That was absolutely awesome but such a sad ending still JR/SE can't last forever or maybe they can. True love waits forever even for eternity. Great work![]()
That was absolutely awesome but such a sad ending still JR/SE can't last forever or maybe they can. True love waits forever even for eternity. Great work![]()
This was so beautifulNow, I'm gonna have to eat all teary eye from the ending but wonderfully ended. Love it.
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I was so sad that you ended your story SE....i loved this one so much..and the end was really sad but you ended it beautifully.......you are such a good writer....



AMAZING!!! really nice.. You did a great job.. and I must say thank you because I really enjoy this one..![]()

SE, thank you so much for writing this!
You are an excellent writer that´s for sure!!!!![]()
I admit I had tears in my eyes.
That´s the way DALLAS should´ve ended. Well, maybe not 25 years later but 40 years later...
Once again - THANK YOU!!!![]()
...now I´m going to dry my eyes and read your story again...![]()
I'm sad to see this story end tobut I guess it couldn't last forever
Thanks for all the feedback, everyone! I really enjoyed writing this. As a matter of fact, I was emotionally attached to it...lol I appreciate you guys reading it. This forum has really been rockin' as of late...
Right now, all I can say is "WOW!" I am at a loss for words. (And Y'all know I can say a lot). This is a very good story. Very involving. I started reading it late last night and I just finished it. You are very gifted. Don't throw that talent away.


Oh, that made me cry....Excellent story, though!



I thought i would bump this back over to the front page so the new members could see it.It's one of the best fics on the board!!!!!


Right on....this is one of my favorite fics.
I've read this story three times and enjoyed it each time. Fabulous writing and fabulous story!
"I generally avoid temptation unless I can't resist it."
"I'll try anything once, twice if I like it, three times to make sure."
Mae West
Hi Robin,
Just some feedback, I just spent the past two nights reading this story and you wrote it so well.
I love how you captured different aspects of JR & Sue Ellen. Their bickering and mind games but also deep feelings and the way they did love each other even when they wouldn't want to admit it. I don't know how you managed to write a story that could be both sensual and sad at once. The ending was definitely sad. Especially now when some 20 years have already passed. I guess in a way there is never any happy endings as somebody always dies first...
Also reading this story made me realize I miss Bobby & April. I wish they'd never killed her. She and Bobby should have stayed married and had kids. I loved how they were in your story and how April and Sue Ellen were friends.
I also enjoyed the plot twists as I never knew what new obstacle you would throw into the story to keep JR/SE arguing and making up. It was great that JR finally learnt to respect Sue Ellen. I like how she was stronger in your story and more independent. In a way you are right JR/SE are somewhat alike.
Over all I really enjoyed your writing. Just wanted to let you know that,
Take care,
Love:
Karin
x
diva20 (08-09-2012)
Bumpity bump bump bump. Loved reading this.
I read this again and I loved it as usual. The ending was perfect, this is how JR's death should be treated on the new show.
"I generally avoid temptation unless I can't resist it."
"I'll try anything once, twice if I like it, three times to make sure."
Mae West
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