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dms22473
09-07-2004, 06:07 AM
This is a new fanfic, which I have no business starting considering my other two aren’t finished, but I can’t get this out of my head. I'm not sure of the title, so if anyone has any ideas, let me know.

This is set in 1989. Sue Ellen and Nick are together. Sue Ellen left JR and got custody of John Ross. Valentine Lingerie is very successful. JR is running JRE and head of West Star, but he never slept with Kimberly. He did make her think he was going to just so he could get what he wanted, so he used her. He wants Sue Ellen back, but she doesn’t know it. Sue Ellen knows JR didn’t sleep with Kimberly because Kimberly told her why JR did what he did. JR doesn’t know that she knows. He thinks if he can get her alone, he’ll be able to explain everyting.

JR is at the Oil Baron’s Club, drinking at the bar. He’s had a few, when Sue Ellen and Nick come in for dinner. JR stares at her. She is in a cream colored skirt that falls just above her knee. She is wearing a maroon blouse with a jacket that matches the skirt, with maroon heels.

“Christ she is beautiful. You really screwed up this time Ewing.”

Every time i think of you
I realize exactly what's been missing
How could I've been so blind
and such a fool never to have listened.
When we were together then
I never thought about how much I loved you.
So now I sit here all alone
longing for a moment just to touch you
But girl I'm not through loving you let.

“Why did I push her into that idiot’s arms? I knew he had a crush on her, so he was just waiting for an opportunity and I gave it to him. It won’t last. I’ll make sure of that.”

Your love has got me in a cold sweat
(So cold so cold... cold sweat)
Cold Sweat
Your loves so good I'll never forget.

Sue Ellen catches JR’s eyes and her heart immediately starts beating faster. “Christ, when will that ever stop? I can’t believe I’m still that attracted to him after everything we’ve done to each other. It was insane. Thank God I’ve been able to avoid being alone with him.”

Nothing ever seems the same
when you're alone and all you've got in memories (memories of you each and every hour)
I remember all the cards and all those little letters you would to send me.
My friends all say it's such a shame that you and I ever had to fall apart.
The things we do (just us two) I can't do alone here with my lonely heart.

JR holds Sue Ellen’s gaze. He hardens instantly. “Jesus, I want her. I can see she wants me too. If I could just explain everything? I just needed some time alone with her, where she can’t run away from me.”

And there are times when I feel especially sad,
its when i think about all the things that we had.
The special time we had when we were together,
you know I wish it would last forever.

Sue Ellen looks away when Nick calls her name. “Let’s dance before our dinner comes.”

Nick stands up and takes Sue Ellen’s hand. They move to the dance floor and he puts his arms around her waist. He hands go around his shoulders and slide down to his mid-back. JR’s face hardens with anger. He can’t stand to see another man’s hands on Sue Ellen.

Your love has got me in a cold sweat (So cold so cold... cold cold sweat)
Cold Sweat Your loves so good I'll never forget.

Nick pulls Sue Ellen closer breathing in her scent. “You smell so good. I love you, Sue Ellen.”

Sue Ellen smiles at him. “Me too.” They sway to the music.

It's over and done
but the heartache lives on inside
And who's the one you're clinging to
instead of me tonight?

JR catches her eye again and smiles at her sadly. Sue Ellen’s heart breaks at his sad smile, but another part of her is still angry.

And where are you now, now that I need you?
Tears on my pillow wherever you go
I'll cry me a river that leads to your ocean
You never see me fall apart

Sue Ellen holds on to Nick, trying to forget how much she wants to be in JR’s arms. She cares about Nck, but it wasn’t the same.

In the words of a broken heart
It's just emotion that's taken me over
Caught up in sorrow, lost in my soul
But if you don't come back
Come home to me, darling
Dont you know there's nobody left in this world
to hold me tight
Dont cha know there's nobody left in this world
to kiss goodnight
Goodnight, goodnight

I'm there at your side,
I'm part of all the things you are
But you've got a part of someone else
You've got to find your shining star

JR orders another drink. Sue Ellen watches him, wishing things could have been different.

And where are you now, now that I need you?
Tears on my pillow wherever you go
I'll cry me a river that leads to your ocean
You never see me fall apart

In the words of a broken heart
It's just emotion that's taken me over
Caught up in sorrow, lost in my soul
But if you don't come back
Come home to me, darling
Dont you know there's nobody left in this world
to hold me tight
Nobody left in this world to kiss goodnight
Goodnight, goodnight

Sue Ellen tightens her hold on Nick, trying to forget. But every time she closes her eyes she sees JR. JR stands up and walks to the door, but pauses as he turns around. Sue Ellen catches his eye one more time. He waves to her and puts his hat on.

And where are you now, now that I need you?
Tears on my pillow wherever you go
I'll cry me a river that leads to your ocean
You never see me fall apart

In the words of a broken heart
It's just emotion that's taken me over
Caught up in sorrow, lost in my soul
But if you don't come back
Come home to me, darling
Nobody left in this world
to hold me tight
Nobody left in this world to kiss goodnight
Goodnight, goodnight

<span class="ev_code_RED">As always, please leave feedback. Let me know if you like it.</span> http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

dude
09-07-2004, 06:56 AM
No suggestions for title or anything --I'm just a fan of the fanfic and I like the idea that ideas are roaming free ---always room for one more I think--you just really capture all that gray area type stuff--capturing that much of the spectrum is a rare quality --I can read this for days

dms22473
09-07-2004, 07:00 AM
Thanks Dude. I'm glad you like my fic. There are so many great stories on here.

virty
09-07-2004, 08:50 AM
Your story is really brilliant. I like it so much.. You are very good...Keep doing it.

dms22473
09-07-2004, 09:28 AM
CHAPTER 2

JR is sitting in his office staring at a picture of him and Sue Ellen that he still keeps on his desk. They were so happy in it. JR knows it can be like that again, if she would give him a chance. He leans back and lets his mind wander back to a time when they were happy.

<span class="ev_code_blue"> Flashback: </span>

JR walked up the steps to the condo complex.. Hopefully Sue Ellen was already there. He missed her and called her to see if she was free for lunch. She said she was and he suggested the condo. He knew they wouldn’t be eating much food. His need for her lately was insatiable. No matter how many times he made love to her, it was like the first time every time. He got onto the elevator. She was sexier to him now then she’d ever been, and that was saying a lot. He cursed the slow elevator. He couldn’t wait to have her legs wrapped around him. He opened the door and called out her name. “Sue Ellen?”

Sue Ellen: “In the bedroom.”

JR walked into the bedroom, discarding his clothes as he went. He got to the door and stopped in his tracks. She was lying in the bed, naked. Her legs and back were exposed to him. The silk sheet covered her body strategically. He smiled at her and finished removing his clothes. He ripped the sheet from her and started a slow crawl up towards her.

We got the afternoon
You got this room for two
One thing I've left to do
Discover me
Discovering you

He slowly kissed his way up her body, causing her to moan out loud. “I missed you.”

JR smiles as he continues his way up. “I missed you too honey.” He pauses at her lips. “I love you,” and he claims her lips in a passionate clinch.

One mile to every inch of
Your skin like porcelain
One pair of candy lips and
Your bubblegum tongue

JR stretched his body out on top of Sue Ellen’s as he continued to kiss her. He spread her legs with a sweep of his foot and entered her quickly. “Damn, you feel good. I swear every time feels like the first. How do you manage to do that?” He thrusts into her at a steady pace.

'Cause if you want love
We'll make it
Swimming a deep sea
Of blankets
Take all your big plans
And break 'em
This is bound to be a while
Your body Is a wonderland
Your body is a wonder (I'll use my hands)
Your body Is a wonderland

Sue Ellen smiles at him. “Guess we’re just lucky.” She kisses him on his mouth and sucks on his tongue, causing JR to moan loudly. He pulls back and looks at her. He pushes a strand of hair away from her face and kisses her forehead. He places kisses on her face, neck and collarbone.

Something 'bout the way the hair falls in your face
I love the shape you take when crawling towards the pillowcase
You tell me where to go and
Though I might leave to find it
I'll never let your head hit the bed
Without my hand behind it
you want love?
We'll make it
Swimming a deep sea
Of blankets
Take all your big plans
And break 'em
This is bound to be a while

JR continues making love to his wife. JR stares into her eyes for a few moments and is overwhelmed by the love reflecting back. “Thank you for loving me. I don’t know what I ever did to deserve it, but thank you.”
Sue Ellen kisses him and JR shifts his weight a little causing her to cry out.

Your body Is a wonderland
Your body is a wonder (I'll use my hands)
Your body Is a wonderland
Damn baby
You frustrate me
I know you're mine all mine all mine
But you look so good it hurts sometimes

JR takes Sue Ellen and himself over the edge into blissful release. He stays in her for a few minutes and kisses her lips lovingly. He lies beside her and pulls her into his arms.

Your body Is a wonderland
Your body is a wonder (I'll use my hands)
Your body Is a wonderland
Your body is a wonderland

JR smiles at her and kisses the top of her head. “I love you honey. Probably more than you’ll ever know.”

Sue Ellen snuggles into him. “I love you too, JR.”

<span class="ev_code_blue"> End flashback </span>

JR is shaken from his daydream by Sly buzzing him. “Yeah Sly?”

S: “Sue Ellen is here to see you.”

JR’s face lights up. “Well send her in.” He gets up to meet her at the door. Sue Ellen comes in and JR smiles. “Hello Darlin’.”

Sue Ellen looks at him as he tries to hug her. “Please don’t call me that.”

JR looks puzzled. “Why not?”

Sue Ellen: “Because you still use it in that greeting my wife tone. And I’m not your wife anymore.”

JR whispers softly and sadly, “I know.”

Sue Ellen sits in the chair in front of his desk and he sits next to her. “I have to go to Miami on business for a few days, and I was hoping you could watch John Ross for me.”

JR: “Sure. That’s no problem. You and Nick planning some more openings in Miami?”

Sue Ellen: “Nick isn’t going. I have a few stores there I need to check on.” She is quiet for a moment. “I saw you last night at the bar.” JR doesn’t say anything. “Was something wrong?”

JR: “Other than seeing you with Nick? No nothing was wrong.”

Sue Ellen closes her eyes for a moment. When she opens them she is staring directly into JR’s blue ones. Her breath catches in her throat. They are both mesmerized and neither says anything. JR moves slowly towards her and Sue Ellen finds herself moving forward to meet him. JR puts his hand up to her facing lovingly caressing her cheek. He pulls her face towards his. Just as he’s about to kiss her, his phone rings, breaking her out of her trance. She stands up, “I’ll drop him off tomorrow evening. My flight leaves at 7:00 pm. Thanks for watching him.” He watches her walk out the door, cursing whoever was on the other end of the phone.

J.R. Brewing
09-07-2004, 12:56 PM
Okay, here I am in the middle of Hurricane Francis in the mountain cabin we rented and it is raining cats and dogs and you want to KILL ME with this NOW? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif SLACK. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif I NEED SLACK. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Nikie
09-07-2004, 01:10 PM
I'm liking it but like JRB said do you have to kill us like that!!!

dms22473
09-07-2004, 02:31 PM
Now JRB & Nik, you know I'm a JR/SE fan. It will get better.

BTW JRB, I hope you stay safe. You had to go on vacation in the middle of hurricane????? http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-07-2004, 02:55 PM
I know it will be to my liking-I trust-but it's not any fun not being over dramatic.

I didn't plan for the hurricane--trouble just follows me around. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

No problem being safe unless I fall down the mountain-like I fell on the deck-SPLAT-busted my rear-no lasting effects-not even to my pride-no one else was here to see it--you know the old tree in the forest saying. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-07-2004, 03:48 PM
ROFLMAO

JRB, I'm glad I didn't see you fall, cause I laugh my a$$ off my I see people fall. Even when I fall, I laugh.

I'm glad you didn't break your a$$ though, cause that hurts. Trying pulling a muscle in that spot. Talk about pain.

J.R. Brewing
09-07-2004, 03:54 PM
You really would've been laughing too, cause I almost fell three times prior--I think I pulled a groin muscle once. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-07-2004, 04:33 PM
CHAPTER 3

Sue Ellen and Nick drop John Ross off at South Fork and ride to the airport in the limo. JR has managed to get himself onto Sue Ellen’s private plane and watches her from the window. She steps out of the limo, as does Nick. JR panics for a second, but calms down as he sees he is just kissing her goodbye. JR thinks he’s going to be sick as he watches with morbid fascination.

