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A invitation they wont ever forget
This is going to be a different story, hope you like it.
JR was at the office, he was talking to Sly when Bobby came out of his office. The elevator opened, and a man came out with 2 envelopes. He asked for Bobby, and JR Ewing, they said who they were. The man handed them the Gold sealed letter, and smiled, and walked out. Bobby and JR were surprised, and they went to Bobby's office shutting the door. Bobby and JR opened the envelope, and they both look at each other. "JR who would send this invitation"?
"I don't know but I'm going, and bringing Sue Ellen".
"Really your going, without knowing who is asking you"?
"It is someone we know Bobby, probably Marilee or Jordan".
"Sounds fun up on the lake we take a ferry boat over. It won't bring us back until sunday. We will be stuck there all weekend JR".
"Bobby you remember that place, and you remember all the places, you and Pam can have fun".
"Yeah, but that place has some bad memories too".
"Oh come on that summer was fun, lets go what do you say"?
"Ok lets go home, and tell Sue Ellen and Pam. We leave tomorrow, we have to ask Ma Ma and Clayton, if they want to watch the kids".
JR grabbed his coat, and smiled, "lets go maybe we can fool around with them before dinner".
Bobby laughed, "You are something JR, but it sounds like a plan". They both left saying goodbye to Phyllis and Sly. They drove home hoping Sue Ellen and Pam would love the weekend away.
Across town Marilee, Jordan and Vaughn, all were at the office. They were handed 3 gold sealed envelopes, and they got the exact same message as JR and Bobby. Marilee smiled, " Boys are you going to this surprise party"?
"Sure, I bet it is JR, I will love partying on his dime". Marilee laughed, "lets go, it probably is JR". They all went back to work, but they all were excited wondering what JR had planned?
Cliff was leaving his office, when a man walked in, asking for him. The man handed him a gold envelope, and left. Cliff opened it, and smiled, "OMG who would do this"? He didn't care, he was going, he ran out going home to Afton.
Ray was driving up to his house in his truck. He jumped out of the car, and yelled, "can I help you"?
"Are you Ray Krebbs"?
"Yes, why I'm not interested in buying anything".
"I'm not selling anything, this is for you". He handed Ray the envelope, and got in his car driving away. Ray opened the envelope, and was confused, but smiled, " Oh it is Bobby I know it he is having a surprise Anniversary party for me and Donna". He went into the house, and grabbed a beer sitting down. He could use a nice weekend away, he couldn't wait for Donna to come home.
Valene and Gary arrived home, and a man got out of his car. "Hello Gary Ewing".
"Yes, can I help you"?
"This is for you", he handed him a envelope, and smiled, and got in his car. Valene and Gary opened the envelope surprised by the invitation. Gary smiled, "This has to be Bobby or Clayton doing something for Ma Ma."
"Are you going to go Gary"?
"Why not, I haven't seen the family in so long"?
Valene smiled, but something about this made her uneasy.
"A few more people received the envelope, 10 men and 2 women, and their spouses. This was a weekend they all were never going to forget.
Good start, and a little mystery
A invitation they wont ever forget
JR and Bobby got home, and went inside the house. They found Miss Ellie and Clayton in the living room. They walk in, "Hi Ma Ma , Clayton where is Sue Ellen and Pam"?
"Upstairs, Pam wanted to take a shower, and Sue Ellen went up to read"
JR smiled, "Can we ask you both a favor"?
"Sure what is up"? Clayton says
'Well we got this invite for a weekend of fun. I'm sure it is the Cartel doing this, but can you watch the kids if we take Sue Ellen and Pam"?
"You don't know who gave you the invitation, that doesn't worry you"?
"Nah, it is someone we know, beside what can happen with us all there"?
Miss Ellie smiled, "Go tell the girls they are going away, of course we will watch them. The boys and us can have a movie night, we can watch some scary movies. We can't normally because of JR, he is a chicken" Clayton laughs
"I'm not chicken, I don't like that kind of Trash". He leaves and Bobby follows him, to go see Pam and Sue Ellen.
Bobby went into the bedroom, he hears the water turn off, and Pam comes out wearing a towel only. Pam smiled, "Bobby your home, perfect timing". She walked over hugging him, and Bobby sat her down. " I got something to ask you, I got this invite for a weekend of fun. I don't know who sent it, but JR and Sue Ellen are invited too. Will you come with me Pam, I want to go for it"?
Pam smiled, "This is strange but sure, but what about Christopher"?
"Ma Ma and Clayton are going to watch the boys. We leave tomorrow morning at 7am , we get a ferry over to the island at 9am."
'A island, that sounds fun".
"Oh it is fun there, and there sure is a lot we can do". Pam pushed Bobby back, and laid over him, bringing her lips to his.
