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To be honest Kelly its my least favorite of your MR poems
but its not Awful
I really like it
its just not my favorite
I hate it . The contest is that I'm supposed to make it clear what movie it's about without actually saying anything to do with the movie. I like certain parts of it, but not the thing as a whole. I hate writing non-rhyming and I prefer to write in triplets, both of which are not popular in poetry. I didn't enter it in the contest yet cuz I wanted to write a few more first.
I wish I hadn't already posted my Fur one or my Cold Mountain one of my Darkness Wins MR one.
I'm changing the second line in the last section to be "And lets herself fall"
just thought I would add that I just won a contest with this one.
I also tied for second with La Nuit and third with The Fall.