Nick backs Sue Ellen up against the limo, as his hands go around her waist. “I’m gonna miss you gorgeous. Call me as soon as you land in Miami, ok?”

Sue Ellen smiles at him. “I will sweetheart. Thank you for understanding why I want John Ross at South Fork.”

Nick: “It’s ok. He’ll have a better time there anyway with Christopher. Now give me kiss lady. It better be a good one cause it has to be enough for 5 whole days.” He moves in slowly as her hands go around his neck. His lips capture hers in a passionate lip lock. Nick’s tongue pushes its way into Sue Ellen’s mouth and she almost pulls back. He pulls away and smiles, “Be safe. I love you.”

Sue Ellen smiles at him. “Me too. I’ll call you when I land.” She grabs her briefcase and walk onto the plane. Not looking back.

The plane has been up in the air for about 30 minutes. Sue Ellen can’t concentrate on the work she brought so she closes her briefcase. She leans back in the plush chair and stares out the window. Jesus, she couldn’t get JR out of her mind. Yesterday was just crazy. If that phone hadn’t rung….her thoughts go to an evening in JR’s office when they were happy.

<span class="ev_code_blue"> FLASHBACK </span>

Sue Ellen was waiting for JR to get off the phone so they could go. They had theatre tickets, even though she didn’t really want to go. She locked the door and went to stand in front of his desk. She unzipped her dress slowly and let it drop to the floor. JR’s eyebrows raised and she had caught his eye and knew that unmistakable look of pure lust. He had quickly ended his phone call.

When I think about how much I'm loving you
No limitations, no set of regimented rules
I'm amazed how much this love has touched my life
And the commitment that we share is a welcome sacrifice

This must be, sweet fatal attraction
My life-long date with destiny
Love this strong, it just brings out the passion
I never knew was here in me

JR stood up and started to undress. He was rock hard by the time he finally got out of his damn monkey suit. He smiled at Sue Ellen and pushed her onto the desk. He kissed her hungrily, working his way down her collarbone. He sucked greedily on her nipples, causing her to cry out his name.

I love you just because
I love you just because
Just because I do, my darlin'

Emotions more than words can help me say
I love you, baby, just because you're you
Just because you're you

JR entered her quickly filling her up fully. “Jesus, JR, you feel so good. I love you.”

JR moves in and out of her steadily. “Mmmmm, I love you honey. You’re so beautiful.”

You're a diamond in my mind, a treasure found
A precious gem to me, you're so nice to have around
I'm so glad I took the path that led to this
And it's amazin' loving you, I'm doin' things
I never thought I'd do

I don't know, there ain't no explanation
Of why I'm sharin' love at last this way
I won't try to work out all my reasons
I'll use these words to simply say

JR thrusts increase in pressure and he send Sue Ellen spiraling into her release. JR waits until her body is done trembling, and he begins thrusting again.

I love you just because
I love you just because
Just because I do, my darlin'
Emotions more than words can help me say
I love you, baby, just because you're you

I love you just because
I love you just because
Just because I do, my darlin'
Emotions more than words can help me say
I love you, baby.

JR throws Sue Ellen over the edge again and spills into her immediately after. He lays his head on her chest for a moment and looks up at her. “Sue Ellen, I don’t think I’ll ever look at this desk in the same way.”

Could it be that there's more to this than meets the eye
Maybe that's the reason why
All I know is when I'm in your arms it feels all right
I'II hold you tight and I come alive

Sue Ellen laughs out loud as she caresses her husbands face. He sits back in his chair bringing her with him. She sits in his lap and he holds on tight to her. “I love you Sue Ellen. I know I don’t show you as much as I should, but I do. I’ll love you forever.”

Sue Ellen kisses him gently. “I’ll always love you too.”

I love you just because
I love you just because
Just because I do, my darlin'
Emotions more than words can help me say
I love you, baby, just because you're you


<span class="ev_code_blue"> END FLASHBACK </span>

Sue Ellen rubs her hands over her face and blows a breath out. She whispers to her self, “Jesus. It’s been over a year Sue Ellen get a grip. It’s over with JR. He’ll never change. Why can’t you let yourself be happy with Nick?” She looks out the window again and is quiet for a moment. “Because he’s not JR.”

JR smiles at her from his hiding place. His heart almost leapt out of his chest. She did still love him. As long as she still loved him, that was all the chance he needed. He grinned mischievously, as Sue Ellen called up front to not be disturbed and she lay on the couch to try to take a nap.

Dallasfan8304
09-07-2004, 06:08 PM
wowww that was hot! I can't wait to see what JR has in mind for his SE...

dms22473
09-08-2004, 02:27 AM
CHAPTER 4

Sue Ellen falls asleep. JR steps out from his hiding place and sits next to the couch, staring at Sue Ellen. “I’ve got to find a way to convince you I’ve changed, that I can make you happy, and not just for one night. I can make you happy for a lifetime.”

I miss the look of surrender in your eyes
The way your soft brown hair would fall
I miss the power of your kiss when we made love
Oh but baby most of all
I miss my friend.

JR brushes a strand of air back from her face and she whispers his name in her sleep and smiles. “She’s dreaming about me. I know you still love me Sue Ellen. I know you do. Why won’t you listen to your heart? I miss you so much. I miss your body next to mine at night. When I came home from work and curled up next to you. I miss your clothes hanging in the closet. I miss eating breakfast with you. I even miss you yelling at me for something. Most of all I miss my best friend.”

The one my heart and soul confided in
The one I felt the safest with
The one who knew just what to say
To make me laugh again
And let the light back in
I miss my friend.

“You were always my best friend. You always will be. I can’t let you go, honey. I know you asked me to, but I can’t. Maybe if I wasn’t so damn selfish I could let you be happy with Nick. But I don’t think he can make you happy. You belong at South Fork. You always have and you always will.”

I miss the colors that you brought into my life
Your golden smile, those blue-green eyes
And I miss your gentle voice in lonely times like now
Saying it'll be alright
I miss my friend.

“You belong there as my wife. I won’t stop until you’re back home with me, where you belong.”

The one my heart and soul confided in
The one I felt the safest with
The one who knew just what to say
To make me laugh again
And let the light back in
I miss my friend.

JR kisses her forehead and smiles when she whispers his name again. He sits back and watches her sleep, occasionally touching her face.

I miss those times
I miss those nights
I even miss our silly fights
The making up
The morning talks
And those late afternoon walks
I miss my friend.

The one my heart and soul confided in
The one I felt the safest with
The one who knew just what to say
To make me laugh again
And let the light back in
I miss my friend.

Sue Ellen starts to wake up and JR quickly goes back to his hiding place. When Sue Ellen awakens, she swears she could feel JR’s caresses still on her skin. “Lord, Sue Ellen you need to get him out of your mind.”

I miss my friend.
I miss my friend.
I miss my friend..

JR smiles from his hiding place and whispers her name to himself in the dark.

09-08-2004, 05:11 AM
Keep going.I love your fics.

virty
09-08-2004, 06:23 AM
Awesome...Please continue..

dms22473
09-08-2004, 02:47 PM
CHAPTER 5

The plane lands and the limo takes Sue Ellen to her beach house that she bought in Miami. JR gets into the limo he had waiting and arrives at her house a few moments later. Sue Ellen takes a shower and changes into a negligee. She walks out onto her deck and stands, looking out at the ocean. Her thoughts drift to JR.

I thought it was over, baby
We said our goodbyes
But I can't go a day without your face
Goin' through my mind

In fact, not a single minute
Passes without you in it
Your voice, your touch, memories of your love
Are with me all of the times

She whispers his name as he stands on the side of her house watching her. She whispers to herself, “God, why can’t I forget him? Please, let me forget him, let me move on.”

Let me let go, baby
Let me let go
If this is for the best, why are you still in my heart
Are you still in my soul, let me let go

I talked to you the other day
Looks like you made your escape
You put us behind, no matter how I try
I can't do the same

“Nick is a good man. He respects me, he loves me, and he doesn’t make me cry.”

Let me let go, baby
Let me let go
It just isn't right, I've been two thousand miles
Down a dead-end road

Let me let go, darlin', won't you
I just gotta know, yeah
If this is for the best, why are you still in my heart
Are you still in my soul, let me let go

Sue Ellen looks out across the ocean. A few silent tears escape her eyes. “I can’t believe I still love him. I still love JR, after everything. How insane am I?”

The lights of this strange city are shinin'
But they don't hold no fascination for me
I try to find the bright side, baby
But everywhere I look, everywhere I turn, you're all I see

Let me, let me let go, won't you
Let me let go
It just isn't right, I've been two thousand miles
Down a dead-end road

“Things would be so much easier if he’d just let me go.”

Oh, let me let go, darlin', won't you
I just gotta know
If this is for the best, why are you still in my heart
Yeah, you're still in my soul, let me let go
Let me let go, let me let go

JR steps around the corner and leans against the house, his Stetson is on his head and he puts a hand in his pocket and the other holds a yellow rose. “Hello Darlin’.”

Sue Ellen doesn’t turn around at first. She grabs the railing in front of her. JR walks up behind her, standing so close to her she can feel his breath on the back of her neck. He puts his hands on the railing, pinning Sue Ellen in, but not touching her.

She can hardly breathe. “JR”

Where did my heart go
When did it lose the way
How did I let you slip away
Why is it so hard to say
(The) words that might touch you
Make you believe that I'm
More than it seems that I am today

She turns around and their faces are inches apart. He hands her the rose and she takes it. “I want you to listen to me. Don’t say anything until I’m finished. I love you Sue Ellen. I love you more than I ever knew. I screwed up and for that I’m truly sorry. I remember every tear you cried because of me. It tears my heart into pieces. Sue Ellen, I swear on my daddy’s grave, if you give us another chance, I’ll be the husband you deserve. I will never hurt you again. I know you think Ewing Oil was always the most important thing to me, and for a long time it was. Then you walked away from me, for good. I saw you running your company, living with Nicholas, and for the first time I knew you would never need me again. That scared me. It really scared me because it was that moment I realized, you would never come back to me. And it’s haunted me every night since the night you left. That night you saw me at the bar? I had just closed a huge deal, the biggest deal in the history of the oil business. And you know what? It didn’t mean a damn thing, because I didn’t have you to come home with and share my news.”

I can run
But I can't hide
From all these dreams
That I keep inside
Now, it's going to take awhile
But I've got to learn to smile again

JR brushes a strand of hair behind her ear and gently touches her cheek. Sue Ellen shivers involuntarily. “Are you cold?”

Sue Ellen whispers “No.”

JR: “I know I hurt you and I’d give up everything I own if I could go back and live our life over again. But I can’t. I can’t promise you that we’ll never fight. We’re both to stubborn to never disagree about something.” She smiles a little.

Once it was easy
I never had to try
I never had to tell a lie
Never thought I'd see you cry
But now I know better
(And) I've got to find a way
I don't wanna hear you say goodbye

Sue Ellen whispers to him. “If you really loved me, you would let me go.”

JR: “See, I don’t believe that. I do love you, but I can’t let you go. I can’t let you go because I love you. Maybe if I really thought Pearce could make you happy, I might let you go. But I don’t think he can. Answer me honestly, do you ever think about me?”

Sue Ellen closes her eyes. “Yes.”

I can run
But I can't hide
From all these dreams
That I keep inside
Now, it's going to take awhile
But I've got to learn to smile again

JR: “You fill my mind every waking minute and you're in every dream. I can’t live without you in my life. Can we try again? Please. We’ll move as slow as you want or as fast as you want.”

I've got to find the smile
That filled your heart with laughter
Don't wanna find a way
To get along after you
I wanna be the man, that you knew

Sue Ellen looks up into his eyes as a tear escapes her eye. Her heart wanted to say yes. Her body missed his touch. She starts to move forward, leaning into him when the phone rings, breaking the moment. JR curses the phone silently.

She picks up the phone which was lying next to her. She picks it up. “Hello……Hello Nicholas.”

JR hangs his head almost in defeat.

