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Bobby's Search
Hey all I have been reading all your wonderful fanfics and decided to try on of my own. It is based around the time of pam's disappearance.
Part 1:
After Pam’s Accident –Southfork
Bobby was sitting outside thinking to about Pam and what had gone on in the past couple of days. He thought about how everything was finally going there way. Pam was able to get pregnant to full term and they were ecstatic about this but they had their happiness all taken away when Pam wrecked into a tanker. After a few minutes of thinking to himself he saw Miss Ellie come outside.
B: Hi Mamma
E: Hi Bobby shouldn’t you be at the hospital with Pam?
B: The doctor said Pam should have sometime to herself after seeing herself in the mirror for the first time after the accident.
E: I would think Pam would want you there
B: Maybe she would Mama but the doctor thought if she saw a reaction in my eyes I would make it worse than it is for her.
E: Well I think that you love Pam enough to stick by her no matter what
B: You’re right Mama; I’m going to go to the hospital to see my wife.
E: Bye Bobby, just remember no matter to be there for Pam no matter what.
B: I will Mama, see ya later
Dallas Memorial Hospital
Bobby was on his way up to Pam’s room when he ran into Pam’s security guard. Bobby said what the hell are you doing down here? I’m sorry Mr. Ewing I stepped out for one moment and she was gone.
Bobby ran up to Pam’s room to find her hospital bed empty. The doctor came in and said I’m sorry Mr. Ewing but she is gone.
TO BE CONTINUED
Last edited by Dallas_fan_swan_song; 06-05-2007 at 03:33 AM.
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This is a great start--I look forward to reading more from you
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Hello Dallas_fan_Swan_Song,
I just wanted to say welcome to the world of writing fanfics. This is a very good start and I look forward to more, lots more.
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Nice start.
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Hi DFSS! Nice start. I hope Bobby searches high and low for Pam!!!
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Thanks for all the comments. Don't worry maria he is going to search everywhere for Pam
Here is the next update.
Part 2:
Dallas Memorial Hospital
Bobby looks at the Dr. Matland and said you mean dead? No, Mr. Ewing she is not dead just disappeared from the hospital almost like she vanished out of thin air. Bobby said I would like to talk to all the doctors and nurses that were in and out Pam’s room to see if they say anything out of the ordinary. Dr. Matland said Absolutely Mr. Ewing.
Bobby spent most of the day talking to all the nurses and doctors that treated Pam but had no luck in any of them seeing anything out of the ordinary going on before Pam’s disappearance. Bobby was just about ready to give up when Dr. Matland came in and told Bobby that he found out Nurse Johnson was the nurse that treated Pam regularly and might know something. Bobby said Thank you and left to go tell Cliff what happened before he questioned Nurse Johnson.
Cliff’s House
Cliff hears a knock on the door and was surprised to see Bobby at his front doorstep. Cliff said what are you doing her Bob I was just getting ready to go see Pam? I have something to tell you Cliff. Pam has disappeared from the hospital and is nowhere to be found. How could this happen? Cliff said. I don’t know but I am going to talk to a Nurse Johnson and find out more. Would you like to come? Of Course Bobby, Cliff said. Cliff grabs a jacket and then they head out to Nurse Johnson’s house.
Nurse Johnson’s House
Bobby knocks on the door and Mrs. Johnson comes to the door. Nurse Johnson asks what she can do for Bobby and Cliff. Bobby said could you answer a couple of questions for us Mrs. Johnson? Of course Mr. Ewing Mrs. Johnson said. Bobby asks Nurse Johnson if she knew anything about Pam’s disappearance she said yes to his surprise. Nurse Johnson told Bobby and Cliff that Pam wanted her to help her and knew of the airplane that took her. It was a Wentworth plane. Cliff said Katherine must be behind all of this.
Cliff and Bobby told Mrs. Johnson thank you for her time and left. On the way Bobby told Cliff that he was going to go to the airport Mrs. Johnson told him of and ask them some questions. Cliff said ok Bobby I’ll go with you. Bobby said No Cliff, I need to do this alone. I am taking you back to Southfork so you can spend time with Christopher and keep him busy so he doesn’t ask too much about his mom until I get home. Cliff said Ok Bobby and they headed off to Southfork.
TO BE CONTINUED
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Might I request longer entries please?
Bravo!
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Great update!
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I will keep that in mind maria
BTW NewestEwing I promise there will be some longer entries I am just kind of writing the story as I go but I promise once I figure out the direction I am going they will get longer.
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Originally Posted by
Dallas_fan_swan_song
I will keep that in mind maria

BTW NewestEwing I promise there will be some longer entries I am just kind of writing the story as I go but I promise once I figure out the direction I am going they will get longer.
Understood.
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excellent start, I cant wait to read more.
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Originally Posted by
maria
THANKS DFSS!!! Not only do I want him to search high and low, I want him to find her, I want them to be together, I want them to have another baby, I want...Oh um, I forgot it's your story

(But that's really what I want

)
Great update....
LMAO....I think there's a writer lurking beneath your skin just itching to get out maria.
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Hey PR and maria I will try to have the next update up tomorrow or friday going to write it tonight.
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