JR walked into his room, and saw Sue Ellen asleep holding her book. He walked over, she was stunning, she was a beauty. He sat down, touching her face, making her jump.
"OMG JR you startled me".
"Sorry, that book must be boring".
"No, it is good but I was really tired, and fell asleep"
JR pulled out the invitation and handed it to Sue Ellen. She opened it , and read it, and smiled, "are you going"?
"Yes, with you, Ma Ma is going to watch the boys".
"JR who sent this, I don't know"?
"Probably Jordan Lee, please come it is beautiful there".
"How would you know JR, your were there"?
"Yeah many years ago, but that doesn't matter. We have to leave tomorrow at 7am, to get to the ferry. It takes us over at 9am, and picks us up at 4pm on Sunday".
"OMG we can't leave if we want"?
"No, unless you want to swim but it would be to far".
Sue Ellen looked at the invite, she had a bad feeling but smiled, "If you think it will be ok, I will go". JR hugged her, and brought his lips to hers, laying her back making love.
Ray was glad when Donna got home, he ran to the car. "Donna I have been waiting for you"
"Oh no what is wrong"?
Ray showed Donna the invite, and she smiled, " It doesn't say who is inviting you, and your guest"?
"I know, but I want to go, it probably is something for us"
"The Family is going to surprise us, for our anniversary". Donna hugged Ray, and whispered, " I guess we better go than". They walked into the house.
Cliff ran in the house screaming for Afton, who ran downstairs. "OMG Cliff what is wrong with you"?
"Look Afton, this was delivered today to my office". Afton opened the envelope, and smiled, "your going to this"?
"Yes, I'm going so are you, we leave tomorrow Afton"
Afton smiled, "Oh what the heck, lets go". She hugged Cliff.
Everything was set in motion, they all were going, but was it going to be a weekend they would ever get over?
Last edited by Jessie; 10-10-2010 at 06:50 PM.
ah bless..poor JR ...wee scaredy cat
Originally Posted by Jessie
excellent a scared JR is a vulnerable JR...needs SE to comfort him....ahem
Originally Posted by Jessie
Really great. A blast from the past, is bringing them together
Ohh I love this mystery! Great start
A Invitation they wont ever forget
JR, Sue Ellen, Bobby and Pam left Southfork in a limo. They were talking all laughing wondering what this weekend really was all about?
Cliff and Afton arrived by taxi, and were waiting for the ferry. Afton looked at her watch, "another 1/2hour Cliff".
"Yeah no one is here yet". They were talking holding hands, when a limo stopped, and Cliff laughed, "OMG a limo Afton".
"Yeah you could have ordered one for us"
"Why a cab ride is fine, why waste money"? Afton kissed Cliff, "Oh I love you Cliff but you are cheap sometimes".
"Whatever". They see Marilee, Jordan, and Vaughn get out, and Afton smiles, "Oh great Marilee Stone, I will have to watch you all weekend". Cliff laughed, "Yeah you will , she thinks I'm adorable".
"Well your mine, I will drown her Cliff". Marilee, Jordan and Vaughn walked over, "You were invited Cliff"?
"No we are here to send you off Marilee".
"Ha Ha Cliff you are hilarious, cute but hilarious".
Cliff whispered, "Cute but other times she says I'm adorable".
Another Limo stopped, and Marilee lifted her glasses, "Oh who is in the limo"?
Bobby, Pam, Sue Ellen and JR got out. Vaughn whispered , "Oh Marilee, JR's wife is coming, too bad".
"Shut up Vaughn you can keep Sue Ellen company while me and JR play" Afton jumped up, " Why don't you get your own man witch"?
"I was joking young lady"
"Sure you were, I'm telling Sue Ellen to watch out for you".
"Do that Sweetie" Marilee walked away, and Afton yelled, "Don't call me Sweetie". Vaughn smiled at Afton, and she shook her head, he gave her the creeps.
Sue Ellen saw Marilee, and she turned, "JR I'm not spending a weekend with her, sorry".
"Yes you are, and your with me not her"
"JR she will be all over you , like a bee on honey"
"Stop it Sue Ellen " Pam and Bobby smiled, as Marilee walked over. "JR Darling, I was hoping you would be on this weekend getaway".
"He is but he isn't playing with you Marilee".
" Oh Dear are you drinking again"?
"Marilee, please don't bother Sue Ellen this weekend", JR grabbed Sue Ellen's hand ,and walked her away from Marilee.
Marilee laughed, "Oh I hate that woman, what does JR see in her"?
Pam looked at Bobby but ran over to Marilee, "stay away from JR, he is hers".
"Ok Pam back off", She walked away, and Pam almost kicked her , but Bobby grabbed her. Jordan winked at Pam, and followed Marilee.
"I don't know if I want to be with her either Bobby. I might kill her, she is the most annoying woman , I ever met".