Zaida
09-08-2004, 03:14 PM
This story is just getting better!!! Please update soon!!!!!

Nikie
09-08-2004, 03:14 PM
Great DMS!!!!!

J.R. Brewing
09-08-2004, 03:43 PM
You coy little rascal. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif Give us a little more.

dms22473
09-09-2004, 08:48 AM
CHAPTER 6

Sue Ellen walks away but JR can still hear her conversation.

JR faces the ocean with his hands on the railing. He knows he almost had her. A tear rolls down his cheek, thinking that he’s lost her.

Sue Ellen hangs up and walks over to him. She touches his shoulder and he turns around. She gasps when she sees his tear stained cheeks.
She whispers: “You’re crying.” She slowly reaches up to brush his them away and he grabs her wrist.

JR: “Don’t. I can’t have you touch me like you love me and then tell me to leave.”

Sue Ellen caresses his face with her other hand. “I wasn’t going to tell you to leave.”

I can't hide the way I feel about you anymore
I can't hold the hurt inside, keep the pain out of my eyes anymore
My tears no longer wait, my resistance ain't that strong
My mind keeps recreating a life with you alone
And I'm tired of pretending I don't love you anymore

JR closes his eyes against her touch. When he opens them he is staring into her eyes. “I love you Sue Ellen. Are you willing to give us another chance? I don’t want just one night. I want a lifetime.”

Sue Ellen smiles softly. It amazed her how JR’s tears cleansed her soul of the anger she felt towards him. She had never seen him cry, never. Whispering, “I’m scared.”

Let me make one last appeal to show you how I feel about you
'Cause there's no one else I swear holds a candle anywhere next to you

JR: “So am I. Scared that I’ll never hold you again, or kiss you, or be able to make love to you. Scared that I’ll lose the other half of me, the best part of me.”

My heart can't take the beating, not having you to hold
A small voice keeps repeating deep inside my soul
It says I can't keep pretending I don't love you anymore
I've got to take the chance or let it pass by
If I expect to get on with my life
My tears no longer waiting, my resistance ain't that strong
My mind keeps recreating a life with you alone

Sue Ellen: “I love you. I always have. Let’s try.” She puts his arms around his neck and he kisses her with all the pent up passion of the past year.

And I'm tired of pretending I don't love you anymore, anymore, anymore

He picks her up and carries her to the bedroom.
JR sits her down and slowly takes her robe off. Sue Ellen slides his jacket off of him and onto the floor. He brushes his fingers up and down her arm lightly. He slowly peels the straps of her nightgown from her shoulders.

My heart cried out for you
Over an ocean
And your pain cried out for me
Across a wave

Sue Ellen unbuttons his shirt, trembling with passion. JR helps her and rips his shirt off, flinging it across the room.

You stood half
Numb to any emotion
Cause you were a prisoner
And I was a slave

JR pushes the nightgown off of her shoulders, letting it fall to the floor. “You are so beautiful.” He puts his arms around her waist and pulls her too him. He kisses her neck and her shoulder, whispering to her, “I love you Sue Ellen, I love you..”

We’d both stopped searching for
Any acceptance
And rejection always was our bitter pill
Cause I have no precious gifts to give you
I only have these four words
Darlin, I love you….
I love you
Still

Sue Ellen puts her arms around JR and kisses him passionately. She caresses his chest, lightly brushing his nipples, causing him to inhale sharply. She traces a path down to his belt and quickly gets him out of his pants.

I never thought someone would ever see
Or make a prisoner of my heart
But like a warrior dressed in armor
Your carved your name in it
Right from the start

JR gently pushes her to the bed and climbs up her body, kissing every inch of her. He tries to slow his breathing down and savor the moment. “Honey, it’s been so long. I missed you, I missed you so much.”

He takes each nipple in his mouth as sucks greedily, causing Sue Ellen to arch her back into him. “God JR, I missed you too.” JR reaches down to Sue Ellen’s womanhood. His fingers gently touch her folds, making Sue Ellen cry out again.

You held my soul hostage
In your tower on the hill
And all I pray for when I sleep
Or lay awake
Is that you love me
Still

Sue Ellen opens her eyes and caresses JR’s face, “I need you inside of me now. I can’t wait.” JR pushes her legs apart and enters her without breaking eye contact. He stays still for a moment before beginning his thrusts into her.

My heart cried out for you over an ocean
And your pain cried out for me across a wave
'Cause we hid half dead
Numb to any emotion
Now you are my prisoner
And I am your slave

JR moaned and whispered into Sue Ellen’s neck while kissing her, “You feel so good, God I never thought I’d be able to feel you again. Please promise me you’ll never leave again. I swear I’ll never to anything to make you leave, or not trust me. I’ll never hurt you again. No one has ever brought these feeling out in me. Only you” He increases his pace a little.


We’d both stopped searching for
Any acceptance
And rejection always was our bitter pill
Cause I have no precious gifts to give you
I only have these four words
Darlin, I love you….
I love you
Still

Sue Ellen kisses JR’s neck and whisper’s in his ear, “I promise to never leave.” JR increases his pace upon hearing those words whispered into his ear from the love of his life.

Oh baby I love you
I love you…still
Oh baby I love you still
Baby I Love you still
I love you still

Sue Ellen wraps her legs around JR’s waist allowing him to bury himself deeper inside. “Jesus, I love your legs.” JR strokes a little harder, throwing them into a blissful release of their built-up passion for each other, causing them both to cry out for each other.

Oh baby I love you
I love you…still
Oh baby I love you still
Baby I Love you still
I love you still

virty
09-09-2004, 08:54 AM
Great. I love it. It´s amazing.

Dallasfan8304
09-09-2004, 10:10 AM
Wonderful update DMS!!! I wonder what SE will do about Nick now that she's forgiven JR... http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/In-Lurve.gif

Mitzie
09-09-2004, 01:22 PM
Woooohoooo! Oh yeah.....great update! Therefore you must continue!

J.R. Brewing
09-09-2004, 01:29 PM
Ahh! At least this one didn't cause me digestion problems this evening.

Nikie
09-09-2004, 01:45 PM
Great DMS!!!

Zaida
09-09-2004, 03:36 PM
Brilliant!
Especially the last part! Awesome!! http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif
I put "Still" in my player and read it again! I love this song and it fits perfectly well to the story! http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif

Sarah
09-10-2004, 06:23 AM
http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Thanx.gif http://us.i1.yimg.com/us.yimg.com/i/mesg/emoticons/35.gif http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/In-Lurve.gif http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif

ITS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

J.R. Brewing
09-10-2004, 07:32 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Dallasfan8304:
Wonderful update DMS!!! I wonder what SE will do about Nick now that she's forgiven JR... http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/In-Lurve.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

She's gonna use those long, sexy, demure legs to KICK HIS ASS TO THE CURB. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif Of course, if I know the teaser, she's gonna make me suffer for a while yet, aren't ya DMS? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_rolleyes.gif

dms22473
09-10-2004, 07:36 AM
Now, would I do that??? (looking as innocent as I can....which probably isn't much http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-10-2004, 07:38 AM
One word answers that--YES!!!!! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif (looking as annoyed as I can and tapping my size 7 and a half snakeskin boots.)

dms22473
09-12-2004, 08:37 AM
CHAPTER 7

The sun shines into the window and wake JR up. He reaches for Sue Ellen, but she isn’t there. He sits up quickly looking around for her, but doesn’t find her. He quickly puts his pants on and walks through the house calling her name. Sue Ellen doesn’t answer. JR starts to panic, thinking she left, thinking she may think last night was a mistake. He walks onto the deck.

Another day
Without your smile
Another day just passes by
But now I know
How much it means
For you to stay
Right here with me

JR looks out across the beach and spots Sue Ellen running up the beach. JR sighs in relief. She waves to him and he waves back.

The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger
But it hurt so bad I can't take it any longer

I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you
Sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you

Sue Ellen runs up to the steps and comes up to him. “Good morning”

He looks at her and then grabs her to him. “I thought you left. You didn’t leave a note or anything. I thought you regretted last night.”

She pulls back and touches his cheek. “JR I don’t regret anything last night. I love you, we’re going to try again. I did leave a note next to the coffee maker.”

JR smiles sheepishly. “I didn’t check the kitchen… When did you start running?”

Sue Ellen: “After you and I got divorced. It helps clear my head, gives me time to think.” She pulls him toward the kitchen. “Come on Ewing, I’ll make you breakfast and then I need to take a shower. I have a meeting at 1:00.”

A thousand miles between us now
It causes me to wonder how
Our love tonight remains so strong
It makes our risk right all along

JR watches in amazement as Sue Ellen makes ham and cheese omelets. “When did you learn how to cook?” He takes a bite is in heaven. “Darlin’ this is wonderful.”

The time we spent apart will make our love grow stronger
But it hurt so bad I can't take it any longer

I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you
Sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you

Sue Ellen smiles “Thanks. So how did you get here last night?’

JR looks at his plate. “I snuck onto your plane and hid in the closet.” Sue Ellen drops her fork and busts out laughing. “What is so funny? I thought you’d be pissed.”

Sue Ellen, still laughing, “I should be, but then I keep seeing JR Ewing, owner of the biggest independent oil company in the United States camped out in a little closet on my private plane.” JR starts laughing along with her.

JR gets a serious, “I’d endure anything to get you back.”

Things can come and go I know but
Baby I believe
Something's burning strong between us
Makes it clear to me

Sue Ellen smiles lovingly at him. “Well I have a few hours left before I need to leave. I’m going to take a shower.” She kisses his cheek and puts the dishes in the sink.

I wanna grow old with you
I wanna die lying in your arms
I wanna grow old with you
I wanna be looking in your eyes
I wanna be there for you
Sharing everything you do
I wanna grow old with you


CHAPTER 7B

Sue Ellen takes a shower and comes out of the bathroom in a towel. JR comes up to her and kisses her. “What time did you say you had to leave?”

Sue Ellen looks at him “I have 3 hours until I have to leave.”

JR smiles and grabs her lips in a passionate clinch. “3 hours huh?”, he whispers against her lips.

She shakes her head yes. JR picks her up and falls back on the bed taking her with him.

when I look in your eyes
there I see
Just what you mean to me
Here in my heart I believe
Your love is all I'll ever need
Holdin' you close through the night
I need you, yeah

JR quickly rids her of the towel and lays her flat on the bed. He stands up and quickly sheds his pants. JR is rock hard and his erection springs out of his pants when he drops them. Sue Ellen sits on the edge of the bed and takes JR into her mouth, sucking hungrily. JR swears out loud, “Shit.” JR runs his hands through her hair, moaning with pleasure. Sue Ellen runs her tongue around the tip and then brushes her tongue along the vein that runs through the shaft, almost causing JR to spill his seed. “Oh my God honey, where did you learn that trick?” He pulls away from her and looks down at her smiling face. He lays her back on the bed and kisses her feet and every inch of her long legs.

I look in your eyes and there I see
What happiness really means
The love that we share makes life so sweet
Together we'll always be
This pledge of love feels so right
And, ooh, I need you

Sue Ellen writhes underneath him in pleasure and anticipation. JR kisses the inside of her thighs and blows breaths slowly into her womanhood. Sue Ellen grabs the bedspread and whispers his name softly. JR smiles to himself as he plunges two fingers deep inside of her. Sue Ellen screams out loud and bucks off the bed. JR waits until she comes back down and then uses his tongue to pleasure her beyond her dreams.

Here and now
I promise to love faithfully [Faithfully]
You're all I need
Here and now
I vow to be one with thee [You and me], hey
Your love is all [I need] I need

Say, yeah, yeah...

JR moves his fingers in and out of her as his tongue makes circles around her clit. JR’s tongue comes into direct contact with her button and Sue Ellen’s orgasm slams into her. “Oh God….JR…”

He gives her not a moments rest before he plunges his erection deep into her. Whispering, “Sue Ellen, I love you….” He plunges in and out of her, causing her to moan incoherently.

When I look in your eyes, there I'll see
All that a love should really be
And I need you more and more each day
Nothin' can take your love away
More than I dare to dream
I need you

Here and now
I promise to love faithfully [Faithfully]
You're all I need
Here and now
I vow to be one with thee [You and me], yeah
Your love is all I need

JR kisses her lips. Sue Ellen’s tongue plunges into his mouth, and he gladly welcomes it. Both moan into each other as JR continues to move.

