A invitation they wont ever forget

**Laustsen** · 10-12-2010, 04:20 PM

Really great

**Andy Hunter** · 10-12-2010, 04:55 PM

Great read that was!

**MrsSuperman93** · 10-12-2010, 08:33 PM

Awesome update!

**Jessie** · 10-12-2010, 09:19 PM

Chapter 5

Sue Ellen sat on the bed, and looked around. "JR this place is big, and nice but it is creepy, I want to go home"

"Well to bad, can you swim , I can't swim that far so relax"

Sue Ellen threw a pillow, "JR I'm scared, I don't like this place"

"Ok we will go outside and sleep outside, or do you want to double up with Afton and Cliff"?

"You are a idiot JR, lets double up with them jerk"

'Sue Ellen nothing is wrong, why don't you take your clothes off and relax"

"You are to much, I'm not getting naked they probably have cameras on us right now" JR ran over grabbing Sue Ellen.

'Oh great we can make our first porn film, that sounds fun". Sue Ellen jumped up, "you are bad, stop it now".

"Come here, we can break in the bed. We can get under the covers, they can't see anything right"? Sue Ellen laughed, " If I don't fool around will you go to Marilee"?

"Let me think about it, Um".

"Fine go to her", Sue Ellen turned away from JR. He ran over, "I'm kidding your mine, I only want you". He brought his lips to hers, and they were kissing, he lifted her up taking her to the bed. He jumped when they heard someone yell, and Sue Ellen grabbed on to JR, "OMG did you hear that"?

"Hell yeah what is going on, stay here, I will check it out".

"You JR ,your scared of your shadow".

JR looked at Sue Ellen, she got up, "I better go , and protect you".

They walked out in the hall, and were glad to see Bobby and Pam. "Did you guys hear that scream"?

"Yeah it scared the crap out of us, who was it"?

"I don't know maybe Marilee "?

They walked down knocking on Cliff's door he answered. "You guys heard that scream too"?

"Yeah is Afton ok"?

"Yeah she is fine, I was scared to leave the room, Afton hates it here".

"All the women are babies", JR laughs. They continued down to Ray's and Donna's, they answered saying they were ok. They walked down knocking on Marilee's door. She opened it, but she was so scared she clung to JR so tight. She wouldn't let go, Sue Ellen was angry, but she could see she was scared. "Marilee, I can't breath what is wrong"?

"I took a shower, and came out, I heard someone in my room. I looked around the lights went out, and I felt someone touch my shoulder. JR we never should have come here, something is going to happen".

"Stop it, we all are letting ourselves get freaked out." They all jump when Nina walked up behind them. "What is the matter, I came up to ask you to come down for before dinner drinks"?

"Someone was in her room, who else is here? Who gave us the stupid invitation to this weird weekend"?

"I don't know, I just work here, I don't know anything. Please come down soon, I will be waiting". She left, and they all stood watching her go downstairs. Marilee grabbed JR, "I can't be alone, can you stay with me tonight"?

Sue Ellen laughed, " No he is with me Marilee"

"Fine, you can stay with us too, I don't want to be alone".

"Stay with Jordan or Vaughn JR isn't spending anytime with you". Marilee ran at Sue Ellen shocking her. "You witch, if something happens to me it will be your fault". Marilee walked downstairs, and the others followed. Sue Ellen stood still, and JR walked back, "forget about her, she had no right".

"JR what if someone was in her room"?

"She probably made it up, she would do anything to cause trouble". Sue Ellen smiled, "I guess your right, but I'm scared JR". He wrapped his arms around her, and they went downstairs.

Someone came out of the shadows, and smiled, "Oh listen to your wife JR, you all should be scared."

**Laustsen** · 10-13-2010, 04:04 PM

Who is that?. Great update

**MrsSuperman93** · 10-13-2010, 08:22 PM

Who's in the house!?

**Crazy For Sue Ellen** · 10-14-2010, 01:00 AM

Oooh great update.

**Jessie** · 10-14-2010, 01:16 AM

Chapter 6

They all went into the living room, and Nina asked them what they wanted to drink? They all were ordering alcoholic drinks except Sue Ellen. She kept looking around the place, she felt cold inside. She felt like someone was watching them, she held on to JR. Marilee walked over, "you afraid he will disappear"?

"Marilee please, I don't feel well leave me and JR alone".

"Awe go up, and lay down me and JR will find something to do". Sue Ellen pushed Marilee making her fall , spilling her drink all over herself. She jumped up grabbing Sue Ellen, and they were arguing, when Nina yelled. "Enough you all are here for a reason, I have been told to tell you this. You will know what this weekend is all about in good time. If I were you, I would enjoy this evening tomorrow, might be a bit tough on you all . I am going to get dinner started, I will come back and get you when it is time".

"Excuse me Nina, who do you think you are"? Marilee yells.

"Me, I'm being paid pretty good to take care of all you rich snobs"..

