove to the hospital in near silence, only managing, 'I'm sorry Bob...'

    Bobby as crushed as he was managed to say 'I'm glad Sue Ellen is okay...' But after that the poor man couldn't say a thing. Climbing back out of the car before it even stopped properly, he ran into the entrance of Dallas Memorial.

    JR parked the car and breathed deeply. He was no fan of Pamela Barnes Ewing, but he would never wish for his brother to be in any sort of pain. He sat for a quiet moment, reflecting, realising what had just happened. He was so glad Sue Ellen was alright. They hadn't been back together long and he found himself thanking his lucky stars that she was safe. For the first time in a long time, he also realised just how much she meant to him.

    Stepping out of the car and walking into the hospital, it took him a moment or two to get his bearings and find the correct department. He was immediately recognised and pointed in the right direction. He saw Sue Ellen straight away and noticed her and Bobby in a tight embrace. As he got closer, he heard her sob, 'I'm so sorry Bobby...so sorry...'.

    Seeing his brother approach, Bobby gently turned Sue Ellen around to face him, and she instinctively nestled into his arms. He held her tightly as he whispered, 'Thank God....thank God....'

    Sue Ellen sighed deeply against him and as the couple heard Bobby start to walk away, turned to him and JR said, 'Bobby stay with us. Stay until we know what is going on.'

    'I can't sit still JR...' he said, the sadness evident in his face.

    A doctor appeared and explained the extent of Pam's injuries. They sounded horrific and Sue Ellen once again began to sob. 'Can we see her?' she asked.

    'I'm afraid not at this time Mrs Ewing. She is so open to infection that we have to take great care. I'd advise for now that you go home. Mr Ewing, you can get gowned up and stay if you wish.'.

    Bobby of course wanted to stay, so after wishing Bobby their love and best, JR and Sue Ellen went back to the car, JR holding her hand tightly all the way. Once inside, as she looked to the overhead mirror and dabbed the blackness away from her eyes. JR looked at her. When she didn't turn to face him, he gently touched her face, prompting her to face him.

    When she saw the brilliant silver blue of his eyes, another tear fell and he wiped it away, moving to kiss her by saying, 'I'm so glad you're alright...'

    Gently kissing him in return she whispered, 'This is why we should try our hardest to make this work...this time...'

    'I want that...I really do...' JR said, softly kissing her cheek, inhaling her perfume, stroking her long chesnut hair. In return she brought his head as close to her as she could, kissing him on the cheek. 'I love you, JR', she said softly.

    'And I love you. I was so scared today...made me realise just how much I've missed you, how much I want you...'

    'I want you to hold me when we get home...all night...'

    JR smiled softly and kissed her. 'That I can do..'

    He put the car into reverse and they were soon heading back to the Ranch. Both silently determined never to take one another for granted again.

    THE END

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    Wow Sarah - that was just amazing!!! You've truly mastered the one shots
    Please promise you'll never ever stop posting...!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lovely Linda View Post
    Wow Sarah - that was just amazing!!! You've truly mastered the one shots
    Please promise you'll never ever stop posting...!
    I will never stop writing but seeing some more people do it too would be SO wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Lovely Linda

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    Awww Sarah that was amazing on so many levels. You really should have been writing for the show in the 80s.

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    Great ending Sarah.

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    Fabulous Sarah.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Scarlett View Post
    Awww Sarah that was amazing on so many levels. You really should have been writing for the show in the 80s.
    Not sure everyone would agree, but thank you for the wonderful compliment

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sarah View Post
    Not sure everyone would agree, but thank you for the wonderful compliment
    I think more people would agree than you think.

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    Wonderful writing as always Sarah

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    Loved both these!

    FINALLY someone's written a one-shot where Sue Ellen CARED about Pam's accident enough to try and see her in the hospital.

    And PrincipalRules, I love that Bobby saw sense!


 

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