[Starting here] Ooh, and I'm starting now
I believe [I believe in love], I believe
[Starting here] I'm starting right here
[Starting now] Right now because I believe in your love
So I'm glad to take the vow

Sue Ellen whispers into JR’s ear. “JR, I’m so glad you didn’t give up on me. I love you.” With those words, JR increases his speed, and throws them both into their release.

Here and now, oh
I promise to love faithfully [Faithfully]
You're all I need
Here and now, yeah
I vow to be one with thee [You and me], yeah
Your love is all I need

JR looks deep into her eyes. “I love you Sue Ellen. I’ll never make you regret taking me back.”

Sue Ellen just hugs him close and they lay in each other’s arms.

dms22473
09-12-2004, 08:46 AM
MRM, you are too funny. I did check my pm's and I sent you one back. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

virty
09-12-2004, 12:45 PM
GREAT....GO ON!!!! Really amazing!!

espy
09-13-2004, 01:01 PM
UUUHHHHHHH.....I am running out of ice at my house because these updates are ON FIRE!!! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_redface.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-13-2004, 01:51 PM
Are you writing..... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-13-2004, 01:55 PM
Technically, my last chapter didn't include a cliffhanger. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-13-2004, 02:02 PM
Blah, blah, blah.... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Dallasfan8304
09-13-2004, 02:25 PM
When are we going to get another update? I think you've exceeded 24 hrs on this one... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-14-2004, 01:52 PM
CHAPTER 8

JR walks Sue Ellen out to her limo. He is in his pants and a buttoned down shirt that is unbuttoned. He pulls her close. “Have a good day, honey.”

Sue Ellen kisses him. “What will you do with your time?”

JR smiles at her. “First I’m going shopping. I don’t have any clothes. Then I’m going to have dinner waiting for you when you get home, but I won’t cook it.”

Sue Ellen laughs. “I’ll see you later.” She gets in and the limo drives away and JR walks back into the house. Neither notices the paparazzi snapping pictures of them.

JR gets a shower and his limo drives him into the city and he does some shopping. He also stops to pick up an engagement ring. He wasn’t wasting another minute. If he had his way, they’d be married tonight. He asked his driver where he could find a preacher that married people quickly. JR asks the preacher to meet him at Sue Ellen’s house at sunset.

JR gets back to the house and has a romantic dinner set up on the beach. He lays out his new tux and the dress he bought for Sue Ellen.

Sue Ellen’s dress: Click for SE's dress (http://store1.yimg.com/I/yhst-7321991303214_1811_73498)

Sue Ellen makes her way home about 2 hours before sunset. She walks in the door and there is a trail of yellow rose petals leading to the bedroom. “What is he doing?” She follows them and sees the dress with a note to get ready and meet him on the beach. She does just that and walks out to the deck. She can see JR in the distance and walks down the steps, trying to figure out why she has butterflies in her stomach.

Sue Ellen reaches JR. He asks her to dance with him. She moves into his arms, and is amazed at how much love she feels for this man. She silently asks God to let things work this time.

Oh my love my darling
I've hungered for your touch
A long lonely time
And time goes by so slowly
And time can do so much
Are you still mine

JR’s arms encircle her waist and he breathes in her scent. JR silently begs God, “Please let her say yes. Please let her give me the chance to love her and treat like she deserves.”

I need your love
I need your love
God speed your love to me

Lonely rivers flow to the sea to the sea
To the open arms of the sea
Lonely rivers sigh wait for me wait for me
I'll be coming home wait for me

JR and Sue Ellen sway together in the sand, holding on to each other tightly, again neither noticing the paparazzi snapping away feverishly.

Oh my love my darling
I've hungered for your touch
A long lonely time
And time goes by so slowly
And time can do so much
Are you still mine
I need your love
I need your love

JR breaks away from her and kisses her lightly. He takes the ring out of his pocket and bends down on one knee.

God speed your love to me

JR’s voice cracks as he starts to speak and he takes a minute to clear his throat. “I can’t believe how nervous I am. Sue Ellen, I love you. I don’t really have any fancy words. I can only tell you how much I missed you and how stupid I was to ever let you go. I don’t want to waste another second without as my wife. I want to love you, laugh with you, and grow old with you. I want to simply life the rest of my life by your side as your husband, your lover, and your best friend. Will you marry me?”

Sue Ellen looks at him with tears in her eyes. She had never heard those words spoken from JR like that. Her heart wanted to say yes, but she was still scared.

JR looked up at her expectantly, fighting to hold back his own tears, but not winning. For the second time in Sue Ellen’s memory, JR cried. She knelt in front of him and wiped his tear and quietly whispered, “Yes.” They held each other close just enjoying up the moment

J.R. Brewing
09-14-2004, 02:20 PM
Nooooooo. that is tooooo harsh.....promise update tomorrow

dms22473
09-14-2004, 03:30 PM
ALright. We will give you a reprieve. Tomorrow or i will write a short song fic, strictly about Nick/SE. I'll take some anti-nausea medicine and write it just for you.

J.R. Brewing
09-14-2004, 03:50 PM
I was wondering how long it would take for that 24 hour rule to come back and bite me in the a$$. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif However, I updated a few minutes ago--saving my fanny from the Nick/SE (hurl) fire

espy
09-15-2004, 06:29 AM
***espy comes running into the room with a fire extinguisher****

I will put the fire out JRB....

(keep writing http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif)

J.R. Brewing
09-15-2004, 06:32 AM
LOL

Thanks espy...that was a close one.

dms22473
09-16-2004, 02:03 AM
Qualifies as pure fluff, but I thought this might help Big D, break out of her psychotic episode...

CHAPTER 9

JR stood up and pulled her with him. “Are you ready?”

Sue Ellen smiled: “Let’s go.”

They walk to where the preacher is standing and have a simple ceremony. Sue Ellen couldn’t believe she was about to marry JR again, without any second thoughts. Not once has Nicholas crossed her mind since JR kissed her and carried her into the bedroom. They exchange vows and are pronounced husband and wife.

JR grins widely. He takes Sue Ellen’s face in his hands and kisses her lovingly. They join hands and walk up to the table JR has set for them. “Dance with your husband, Mrs. Ewing?”

Sue Ellen moves into his arms as they begin to sway.

Are those your eyes?
Is that your smile?
I’ve been looking at you for ever,
But I never saw you before.
Are these your hands? Holding mine?
Now I wonder how I could have been so blind.

JR pulls her a little closer and holds her a little tighter, praying all this is not a dream.

And for the first time, I am looking in your eyes.
For the first time, I'm seeing who you are.
I can't believe how much I see,
When you're looking back at me.
Now I understand what love is,
Love is...
For the first time...

Sue Ellen looks at him and smiles. She kisses him and hugs him tight.

Can this be real?
Can this be true?
Am I the person I was this morning?
And are you the same you?
It’s all so strange.
How can it be?
All along this love was right in front of me!
And for the first time, I am looking in your eyes.
For the first time, I am seeing who you are.
I can't believe how much I see,
When you're looking back at me.
Now I understand what love is...
Love is...
For the first time.

JR: “I love you Sue Ellen. I swear nothing will ever come between us again.”

Such a long time ago,
I had given up on finding this emotion,
Ever again.
But you're here with me now,
Yes I found you somehow,
And I've never been so sure.
And for the first time, I am looking in your eyes,
For the first time, I'm seeing who you are,
Can't believe how much I see,
When you're looking back at me.
Now I understand what love is...
Love is...
For the first time.

Sue Ellen kisses JR, igniting their passion. His blue eyes go dark with desire and she almost gets lost in them. "Make love to me. Right here, where our new life began. I love you."

JR hardens instantly. "Sue Ellen...God I love you.." She slips his jacket off as the trashy photographer, snapping away, can't believe his good luck.

dms22473
09-16-2004, 02:42 AM
I was suddenly struck with inspiration...go figure..


CHAPTER 9B

Sue Ellen kisses JR, igniting their passion. His blue eyes go dark with desire and she almost gets lost in them. "Make love to me. Right here, where our new life began. I love you."

JR hardens instantly. "Sue Ellen...God I love you.." She slips his jacket off as the trashy photographer, snapping away, can't believe his good luck.

Sue Ellen unbuttons his shirt and he maneuvers them to the lounge chair. Sue Ellen slips his shirt off and unbuckles his pants. She pushes him down on to the lounge chair and removes his pants. She stands up and smiles. He was already standing at attention for her. How she loved that she could still do that to him, with a few words.

My love
I’ll never find the words, my love
To tell you how I feel, my love
Mere words could not explain
Precious love
You held my life within your hands
Created everything I am
Taught me how to live again

Sue Ellen slipped her dress off and watched JR drinking in every inch of her tanned body. “You are so incredible beautiful.” She smiles at him and straddles the lounge chair, gently lowering herself onto his erection. “Jesus, woman,”

She smiled, closed her eyes and started to ride her cowboy gently. JR watched Sue Ellen’s face without her knowledge for a few moments. Her face could only be described as pure sexual pleasure. God he loved to watch her when they were like this.

Only you
Cared when I needed a friend
Believed in me through thick and thin
This song is for you
Filled with gratitude and love

Sue Ellen opened her eyes and caught JR staring at her. She leaned down and kissed him, brushing her fingers across his chest and nipples. His sharp intake of breath caused her to grin teasingly. JR took hold of her waist and sat up so he could shower kisses on her face and neck. She wrapped her legs around him, causing him bury deeper inside of her. “You feel so good. So warm.”

Sue Ellen kisses him as he changes the pace a little and she allows him to take over. One hand goes around her waist to hold her as he thrusts into her. She throws her head back in passion. JR latches onto her neck as his other hand caresses her breast, gently pinching her nipples, causing her to moan in ecstasy.

God bless you
You make me feel brand new
For God blessed me with you
You make me feel brand new
I sing this song ’cause you
Make me feel brand new

She traces her nails lightly up and down his back and on his neck. She leans in to him and gently licks his ear, sucking on his earlobe “Sue Ellen…god honey…that feels so good.”

My love
Whenever I was insecure
You built me up and made me sure
You gave my pride back to me
Precious friend
With you I’ll always have a friend
You’re someone who I can depend
To walk a path that never ends

JR gets a better grip on his wife and pumps into her. He brushes a thumb against her clit, sending her spiraling into release. She starts trembling. JR can feel the walls of her womanhood tighten up around him and he helplessly follows her into bliss.

Without you
My life has no meaning or rhyme
Like notes to a song out of time
How can I repay
You for having faith in me

JR scoots back on the chair with Sue Ellen still in his lap. She stretches out on top of him and he covers her with his jacket. She snuggles on his chest and he leans down and kisses her forehead. “There are really no words to describe the depth of my love for you. I am so grateful for this moment. I swear you’ll never regret it. I love you.”
Sue Ellen smiled into his chest and kissed it lightly. “I love you too.”

virty
09-16-2004, 02:53 AM
Great update.This story is really amazing... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

dms22473
09-16-2004, 03:01 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR> those damn lounge chairs have been known to flip <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> M&M, I meant the hard resin white lounge chairs...you know the good ones..trust me they don't flip...first hand experience...As for my inspiration last night...it's coming, it's comin... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-16-2004, 04:29 AM
Experience....I'd believe that. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Can't wait to see those pictures on the front page of the Dallas press. http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif

This definitely helped with the hangover and the psychosis. Too bad I'll be out until this evening....I'll have to wait for the inspired portion of the honeymoon.

dms22473
09-16-2004, 05:32 AM
I'll try to make it worth the wait.

Dallasfan8304
09-16-2004, 10:08 AM
Can't wait to see how everyone reacts in Dallas when they JR/SE in the papers.

Since JRB is out til this evening, I can use this time to my advantage and update the rest of my fic... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-16-2004, 01:06 PM
That would be an excellent idea.....just please don't set her off again....

Nikie
09-16-2004, 01:59 PM
Great DMS!!! I bet it would be funny to see them two on the Dallas Press...

J.R. Brewing
09-16-2004, 02:01 PM
I'm baaaack! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-16-2004, 02:03 PM
This just in Bid D is back. Her anti-psychosis medicine has kicked in and she's feeling more like her old self.