Sue Ellen looked at JR, "What is going on, I demand to get off this crazy island".

Sue Ellen ran over to Nina, "Tell whoever your working for, this joke is over. I want the ferry to come back now. I have a son who needs me, please, I don't like it here".

"I'm sorry Mrs. Ewing, you never should have came. It is the men and those 2 woman", pointing to Marilee and Cindy that caused all of this". Nina turned and walked out , leaving everyone staring. Sue Ellen started to cry, "JR what is going on, is someone going to hurt us"?. They all jumped when music started playing, but they couldn't see where it was coming from?. JR, Bobby and Ray knew that music, they grabbed Sue Ellen, Pam and Donna, they knew this weekend was some sort of revenge, over something that happened 19years earlier. JR whispered, "Bobby who could it be, I don't get this"?

Bobby didn't speak, JR saw pure terror on his face. Marilee ran over screaming, "turn that crap off you sick freak. Come out and show your face, stop scaring everyone".

JR yelled," Shut up Marilee your making it worse".

"You shut up JR, how dare you talk to me that way?. You can treat your wife like crap, but not me". Sue Ellen grabbed JR, "I can't take this JR, I'm so scared".

They heard a voice come over the speaker. It was disguised, with a voice machine, so they couldn't tell if it was a man or a lady. "Are you all scared yet, you should be, I was that night?. Do you remember what you did, you sick pieces of crap"? Pam and Donna were looking not knowing what to think. Marilee yells, " What night are you talking about"?

"You know what night, you are still the Witch you were back than. You and JR were all over each other, like raging animals. You both didn't care who saw you."

"Sue Ellen it was so long ago, before we were married". JR says

"Stop JR, will I ever have a day where your sick past isn't going to haunt me".

"Sue Ellen you are not the only one, that should be mad. Marilee made out with someone else 20 minutes, after playing with JR". JR turned looking at Marilee who looked at Cliff. Afton screamed, "you Cliff, were you and JR taking turns"?.

" She came to me, he was treating her like crap. I was soothing her, she was upset". Sue Ellen ran out of the room, and Afton followed her. JR yelled, "OK now you have caused trouble come out, so we can see who you are".

"No, I'm not ready, the fun is just starting".

JR looked around, and everyone was quiet, even Marilee.

**Andy Hunter** · 10-14-2010, 01:21 AM

I love this! Great mystery. Kind of scary.

**Jessie** · 10-14-2010, 01:21 AM

Chapter 7

Sue Ellen ran upstairs, and walked into her room slamming the door. She stood looking around the room, but was afraid to be alone. She started to cry, when she heard her door open. Afton walked in, and shut the door. "Sue Ellen we can't let Marilee keep us from our men. She will go after them, we have to show her she isn't going to win this time".

"I hate it here Afton, I'm so afraid, that person wants to hurt us".

"I think it is revenge, but they are scaring us, no one is going to get hurt".

They heard a bang against the wall, Sue Ellen grabbed Afton. They both were scared they couldn't move. Sue Ellen whispered, "lets go find JR, and Cliff". Sue Ellen opened the door, and her and Afton scream. JR and the others heard the scream, they ran upstairs, running to their room. They stood seeing Sue Ellen and Afton shaking holding each other . JR walked over, touching Sue Ellen, "Are you ok Sue Ellen"? She hugged JR, "OMG JR please get us off this island".

"What happened Sue Ellen"?

"There was someone all in black, they ran down the hall".

"Did they hurt you Sue Ellen"?

"No", Cliff walked over hugging Afton. Marilee laughed,"OMG are you two pathetic or what, you have to do this to get your man"?

Sue Ellen ran at Marilee, and JR and Bobby pulled her back. "I hate you Marilee, how dare you"?

JR touched Sue Ellen's face, "Lets go outside, and go for a walk. I think this place is creeping everyone out".

" Someone was outside my door, me and Afton both saw him JR".

' I know, but your freaking out, lets go get some air". Sue Ellen hugged JR, and he walked her downstairs. Cliff and Afton walked to their room, and Bobby and Pam went to theirs. Everyone else went downstairs, leaving Marilee all alone, upset and angry with everyone.

JR walked outside, he was taking Sue Ellen down by the water. They were talking and went over to the rock, and sat down. JR touched her face, "I'm so sorry, Sue Ellen, I didn't know this was going to happen"?

"What happened that weekend JR, did you guys hurt someone"?

" I didn't I swear, I don't know who is doing this"?

"How come she knows everything about you"?

" I don't know, please believe me Sue Ellen, I'm not lying". Sue Ellen leaned into JR , they were just relaxing enjoying the quiet. They jump when they heard a scream, and banging, it sounded like someone was chopping wood or something up. Sue Ellen was frantic, JR wanted to go back up to the house. He was afraid, maybe someone was planning on hurting them. They heard the banging get closer, and JR started to pull Sue Ellen running up to to the mansion. Sue Ellen fell crying she hurt her knees, she couldn't breath. He got her up, and they went inside, and he took her upstairs, knocking on Bobby and Pam's door. Bobby answered, and JR walked in, "What is going on, I don't remember anything bad happening that night we were here? I know I slept with Marilee, but that can't be why I'm here, what do you remember Bobby"?