"Forget about her, lets have fun". They saw the ferry come, and they walked over, Pam saw Cliff, and they hugged. They got on the Ferry, when Ray and Donna just made it, and so did Cindy, Alex, and Barry. JR saw Ray, and laughed, "Why are you here Ray"?
"I got a invite JR".
JR sat down, as the Ferry started, and they were on the way to the resort. JR looked at everyone, and he wondered if this wasn't a big mistake. Bobby walked over, "JR can I speak to you alone for a minute"?
"Sure Sugar, I will be right back". Bobby and JR walked over to a spot on the boat, where they could be alone.
"JR something is up , do you see who is here"?
"Yeah Bobby , what about it"?
"Think about it JR, look at the guests, this doesn't disturb you"? JR looked around, and his face was pale, " Bobby don't bring up that night, it is over, it was so many years ago. This has nothing to do with that night".
"You sure , I'm not JR"?
"Stop it, have fun Bobby". JR walked over sitting down, he didn't want to admit it, but he was having 2nd thoughts himself.
Last edited by Jessie; 10-11-2010 at 02:43 AM.
Another interesting story Jessie. I like the mystery...
A invitation they won't ever forget
They finally arrived at the island, and Bobby wasn't sure if he should go back to the main land with Pam. He decided to go against his better judgement, and that he hoped he wouldn't regret the decision. JR was nervous to, but mainly because Bobby stirred up some old memories he thought would never come to light again. Sue Ellen ran over , "JR are you coming, what are you daydreaming about"?
"Oh nothing Sugar, thinking about when I get you all alone. I'm going to ravish you with my loving".
"Oh Brother", Sue Ellen laughed, and JR chased her off the boat. They come face to face to Marilee, "Oh Sue Ellen are you acting like a teenager again, really grow up".
"Marilee stay away from me , you miserable" JR pulled Sue Ellen away before she said to much. Marilee touched JR's arm, "see you later lover". Sue Ellen gave JR a look and walked away, angry. Cliff and Afton see, and Cliff smiled, "oh Sue Ellen is going to have fun this weekend. He will be playing with Marilee, before evening comes".
"That is disgusting Cliff, I thought you liked Sue Ellen"
"I do, she would be better off with Jordan or Vaughn, than him". Afton got shivers over her body, "I'm sorry Sue Ellen hates me, but I wouldn't wish those guys on her".
JR grabbed Marilee's arm, "Stop causing trouble do you hear, go play with Jordan"
"OMG JR, like that would happen".
"It has and you know it, he told me". Marilee turned, storming over to Jordan, slapping him in the back of the head. "Did you say stuff to JR, that is personal, did you "?
Jordan couldn't even answer, Marilee was yelling at him. Everyone was laughing, feeling sorry for Jordan, when someone walked up, and introduced themselves to everyone.
"Hello I'm Nina, I'm going to take you all up to the main house. I will take you around the grounds later to show you some of the other wonderful spots you can enjoy". They all followed behind Nina, but Pam and Sue Ellen were trying not to laugh. Sue Ellen whispered, "this feels like that movie "Ten little Indians"where everyone gets killed one my one. I hope we get a vote on who goes first". Pam laughed, "Stop it Sue Ellen that isn't funny, but I'm getting the creeps too."
They arrive at the house, Bobby froze seeing the house. He felt cold inside, he was pushed in to the house by JR. "Stop it Bobby , enjoy yourself, don't ruin the fun".
"JR mark my words, this isn't going to be fun".
Pam turned, "What Bobby why not"?
"Oh Marilee she is going to ruin the weekend, I'm sure".
'Not if JR sticks with his wife it won't be".
JR glared at Pam, " I will stick to my wife, all weekend Pam".
"Oh Grow up JR".
"Now Now everyone, can we get along, this is a weekend, you all will remember", Nina says . The guest of Honor will appear soon, it is a surprise, you all will enjoy I'm sure. Lets go up to our rooms, and get settled". She was walking up the stairs, while the rest followed. Sue Ellen couldn't believe how massive the place was. Nina stopped at the first room, pulling out her book. "Oh this is Bobby and his Wife's room". Pam smiled, and walked inside with Bobby, and Nina shut the door, after telling them to enjoy themselves. She moved down the hall , and pointed to the next room, telling JR and his wife to go in. She shut the door, moving down the hall, the next room went to Cliff and Afton. The next was Ray and Donna, then Marilee and the rest were given single rooms.
Nina walked to the other side of the house opening the door to the den. She walked in, " Hi, they all are here, your plan is in motion".
"Yes it is, maybe, I will let them have tonight to enjoy themselves. Tomorrow the fun will really begin", Nina smiled, but she was happy she wasn't the one who crossed her Boss.
Thank you everyone, glad you love my story.. It is a fun one to write, it gets spooky starting now..
Hmm...who is the mystery man (or woman)???