J.R. Brewing
09-16-2004, 02:16 PM
Yeah...I think I'm cool. Lady G, sorry about the knifing. Damn those demons, where's that lithium?

espy
09-16-2004, 02:44 PM
****espy comes out of covert op mode****

Here's your lithium ...oh magnificent, knife-wielding, Nick hater....

SueEllen&JR4ever
09-17-2004, 01:13 PM
Excellent, so glad to see that you've now got three fan fictions running

dms22473
09-17-2004, 03:54 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR> Excellent, so glad to see that you've now got three fan fictions running <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Yes, obviously I'm insane. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Here's another update. Kinda short...quite sappy..but I was in a sappy mood after talking with my Big Daddy, listening to him shower me with words of love and devotion. It's quite sickening sometimes. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif But I figured JRB could use a dose of JR/SE loving to get the bad taste of Nick out of her mouth.


CHAPTER 10

Sue Ellen looks up at her husband. “So….when are we going to tell our family that you drugged me and got me to remarry you again?”

JR laughs at her. “You are so funny. I don’t know. Should we tell them over the phone or wait until we get home?”

Sue Ellen thinks for a moment. “Maybe we should wait. I think I want you all to myself for a few more days. Plus it's probably not something we should tell over the phone.”

JR smiles and kisses her. “That’s probably the best idea. Are you ready to go in?”

Sue Ellen shakes her head yes and stands up. She puts her dress back on, and JR throws on his pants. He grabs his jacket and shirt and they walk up to the house hand in hand. They go into the bedroom and take off their clothes. JR stares at Sue Ellen for a moment. The moon bathes her in a soft light. JR whispers, “You look like an angel.” Sue Ellen walks up to him and he reaches out to her.

For all I've been blessed with in this life
There was an emptiness in me
I was imprisoned by the power of gold
But one honest touch could set me free

He pulls her close to him and inhales her scent. “I love you Sue Ellen. God I can’t believe this night is real. Tell me I’m not dreaming.”

Sue Ellen hugs him close. “You’re not dreaming, sweetheart. If you are then I am too, and I hope we never wake up.”

Let the world stop turnin'
Let the sun stop burnin'
Let them tell me love's not worth going through
If it all falls apart
I will know deep in my heart
The only dream that mattered had come true
In this life, I was loved by you

He picks her up and lays her across the bed. He places gentle kisses along her body, starting with her right hand, up her arm, and down to her feet and back up the other side. He reaches her neck and works his way down to her breasts. He takes each nipple in his mouth, sucking tenderly. He kisses his way back up to her neck and finally pulls back looking at her. “Somehow, when I tell you I love you, it doesn’t seem to be enough to convey what I feel for you. You are my heart and soul, my life, my love, my world.” He enters her gently, filling her up completely. Starting to thrust softly into her he whispers in the moon lit room. “I know how much I’ve hurt you in the past, but I swear on my life, I’ll never do it again and I’ll spend the rest of our lives trying to show you how deeply and truly you are loved.”

For every mountain I have climbed
Every raging river crossed
You were the treasure that I'd longed to find
Without your love I would be lost

JR’s words bring tears to her eyes. She had never heard those types of words from his mouth. Something had changed in him. She saw it in his eyes that night at the bar. He was broken inside. Looking into his eyes now, she saw a new sparkle to them. She saw what she had always wanted to see, his love for her shining through. “I love you JR.

Let the world stop turnin'
Let the sun stop burnin'
Let them tell me love's not worth going through
If it all falls apart
I will know deep in my heart
The only dream that mattered had come true
In this life, I was loved by you

JR took them both into the passionate release. Both crying out as they came together.

In this life, I was loved by you

Nikie
09-17-2004, 04:17 PM
It help get the bad taste out of my mouth!! Great Job DMS!!!

J.R. Brewing
09-17-2004, 06:55 PM
EXCELLENT! Much needed ahhhhhhh relaxation. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Dallasfan8304
09-18-2004, 01:16 PM
I liked the update as well. More soon--and the other two fics too! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif

virty
09-19-2004, 04:03 PM
Great job.. GO ON!!! It´s abosolutelly great. http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif

Sarah
09-20-2004, 04:59 AM
Damn Paparazzi!!! I can picture El Nicholas' face!!! Great job!!!! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

dms22473
09-20-2004, 10:26 AM
CHAPTER 10 (<span class="ev_code_RED">ok kinda short but i'll finish the update tonight</span>)

Sue Ellen wakes up to JR’s kisses. “Good morning.”

JR smiles, “And a good morning it is. Thank you for forgiving me. It seems so inadequate, but I love you. I’ll swear I won’t mess up again.”

Sue Ellen just kisses him lightly. “I believe you. Now come on let’s get some breakfast.” Sue Ellen sets about making breakfast and JR goes out to get the paper. As he looks at the front page, he simply mutters “Shit.” The headline reads: “Marry me, again?” Below the headline is a picture of him proposing to Sue Ellen last night. Underneath that is “Business Woman of The Year, fashion mogul Sue Ellen Ewing remarries ex-husband, JR Ewing, head of Ewing Oil, in private ceremony on the beach.”

He looks up to the sky and silently curses himself for being so stupid to not even think about reporters. Sue Ellen was more famous down here then he was in Texas. He walks in and hands her the paper.

She sets her coffee on the counter and looks at the front page. “Oh my God.” At that exact moment the phone rings

Sarah
09-20-2004, 11:08 AM
It's friggin Mob Man isn't it? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_frown.gif

Nikie
09-20-2004, 01:43 PM
Can't wait to see what happens!!!

J.R. Brewing
09-20-2004, 02:07 PM
Oh yeah Baby...da shit has hit da fan.

Don't answer that phone. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-22-2004, 05:16 PM
JR and Sue Ellen stare at each other for what seems like an eternity. JR moves to pick it up. “NO, what if it’s Nick?”

JR gets a tad bit angry, “So what? He knows by now.”

Sue Ellen grabs the phone from him, “JR you don’t understand.” She walks to the counter and stares out the window. JR tries to calm down. He comes up behind her and puts his hands on her shoulders. “Honey, I’m sorry. I just don’t…I’m scared I’m going to lose you again.”

Sue Ellen turns around. She looks at him and sees the fear in his eyes. She puts her arms around his waist. “You’re not going to lose me, but I need to tell Nicholas in my time. I didn’t want to hurt him. God JR, do you realize that I haven’t even given him a second thought since that moment you kissed me and carried me to the bedroom? None of this is fair to him.”

JR hugs her close. “Believe it or not, Sue Ellen part of me does feel sorry for him. I know what it’s like to lose you. So we’ll do things you’re way.”

Sue Ellen and JR hold on to each other for a moment. “You need to call home so we can talk to John Ross and the rest of the family before they find out through the media.”

JR picks up the phone and calls home. “Hello Momma.”

Ms Ellie: “JR, is it true? Did you marry Sue Ellen again?”

JR: “What? Is it in the papers there too?”

Ms Ellie: “Of course it is. You are CEO of the biggest independent oil company in the US and Sue Ellen is a CEO of the worlds second most successful fashion company. Did you think it wouldn’t be in the paper?”

JR: “I wasn’t thinkin’ at all Momma. I just wanted Sue Ellen back.”

Ms Ellie: “Oh JR. Is Sue Ellen all right? Let me talk to her.”

JR hands Sue Ellen the phone. “Hello Ms Ellie.”
Ms E: “Sue Ellen, are you all right? Are you sure this is what you want?” JR points to the balcony and he walks out.

Sue Ellen: “I’m fine Ms Ellie. Ms Ellie last night, when he proposed he cried. He actually cried. I..I love him Ms Ellie, I always have and I always will. This is what I want.”
Ms Ellie smiles into the phone. “Well I can’t say I’m sorry that you’re back in the family. You belong here, you always have. We’ll be glad to welcome you back.”

Sue Ellen: “Thank you Ms Ellie. We’ll see you tomorrow. We'll talk with John Ross when we get home, so if you can try to keep it from him, we'd appreciate it.” She hangs up and walks out to the balcony. She puts her arms around him and he grabs her hands. “You ok?”

JR: “Yeah. I’m sorry. I wasn’t even thinking about the press. I should have known that down here what you do is news worthy.”

Sue Ellen smiles, “Its ok. Hey at least we made the front page, probably of every Texas and Miami newspaper.” They both laugh for a moment.

JR turns around and slides his arms around her. “I love you, Sue Ellen.”

Sue Ellen hugs him a little closer. “How about we lock out the world for one more day?”

JR leans down to kiss her and smiles against her lips. “I say absolutely.” He picks her up and carries her into the bedroom and lays her gently across the bed.

J.R. Brewing
09-22-2004, 08:58 PM
Very good!

dms22473
09-23-2004, 06:47 AM
CHAPTER 11

JR untied her robe and spread it open. He smiles down at her, whispering, “I love you. Promise me nothing will change once we get back to Dallas.” Sue Ellen reaches for his and she pulls his close, kissing him. “Nothing will change. I won’t leave you.”

Wherever, wherever girl I'll do it
Forever and ever, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
I'll see you through it

I've got to keep you pleased in every way I can
Gonna give you all of me As much as you can stand
Make love to you right now, that's all I want to do

JR enters her quickly, holding still so she can adjust to him. “God you feel so good, honey.” JR starts thrusting into her, kissing her neck and then biting it. Sue Ellen cries out his name as he sucks on her neck. JR pulls out of her suddenly causing her to whimper at the lost of contact. She feels him get of the bed and pull her to the edge. He kneels down in front of her and spreads her legs. Biting the inside of her thigh lightly and then licking each spot he bites. Sue Ellen grabs the bedspread as he inches closer to her womanhood.

I know you need it, girl, and you know I need it, too
'Cause I found what the world is searching for
Here, right here, my dear I don't have to look no more
And, oh, my babe, I hoped and I prayed for someone
Just like you to make me feel the way you do

JR finally reaches her core and traces a finger around it teasingly. He starts to suck on her button lightly, still encircling her hold lightly without entering her.

Never, never gonna give you up
I'm never, ever gonna stop
Not the way I feel about you
Girl, I just can't live without you

I'm never ever gonna quit,
'Cause quitin' just ain't my schtick
I'm gonna stay right here with you
Do all the things you want me to

JR bites her love button lightly, then licks it. “JR...please...” JR smiles at her pleading tone. He knows she is nearly over the edge. He pulls back and slams into her with his rock hard erection. Sue Ellen immediately crashes over in oblivion. JR stays unmoving while Sue Ellen’s orgasm hits its peak. JR feels her walls quiver around his member. He smiles down at her and watches in fascination as her orgasm comes to its conclusion. She opens her eyes and looks into his. She smiles and he begins thrusting into her at a frenzied pace.

Whatever you want, girl, you got it,
And whatever you need,
I don't want to see you without it,

You've given me much more
than words could ever say
And oh, my dear, I'll be right here until my dying day
I don't know just how to say all the things I feel
I just know that I love you so and
it gives me such a thrill

'Cause I found what this world is searching for
Here, right here, my dear I don't have to look no more
And all of my days I hoped and I prayed
For someone just like you
To make me feel the way you do

JR holds Sue Ellen’s legs together and straight up in the air as he continues his relentless thrusting. After a few minutes he spreads her legs wide and pushes them toward her, allowing deeper access. Sue Ellen is in another world and moan with pleasure as he pushes deep inside of her, hitting her g-spot. After a few minutes of pushing against her spot, JR feels her explosion of fluids rush over his dick. “Oh God..JR..” Sue Ellen cries out as another orgasm hits her. This time JR gives her no rest as he continues his plundering.

Never, never gonna give you up
I'm never, ever gonna stop
Not the way I feel about you
Girl, I just can't live without you

I'm never ever gonna quit,
'Cause quitin' just ain't my schtick
I'm gonna stay right here with you
Do all the things you want me to

JR plunges inside of her intent on falling over the edge inside of her. Sue Ellen wraps her legs around his waist as he bends down to kiss her, pushing his tongue into her mouth. She sucks his tongue, throwing him into his orgasm. JR moans into her mouth as his seed releases deep inside of her. Sue Ellen pulls away to look at him. “Uuhhh. Jesus.” JR and Sue Ellen catch their breath. “I love you darlin’.”