Bobby stared at JR, he wanted to forget that night, He shook his head, "I don't remember anything bad JR". Sue Ellen hugged Pam, "Oh I'm scared, someone was outside scaring us". Pam looked at Bobby, and they vowed they would stay together tonight, nothing could happen, if they didn't separate.

**Andy Hunter** · 10-14-2010, 01:37 AM

I'm really enjoying this!

**Laustsen** · 10-14-2010, 09:34 AM

Can't wait to find out who it is. Great update

**jrs** · 10-14-2010, 07:18 PM

keep going...this is exciting

**MrsSuperman93** · 10-14-2010, 07:24 PM

Ooohhh, LOVE it!

**Jessie** · 10-14-2010, 07:38 PM

Chapter 8

Sue Ellen and Pam were laying on the bed, they fell asleep. JR and Bobby were sitting in the chairs, both wondering, what would happen next, in this house? Bobby finally spoke, "JR I told you this was a mistake, what are we going to do now?

" I don't understand why this is happening. I know that night was wild, but nothing happened"? JR looked at Bobby, he was pale, and JR suddenly got scared. "What happened Bobby, did something happen that night"?

" Nothing JR, just shut up please". They both jump, when they hear Afton yelling in the hall. They were surprised Sue Ellen and Pam didn't wake up. They walked to the door, and went out in the hall, and shut the door. They walked to Cliff and Afton's room, and knocked on the door. They waited a few moments finally Afton opened the door, she was crying.

Bobby walked over, "Afton what is wrong"?

" Cliff he won't talk to me, and he walked out, and said he was tired of listening to me".

"He left you alone"?

"Yes, JR he probably is with Marilee, I'm surprised your not with her too. What does she have that all you men find so fascinating"?

"Afton, I'm not answering your question, come stay in the room with us, Bobby can go look for Cliff".

"Me, JR alone"?

"Oh Bobby don't be a baby, go find him". Afton smiled, "Bobby isn't a baby, you are JR, why should he go alone? We all should go together, I'm sure he will be in Marilee's room, and than I will kill him".

JR glares at Afton, "Fine lets get you to my room, and than me and Bobby will go find Cliff. Maybe the weirdo that is scaring us, has him and he will be the first victim".

"Shut up JR that is awful", Afton smacked him, and Bobby laughed, "Enough, Afton you just said you were going to kill him. He says something the same, and you slap him. Enough, lets go to the room, and stop this fighting, this isn't helping anyone".

"Can I slap her back", JR laughs, and Bobby turns, "JR don't be stupid". They got to the room, and open the door, JR and Bobby both stood staring. Afton walked into the room, "where is Pam and Sue Ellen"?

" OMG Bobby why did we leave them, where are they"?

"I don't know but they have to be close". Bobby looked in the bathroom, and the balcony, he was starting to panic. "JR this is crazy, where are they, I have had enough"?. Afton whispers, "Guys do you hear that, music is playing somewhere"? Bobby , JR , and Afton walked out of the room, and listened to hear where the music was coming from? They shut the bedroom door, and were walking toward the music. They were about to go around the corner, when they scream, they bumped into Pam and Sue Ellen. Afton laughed, "OMG you screamed louder than Pam and Sue Ellen, you both are terrified, where is Mommy JR"?

"Shut up Afton, Sue Ellen where were you"?

"You left us JR, how dare you leave us alone in this place".

"We heard mouth here screaming we went to check on her, Cliff is missing"?

"Cliff , OMG Bobby find him", Pam yells

"We are trying to find him, but we had to look for you both first".

They hear banging coming from downstairs. JR looked at Bobby , "what is going on, that sounds like someone chopping wood or a body up"? Afton screamed , "JR you are a jerk, what if someone is hurting Cliff"? Pam went running down the stairs, and Bobby chased after her. JR turned, "Afton , Sue Ellen go to our room, I will follow them". JR ran downstairs, and Sue Ellen and Afton stood in shock, but they both scream when someone walked up behind them.

**Andy Hunter** · 10-14-2010, 09:46 PM

This is getting interesting! Whose behind Sue Ellen and Afton? Can't wait to read more.

**Laustsen** · 10-15-2010, 06:49 PM

This is great

**MrsSuperman93** · 10-15-2010, 06:51 PM

It will probably be Cliff Right?

**Marmara** · 10-15-2010, 06:56 PM

It seems Bobby is the only one who knows what happened that night and has got a clue, but it was so horrible he doesn't want to talk about it. Ten little Indians, maybe there is only nine left now.