Oh I never gonna give you up
I'm never, ever gonna stop
All the things I feel about you girl,
I just can't live without you

Back in Dallas, Nicholas opens his morning paper. He spits his coffee out as he reads the headline. “Oil Tycoon finally gets his Valentine” He sees the picture of JR and Sue Ellen in a deep lip lock. “What the ****?”

Mitzie
09-23-2004, 08:23 AM
Great update, dms...you are rockin'! Burt gives you two thumbs up.

"What the f$%^?" - Is that right, Nick? You were not looking at JR and SE in the paper, you were probably looking at last year's Christmas photos and caught a glimpse of your nasty a$$ in one of your hideous, Bill Cosby-lookin' holiday sweaters.

dms22473
09-23-2004, 08:38 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR> "What the f$%^?" - Is that right, Nick? You were not looking at JR and SE in the paper, you were probably looking at last year's Christmas photos and caught a glimpse of your nasty a$$ in one of your hideous, Bill Cosby-lookin' holiday sweaters. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> ROFLMAO...oh god my stomach.....oh christ someone call 911

virty
09-23-2004, 08:43 AM
Damn hot!! Great updates..I love it.

Robin
09-23-2004, 07:26 PM
Awesome!!!!!!

Sarah
09-24-2004, 06:45 AM
Brilliant!!! I think there might be a punch up on the way.... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-24-2004, 06:52 AM
If there is some punchin, could Big Daddy please kill this N*** goomba once and for all. http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Duel.gif

I swear, he is the bane of Big D's existence. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-28-2004, 02:39 PM
CHAPTER 12 A few hours later on Sue Ellen’s plane

JR is sitting on the sofa, while Sue Ellen lies with her head in his lap. She sighs and JR asks her what’s wrong. “Nothing, everything. Nicholas is going to be furious when he finds out.”

“So? Are you changing your mind?” JR asks worriedly.

“What? No of course I’m not changing my mind about us. JR I love you, I married you because I wanted to, but you have to admit it’s going to be tough explaining this to Nick.”

“No, it won’t. You love me and I love you. We got married, end of story. I’ll tell him if you want.” She laughs out loud, “Oh I’m sure that would make everything peachy. No, I have to tell him, I’m just not looking forward to it.” JR strokes her hair as she lies in his lap. “Everything is going to be fine. We were meant to be together honey, and I’ll do whatever I have to do to make sure we stay that way.” Sue Ellen smiles before drifting off to sleep. The plane lands and JR wakes his wife up. “Come on sleeping beauty, lets go home.”

The doors open and they exit the plane. As they walk through the terminal they are bombarded by paparazzi. Thousands of flashbulbs pop off, causing Sue Ellen to stumble back into JR’s arms. “Jesus Christ.” Bobby and Ray show up seemingly out of nowhere with some security and they finally make it out to the limo. As JR & Sue Ellen get in, the limo drives away and all four of them stare at each other for a moment. Ray breaks the ice, “Well, welcome home and congratulations.” They all laugh and talk about the craziness that they created, as they ride home. “I’ll tell you something, you do sure know how to keep this family from boredom. I can’t say I’m sorry you married this fool again though. We missed you Sue Ellen.” Sue Ellen smiles at Bobby, “Thank you Bobby. I missed all of you too.” Nick watches the spectacle from his house as he drinks straight from the bottle, cursing both JR & Sue Ellen.

Pulling into the driveway, Sue Ellen took a deep breath. She got out of the car and was greeted by John Ross, “Momma, is it true? Are we a family again?” She picks him up as JR steps out of the limo and takes him from her. He holds him with one arm and pulls her close with the other. “That’s right son. We’re a family again. This time it’s forever.” John Ross smiles as the rest of the family congratulates them. They start to walk into the house when they hear tires squealing. They turn around as Nick gets out of his car.

Nikie
09-28-2004, 02:49 PM
Oh what is Nick gonna do??? Great DMS!!!

Dallasfan8304
09-28-2004, 03:09 PM
Excellent update, dms! I can't wait to see what Nick is gonna do.

Robin
09-28-2004, 03:14 PM
And I can't wait to see what JR does to Nick in return!

virty
09-28-2004, 03:16 PM
Excellent....I am also curious.. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Keep writing

J.R. Brewing
09-28-2004, 03:25 PM
A busted ass will not get you any slack on this, type woman. You cannot leave it there. http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Soapbox.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Mitzie
09-28-2004, 06:01 PM
This message is from Mitzie's spirit armed with an angelic assault rifle, since she is having am outer body experience while the doctors are working to revive her after reading...oh...God...Lady G's "The Ring" fic.

Her spirit whispers...oh KFC, you MUST not leave it like that, fix it by tonight!!!!! She aims her crazy eye, which is now pearly white, looking like a half-suck jawbreaker, at KFC with her kind, yet very real warning.

Great job!

J.R. Brewing
09-28-2004, 06:14 PM
This message was typed by JRB's ghost. KFC you must find RH and destroy the infidel. Oh no..they're coming for me.....must go...destroy....destroy.....................

dms22473
09-29-2004, 01:02 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
This message was typed by JRB's ghost. KFC you must find RH and destroy the infidel. Oh no..they're coming for me.....must go...destroy....destroy..................... <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> I'd say LMFAO but it's already broken, but no worries JRB...you and Mitz will be avenged and resurected....

Sarah
09-29-2004, 02:36 AM
I just had a Hillary Taylor/Michelle Stevens flashback!!!!

09-29-2004, 04:32 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Sarah B:
I just had a Hillary Taylor/Michelle Stevens flashback!!!! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Oh God, that storyline SUCKED ASS! That was during the last season (13) right? That was the worst season, last I remember....

Wonderful update DMS...but don't keep us waitin long ....http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-29-2004, 05:16 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Lady Godiva:
Oh God, that storyline SUCKED ASS! That was during the last season (13) right? That was the worst season, last I remember....
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

JRB's ghost types: Are you the best judge of that Missy? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif Come on KFC, JRB's ghost needs to see that goomba get his ass kicked. Also, you need a live chicken, a hot virgin young man and a lifetime supply of contraceptives to resurrect JRB. http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif

dms22473
09-29-2004, 05:23 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Lady Godiva:
Oh God, that storyline SUCKED ASS! That was during the last season (13) right? That was the worst season, last I remember....
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

JRB's ghost types: Are you the best judge of that Missy? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif Come on KFC, JRB's ghost needs to see that goomba get his ass kicked. Also, you need a live chicken, a hot virgin young man and a lifetime supply of contraceptives to resurrect JRB. http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Right...I can find the hot young man, and the contraceptives, but what the f*ck do you need a live chicken for??? http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif Unless of course you gonna fry that puppy up for some grub

J.R. Brewing
09-29-2004, 05:28 AM
JRB's ghost types while laughing her ass off(if a ghost had an ass.) That's the best way to a man's heart, plus you need the blood and the feet for the demonic ritual. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-29-2004, 05:31 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
JRB's ghost types while laughing her ass off(if a ghost had an ass.) That's the best way to a man's heart, plus you need the blood and the feet for the demonic ritual. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Right, obviosuly your ghost is EVIL, but it's ok I can still hang witcha. Still the blood...just ewwww. LMAO

J.R. Brewing
09-29-2004, 05:35 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Right, obviosuly your ghost is EVIL, but it's ok I can still hang witcha. Still the blood...just ewwww. LMAO[/QUOTE]

JRB's ghost types:It's all Lady G's fault. JRB controlled me until I was released from JRB's body when she flatlined. That's when Satan's demons came and recruited me. PS...Please hurry with the resurrection..those demons are hot on my tail. http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif

dms22473
09-29-2004, 05:57 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Right, obviosuly your ghost is EVIL, but it's ok I can still hang witcha. Still the blood...just ewwww. LMAO <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

JRB's ghost types:It's all Lady G's fault. JRB controlled me until I was released from JRB's body when she flatlined. That's when Satan's demons came and recruited me. PS...Please hurry with the resurrection..those demons are hot on my tail. http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif[/QUOTE] It's cool...Lucifer and I are tight...I'll find you a body soon...

J.R. Brewing
09-29-2004, 06:03 AM
JRB's ghost types http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Thanks btw I located RH and she will be rejoining our crusade soon I hope.

dms22473
09-29-2004, 06:09 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
JRB's ghost types http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Thanks btw I located RH and she will be rejoining our crusade soon I hope. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Oh good, she's been missed...my ass is killin' me....

Mitzie
09-29-2004, 07:26 AM
Mitzie's crazy armed spirit slams back into her lifeless body and the monitors go back to normal. Through her tears on her faux Burt Reynolds moustache, all that she can utter is
"What the f***?!?!?!?" The doctors conclude that the smut had saved her, that and the Colt 45 Steel Reserve that they dumped into her IV.

Outside, the fleet of squirrels rejoice, and begin firing off their tiny rifles in the singing Taylor Dayne's hit "Love Will Bring You Back".

People, expect a very quick recovery.

SueEllen&JR4ever
09-29-2004, 12:57 PM
Please update soon!!!

dms22473
09-30-2004, 02:31 AM
CHAPTER 13 <span class="ev_code_RED">JUST FOR MITZ, so she feels better after her 72 blood transfusions</span>

JR quickly pushes Sue Ellen behind him, as Bobby stands next to JR. “Ray, take Sue Ellen in the house please.” Sue Ellen steps away from him, “I am not going in the house.”
She walks up to Nicholas before anyone can grab her. “What the hell is going on?” He grabs her arm. JR starts after them but Sue Ellen holds her hand up to him. “Nick, let me explain…” “Explain what, that you’re a slut, that you used me and the second JR Ewing wanted you, you jumped right back into his bed? I loved you, I wanted to start a life with you, but that didn’t matter to you did it? Tell me something princess, how long did it take for you to spread those pretty legs for him?” Sue Ellen slaps Nick hard across the face. He grabs her wrist and twists it causing her to cry out.

JR rushes over and pushes Nick away from Sue Ellen. She has a bruise already beginning to form on her wrist. JR’s eyes darken with anger as he turns around to face Nick. “Ray…” Ray comes over and takes Sue Ellen in the house. Bobby stands back and lets JR do his thing. Nick pulls a gun on JR. JR doesn’t even flinch. “We handle things a little different down here in Texas, boy. Now if you want to fight, hand the gun to Bobby and we’ll fight. But if you want to shoot me, you better not miss, cause if you do I’ll kill ya.” Nick looks at JR and clicks the safety on and throws Bobby the gun.

JR doesn’t give him a minute before he tackles him to the ground and starts hitting him in the face. Nick tries to fight back and get in a few good punches, but he is not match for JR. JR holds Nick’s head up so her can look him in the eye. “Sue Ellen is mine. She always has been and always will be. You will not come here again, tomorrow you’ll tell John Cates he needs to find another analyst to take over. We clear on that Nick?” Nick spits blood onto the ground, “Yeah, we’re clear. Just so you know, I’ll be waiting for you to **** up, though. And Sue Ellen can run into my open arms and I’ll make everything better for her.” JR smiles at him, and then laughs, “You do that boy. You’ll be waiting a long, long time. Because I am never letting her go again.” He starts to turn away, but turns back to Nick, “Oh, just one more piece of advice, if you ever put your filthy hands on my wife again, I’ll break each of you fingers one by one, and then I’ll break each bone in your hand so you’ll never be able to use it again.” With that he takes Nick’s index finger and snaps it, causing Nick to cry. “Just so you know it wasn’t an idle threat, now get the hell off my ranch.” JR turns his back on the goomba and walks back into the house with Bobby following him. Nick drives off, furious at JR. “Oh you’ll pay for taking her away from me you sonofabitch, you’ll pay. And she will too.”

09-30-2004, 03:20 AM
Great update DMS! JR really beat the living sh*t outta him didn't he? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Robin
09-30-2004, 04:55 AM
Way to go, JR!!!!!!!!!

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 06:21 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dms22473:
"Tell me something princess, how long did it take for you to spread those pretty legs for him?” Sue Ellen slaps Nick hard across the face.
<span class="ev_code_RED">No he didn't run that slick greasy mouth like that. It's a good thing she bitch-slapped that goomba</span>

“We handle things a little different down here in Texas, boy. Now if you want to fight, hand the gun to Bobby and we’ll fight. But if you want to shoot me, you better not miss, cause if you do I’ll kill ya.” Nick looks at JR and clicks the safety on and throws Bobby the gun.

<span class="ev_code_RED">Damn straight, only a f***ing p***y pulls a freakin gun</span>

JR holds Nick’s head up so her can look him in the eye. “Sue Ellen is mine. She always has been and always will be." <span class="ev_code_RED">Damn right she it...and all you beeeatches best remember that...LMAO</span>

He starts to turn away, but turns back to Nick, “Oh, just one more piece of advice, if you ever put your filthy hands on my wife again, I’ll break each of you fingers one by one, and then I’ll break each bone in your hand so you’ll never be able to use it again.” With that he takes Nick’s index finger and snaps it, causing Nick to cry. “Just so you know it wasn’t an idle threat, now get the hell off my ranch.” <span class="ev_code_RED">Nice Big Daddy...I likes, break his ankles too like in Misery. LMAO</span>

I'm so glad Big Daddy slummed enough to put that goomba in his place. LMAO Great update, but I always want more.

SueEllen&JR4ever
09-30-2004, 06:29 AM
Excellent keep writing please!!!

dude
09-30-2004, 06:31 AM
J.R. Brewing--that's a review!

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 06:35 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Dude:
J.R. Brewing--that's a review! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Thanks Dude. BTW I LOVE THAT NEW TRAILER--IT WAS SOOO MOVING.

dms22473
09-30-2004, 07:16 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dms22473:
"Tell me something princess, how long did it take for you to spread those pretty legs for him?” Sue Ellen slaps Nick hard across the face.
<span class="ev_code_RED">No he didn't run that slick greasy mouth like that. It's a good thing she bitch-slapped that goomba</span>

“We handle things a little different down here in Texas, boy. Now if you want to fight, hand the gun to Bobby and we’ll fight. But if you want to shoot me, you better not miss, cause if you do I’ll kill ya.” Nick looks at JR and clicks the safety on and throws Bobby the gun.

<span class="ev_code_RED">Damn straight, only a f***ing p***y pulls a freakin gun</span>

JR holds Nick’s head up so her can look him in the eye. “Sue Ellen is mine. She always has been and always will be." <span class="ev_code_RED">Damn right she it...and all you beeeatches best remember that...LMAO</span>

He starts to turn away, but turns back to Nick, “Oh, just one more piece of advice, if you ever put your filthy hands on my wife again, I’ll break each of you fingers one by one, and then I’ll break each bone in your hand so you’ll never be able to use it again.” With that he takes Nick’s index finger and snaps it, causing Nick to cry. “Just so you know it wasn’t an idle threat, now get the hell off my ranch.” <span class="ev_code_RED">Nice Big Daddy...I likes, break his ankles too like in Misery. LMAO</span>

I'm so glad Big Daddy slummed enough to put that goomba in his place. LMAO Great update, but I always want more. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Well damn, thanks for the review...as always you kick ass....go ahead JRB witcha new body and shit...


<span class="ev_code_RED">ALright you lucky biiaatches you get another update today. Work is slow, plus these f*ckers made me stay an hour and a half past quitting time yesterday for a dumb ass safety meeting...bet if I stabbed a mutha in the bitch they'd be screaming about saftey LMFAO </span>


CHAPTER 14

Bobby empties the gun and puts it in his pocket. “You know that won’t be the last we see of him. How about we have a meeting after dinner in the library?” JR turns to look at him. “That’s fine. Thanks Bob.” JR goes to find his wife.

He finds her in her old bedroom in the bathroom. She is sitting on the floor, with her back up against the wall, knees bent, head resting on her forearms. JR looks at her for a moment without saying anything. She was a survivor. No matter what life threw at her, she always bounced back and landed on top. She was so strong, but sometimes, like know, JR knew how vulnerable she could be. She’d never let anyone see it except him and even then those instances were few and far between. JR sees the bruise instantly and his anger washes over him. He takes a deep breath before kneeling in front of her.

I was born a believer, biggest dreamer this world has ever seen
Ready to face most anything but learned that I was naive
Ran into things in life that I never planned
But that's what made me who I am
I've had highs and lows and seen my share of ups and downs
There's been nights it seemed there wasn't a friend to be found
I've had to save myself from drowning in a sea of tears.
But I'm still here

He doesn’t say anything as she lifts her head up and looks into his eyes. She smiles at him, and his heart almost explodes. How he loved that smile. The smiles that told him she may be hurt but she was not broken, and that she loved him, still.

('Cause) I, I'm a survivor
I won't let it get the best of me, I'll try my very best to be that strong
Oh, oh, oh, I, I'm a survivor
And I'll never give up, never let out, never give in
I'll just keep moving on

Oh
I was taught that honesty was simply the only way
I've spoken honestly and had it blow up in my face
Sometimes I look around and I don't know what I see
But I gotta believe in God above and what he's made me

He sat down with his legs out in front of him and pulled her into him. She wrapped her legs around him and he kissed her forehead. He took her hand so he could look at her wrist. His jaw muscle twitched in anger and he swore that if Nick put another mark on his wife, he would rip his heart out and bury him under the stables. “Does it hurt as much as it looks like it does?” He smiled at her kindly. “It’s ok, it hurts a little but it’s not broken.” JR turned it over and saw the deep scratch that Nick’s ring must have left. He reached behind him for the first-aid kit and cleaned the cut gently. When she winced, another jolt of rage coursed through him, but he quickly tried to bury it.

No
I've witnessed pride and ego destroy the kindest of hearts
Seen how greed can take the best of friends and tear them apart
Every corner, every turn, every lesson I have learned
Has helped me find my way

He finished cleaning and bandaging her wrist. He pulled her back into his arms and held onto her. “I’m sorry honey, I’m sorry my love for you always ends up hurting you.” Sue Ellen pulled back to look at him. “Hey, this is not your fault. Nick is responsible for his own actions. I love you JR. I really love you. Your love doesn’t always end up hurting me. It has in the past but we agreed that it was over and we were starting fresh right? This doesn’t change anything. We are survivors. Our love has survived everything we’ve ever done to each other. Now it’s time to get it right. This love is only going to bring joy and happiness.” JR hugs her and then kisses her lovingly. “You’re right. This time I’m going to love you like you deserve.” He hugs her close again, holding her in his arms. Sue Ellen held onto him. JR loved her and he would never let Nick hurt her again, of that she was sure. She felt protected, really protected for the first time in years.

I, I'm a survivor
I won't let it get the best of me, I'll try my very best to be that strong
Oh, oh, oh, I, I'm a survivor
And I'll never give up, never let out, never give in
I'll never give up, never let out, never givin
Oh no I'll, I'll never give up, never let out, never give in
I'll just keep moving on
I'm a survivor
Oh yes I am

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 07:33 AM
Could somebody hand me some tissues...Big D has teared up. The whole office is laughing at me. Just kidding, although I loved it. It was so tender and loving.

AWESOME job. I'm so glad we got two updates in one day. Yea!!!!

dms22473
09-30-2004, 08:09 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Could somebody hand me some tissues...Big D has teared up. The whole office is laughing at me. Just kidding, although I loved it. It was so tender and loving.

AWESOME job. I'm so glad we got two updates in one day. Yea!!!! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> It was salty wasn't it...You are some lucky tricks...two in one day...don't get used to it...LMAO

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 08:17 AM
We could go for three...hint, hint.

dms22473
09-30-2004, 08:19 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
We could go for three...hint, hint. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Y'all are some greedy ass heffers...I'll think about it...I be feeling a lil smut session comin' on...

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 08:21 AM
I could use some good smut, especially since Big Daddy is probably in a coma right now. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

And yes I am greedy http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 08:21 AM
Just no rollin chairs, K? ROFLMAO

dms22473
09-30-2004, 08:25 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
I could use some good smut, especially since Big Daddy is probably in a coma right now. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

And yes I am greedy http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO


<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR> Just no rollin chairs, K? ROFLMAO
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Oh sure laugh at a tricks misfortunes...I'm sticking to stable furniture...

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 08:29 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR> Just no rollin chairs, K? ROFLMAO
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Oh sure laugh at a tricks misfortunes...I'm sticking to stable furniture... <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

LMFAO...I just calls 'em like I sees 'em. LOL

dms22473
09-30-2004, 08:32 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR> Just no rollin chairs, K? ROFLMAO
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Oh sure laugh at a tricks misfortunes...I'm sticking to stable furniture... <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

LMFAO...I just calls 'em like I sees 'em. LOL <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> You crack me up...

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 08:34 AM
LMAO...oh no, here take this duct tape and put yourself back together. LMAO

Glad to be of service. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-30-2004, 08:37 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
LMAO...oh no, here take this duct tape and put yourself back together. LMAO

Glad to be of service. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> F*ck that duct tape...my ass is in need of a sling....

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 08:50 AM
ROFLMAO...btw where's that third update...Hmmmm? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-30-2004, 09:09 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
ROFLMAO...btw where's that third update...Hmmmm? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Greedy and impatient...KFC is feeling the need to flex her pimp hand and beat some ho's http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Slap.gif......You'll get it soon trick http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-30-2004, 09:10 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by MRM:
I know of some <span class="ev_code_RED">swings</span> you can put your a$$ in, but we may have a little trouble finding you a <span class="ev_code_RED">sling.</span> <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Ohh yeah...I saw that swing...I want one.... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 09:28 AM
I thought you were sticking to stable objects. LMAO http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
09-30-2004, 09:35 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
I thought you were sticking to stable objects. LMAO http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Well, it doesn't have wheels, so....as long as you put it up right...no one should get hurt...LMAO

dms22473
09-30-2004, 09:38 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by MRM:
The basket type swing is pretty stable ... IF you don't drink and ride at the same time. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO...wsn't it M&M that said she was shy, Big D????????

dms22473
09-30-2004, 09:51 AM
CHAPTER 15

Sometime later Sue Ellen looked into JR’s eyes. JR caught the lust creeping into her beautiful brown eyes. He picked her up and carried her to the bed, laying her across it. He smiles down at her as he removes his shirt and unbuckles his pants. He unbuttons her blouse slowly and tenderly. He carefully slides it off, watchful of her wrist. She reaches up to touch his face as he sweetly kisses her injured wrist. He lightly brushes his fingertips over her stomach and unbuttons her jeans, slowly sliding them off.

Looking at you, I can't believe that it's true
I've got someone who's crazy over me
Here and now, I am sure that I've found
What true love is and what love should to be

JR takes a moment to savor the beauty of his wife, lying there in matching white lace bra and panties. “Jesus Sue Ellen, do you know what the site of you does to me? You’re so beautiful, and I love you so much.” He leans over and kisses her passionately. He quickly rids himself of his clothes and enters her gently. Sue Ellen whispers his name, kissing him each time.

When you hold me then I know
That's where I belong and I don't want
To let you go
Nowhere in this world I'd rather be

He slowly slides in and out of her, savoring every second of being inside of her. “Honey, I love you…” He kisses her lips, and then licks all the way down to her nipples. He swirls his tongue around them before gently sucking each one.

You and I, can't deny, we can't deny
Heaven's here between your lips and mine
I promise I, I will never say good-bye
It's you and me 'til the end of time

It's just enough, all I've ever dreamed of
The love I pray for before I go to sleep
Just in time I never thought that I would find
Another reason to give all of me

Sue Ellen runs her hand through his hair as he continues sliding into her. She spreads her legs wider and wraps them around him. “I love when you wrap those sexy long legs around me. It’s the second best feeling in the world.” Sue Ellen smiles, “What’s the first?” JR grins at her, “Being inside of you. You’re so soft, and wet, and god you’re so warm…”

When you hold me then I know
That's where I belong and I don't want
To let you go
Nowhere in this world I'd rather be

You and I, can't deny, we can't deny
Heaven's here between your lips and mine
I promise I, I will never say good-bye
It's you and me 'til the end of time

JR hits her g-spot and stays inside of her, rotating his hips in a circular motion, causing her to cry out. “OH GOD…JR….” JR smiles down at hr when he feels her juices explode over him. He pushes into her deeper and then begins thrusting, increasing his pace. His orgasm slams into him as another hits Sue Ellen. JR stays inside of her for a moment and kisses her lips tenderly. “I love you wife.” She smiles as he rolls over bringing her with him. “I love you husband.” He holds on to her as she drifts off to sleep. JR thanks God for giving him a second chance. He kisses her forehead and whispers sleepily, “I swear I’ll never hurt you again, honey. I love you.”

You are the air that I breathe
I've seen all that I need to see
Finally I know
Love is what used to be when
I don't and I won't have to spend
Another night alone
You don't have to be alone

You and I, can't deny, we can't deny
Heaven's here between your lips and mine
I promise I, I will never say good-bye
It's you and me 'til the end of time
It's you and me 'til the end of time
It's you and me 'til the end of time

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 09:55 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by MRM:
The basket type swing is pretty stable ... IF you don't drink and ride at the same time. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO...wsn't it M&M that said she was shy, Big D???????? <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

I believe so. SHE LIED.

J.R. Brewing
09-30-2004, 09:58 AM
Excellent update....and so fast....perhaps a fourth?....just kidding.. I know you have responsibilities.

09-30-2004, 11:23 AM
Wonderful update dms--love the smut as usual, LOL http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif

Sarah
09-30-2004, 11:25 AM
http://www.world-of-smilies.de/html/images/smilies/tiere/reiter.gif ASSEMBLE TEAM!!!! Big Momma has been spotted with a shotgun heading down horseback towards I45. She is going to give the Italian Stallion a piece of her mind!!!

AWESOME UPDATES!!! THANK YOU!!!! http://us.i1.yimg.com/us.yimg.com/i/mesg/emoticons/35.gif

Mitzie
09-30-2004, 12:20 PM
You know what goes well with Homestyle Buffet pork ribs and mac n' cheese...yes, yes...it would be SMUT! Ah....thank you KFC.

It was so sad though, General Big Nut and his fat, mean crew got kicked out about 4 hours ago. Lil' hungry bastards ate the whole flippin' buffet, and then started grubbin' up on the straws, napkins, and even chewin' on the vinyl chairs. God, they are such cute, starving lil' motherf***ers! I am beaming with pride.

SueEllen&JR4ever
09-30-2004, 01:39 PM
Brilliant update

dms22473
09-30-2004, 01:56 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
You know what goes well with Homestyle Buffet pork ribs and mac n' cheese...yes, yes...it would be SMUT! Ah....thank you KFC.

It was so sad though, General Big Nut and his fat, mean crew got kicked out about 4 hours ago. Lil' hungry bastards ate the whole flippin' buffet, and then started grubbin' up on the straws, napkins, and even chewin' on the vinyl chairs. God, they are such cute, starving lil' motherf***ers! I am beaming with pride. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Personally, "Slim Shady" is my favorite renegade squirrel...we hang out and sing eminem records...

Nikie
09-30-2004, 03:05 PM
I just got to read all three of them and you did a great job my friend!!! I love the fight seen between JR and Nick....that was damn awesome!!!!

Robin
09-30-2004, 06:57 PM
Wonderful update, dms! I wanted to read it earlier but I was at work...You know how those computer techs are...they know what sites everyone is on...lol

dms22473
10-01-2004, 09:05 AM
<span class="ev_code_RED">you tricks get another smutty update....I must be having some fun....LMAO</span>

CHAPTER 16

JR wakes up to an empty bed. He looks over and sees the note, knowing Sue Ellen went running before he even looked at it. He reads the note, “Went running by the lake. Love you.” He quickly dresses and gets a breakfast together and drives to the lake.

He gets out of the car and watches her run for a moment. Damn she looked good. Those running shorts showed off her long lean legs and her little sports bra top showed her trim tummy. JR made a mental note that she wouldn’t be running anywhere but South Fork dressed like that. He didn’t want another man gawking at his wife. Sue Ellen spotted her husband and waved. He held up the picnic basket and walked to the lake, as Sue Ellen increased her pace to join him. He grabs her in a bear hug and kisses her. “I don’t much like waking up without you, woman. So maybe you can either go jogging later in the morning, or wake me up before you go. Ok?” She kisses him back. “Deal. I’m starved.” They sit and enjoy a picnic breakfast.

After eating, JR stretches out and lays his head in her lap. She looks down at him and kisses his forehead. “I love you.” JR smiles, “I love you too.” He is quiet for a moment. “Sue Ellen…” She cuts him off. “I know, you want me to have a bodyguard.” JR looks at her, “I know you hate them, but if yesterday was any indication of how that jackass is gonna be, I can’t leave you unprotected. Since I can’t be there with you all day…Please? Just for a little while?” Sue Ellen sighs in resignation. “Oh all right. Like I have a choice.” JR smiles and puts a hand behind her neck pulling her in for a deep kiss. “You have a choice, I can make love to you right here, or we can go home and take a shower together.” Sue Ellen smiles against his lips. “Hmmmm, let’s go with the shower. I promised John Ross we’d take him to the zoo today.” JR stands up and helps her to her feet. “Let’s go woman.” They drive home and Sue Ellen smiles at JR as they walk through the door. “Race ya..” and with that takes off up the steps rushing past Clayton. “Morning Clayon.” She calls to him as JR is fast on her heals. “Morning.” JR calls over his shoulder as he chases his wife. Clayton laughs and thinks how good it is to have Sue Ellen back at South Fork. Sue Ellen is almost to the bedroom door, when JR catches her. He throws her over his shoulder and carries her into the bedroom, both laughing out loud.

Lord almighty,
I feel my temperature rising
Higher higher
It’s burning through to my soul

Girl, girl, girl
You gonna set me on fire
My brain is flaming
I don’t know which way to go

They quickly strip and hop in the shower. JR pushes Sue Ellen against the wall and lifts her up in his arms. Her legs go around his waist as he enters her, causing both of them to moan out loud. Water cascades over them as JR thrusts into Sue Ellen. Sue Ellen kisses JR’s neck, and then bites it causing him to slam into her harder. Sue Ellen cries out his name in ecstasy.

Your kisses lift me higher
Like the sweet song of a choir
You light my morning sky
With burning love

Ooh, ooh, ooh,
I feel my temperature rising
Help me, I’m flaming
I must be a hundred and nine
Burning, burning, burning
And nothing can cool me
I just might turn into smoke
But I feel fine

JR captures her lips and kisses her, and thrusts his tongue inside her mouth. He squeezed her ass cheeks and continued his relentless pounding. Sue Ellen moaned against his mouth. “JR…”

Cause your kisses lift me higher
Like a sweet song of a choir
And you light my morning sky
With burning love

It’s coming closer
The flames are licking my body
Please won’t you help me
I feel like I’m slipping away
It’s hard to breath
And my chest is a-heaving

JR kisses her neck and bites her causing her to arch her back against the shower wall.

Lord almighty,
I’m burning a hole where I lay
Cause your kisses lift me higher
Like the sweet song of a choir
You light my morning sky
With burning love
With burning love
Ah, ah, burning love
I’m just a hunk, a hunk of burning love
Just a hunk, a hunk of burning love
Just a hunk, a hunk of burning love
Just a hunk, a hunk of burning love
Just a hunk, a hunk of burning love
Just a hunk, a hunk of burning love

JR increases his pace, both of them racing towards the edge, hitting it at the same time. JR sets her down and holds her as water washes over them. He kisses her lightly, then soaps up her body sensually. He starts at her neck slowly working his way down. Caressing each of her breasts and pinching each nipple between his soapy fingers. Sue Ellen moans and arches into him. He gets on his knees and soaps up her stomach and ass. He spreads her legs and soaps up her still wet *****. She grabs onto his shoulders as he pushes two fingers inside of her. He uses his thumb to caress her clit, smiling as she moans his name over and over. Sue Ellen digs her nails his shoulders as her orgasm slams in to her and he has to almost hold her up. He stands up and she starts to soap him up, smiling as she caresses his dick slowly. JR grabs hold of the doors to stay upright. “Christ woman.” She lets the water rinse the soap off as she slides to her knees and takes the length of him in her mouth, gently squeezing his balls in her hand. Sucking hungrily, it isn’t long before JR spills into her mouth. Swallowing his juices, she stands up and he takes her in his arms and holds her tight, as his feelings overwhelm him. She holds onto him as he mumbles her name and how much he loves her. They finish showering and get dressed.

JR sits on the bed while Sue Ellen finishes. She comes out in a white pullover and jeans unbuttoned. “Sweetheart can you button my jeans for me?” She holds her wrist up as a reason. JR’s jaw twitches in anger once again at Nicholas Pearce. “Stop. It happened, I’m fine and we’re together.” JR smiles at her simple reasoning as he buttons her jeans. “I love you.” He kisses her as John Ross comes flying through the door. He jumps on the bed yelling about going to the zoo. JR grabs him in mid jump throwing him over his shoulder. He holds Sue Ellen’s hand as the family goes downstairs.

10-01-2004, 09:34 AM
Wonderful update as usual, DMS! Love the shower scene http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-01-2004, 09:36 AM
Brilliant update, great smut what more could we ask for!

Sarah
10-01-2004, 10:32 AM
Hell YEAH!!! http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif That's the stuff!!!! http://www.planetsmilies.com/smilies/happy/1/happy64.gif

J.R. Brewing
10-01-2004, 11:11 AM
Yes, you are still the mistress of smut. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_cool.gif

dms22473
10-01-2004, 01:24 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Yes, you are still the mistress of smut. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_cool.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> yess I am...thank you...I have wonderful inspiration.... http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Kiss-On-Lips.gif

J.R. Brewing
10-01-2004, 01:26 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Yes, you are still the mistress of smut. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_cool.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> yess I am...thank you...I have wonderful inspiration.... http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Kiss-On-Lips.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

TOO much information.....what am I saying..details, details. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Nikie
10-01-2004, 01:39 PM
Great DMS!!! You are still the master at smut!!

Robin
10-01-2004, 10:58 PM
Great job, dms! I have one problem though. I wish you wouldn't update while I'm at work.. I'm afaid of gettin caught looking at smut! lol

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-02-2004, 07:57 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by SueEllenE_1967:
Great job, dms! I have one problem though. I wish you wouldn't update while I'm at work.. I'm afaid of gettin caught looking at smut! lol <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

LOL I had the same problem when I was using the internet cafes!!! You never know what people are reading over your shoulder!!

dms22473
10-02-2004, 12:43 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Yes, you are still the mistress of smut. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_cool.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> yess I am...thank you...I have wonderful inspiration.... http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Kiss-On-Lips.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

TOO much information.....what am I saying..details, details. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO We'd have to have a XXX rating for me to give details....LMAO Oh wait we already have that...

Dallasfan8304
10-02-2004, 12:45 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Yes, you are still the mistress of smut. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_cool.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> yess I am...thank you...I have wonderful inspiration.... http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Kiss-On-Lips.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

TOO much information.....what am I saying..details, details. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO We'd have to have a XXX rating for me to give details....LMAO Oh wait we already have that... <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>


Of course! You've inspired just about most of us to turn this into a smut corner http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
10-02-2004, 12:50 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Dallasfan8304:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Yes, you are still the mistress of smut. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_cool.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> yess I am...thank you...I have wonderful inspiration.... http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Kiss-On-Lips.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

TOO much information.....what am I saying..details, details. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO We'd have to have a XXX rating for me to give details....LMAO Oh wait we already have that... <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>


Of course! You've inspired just about most of us to turn this into a smut corner http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> KFC takes her bows... http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Thankyou.gif "I humbly thank you all for turning into smut writers. And allowing KFC to corrupt you all......LMAO

Robin
10-02-2004, 03:16 PM
Please update soon!

Sarah
10-03-2004, 09:28 AM
These banners are awesome!!! How do you do them?

dms22473
10-04-2004, 10:08 AM
CHAPTER 17

They all have a great time at the zoo and JR and SE take John Ross out to dinner. While there, they run into Nick who is there with Marilee Stone. After dinner Sue Ellen gets up to go to the ladies room, while JR pays the check. Nick discreetly follows her. As she comes out, he backs her against the wall. “Hello sunshine.” Sue Ellen looks up at him and cringes at his beat-up face. She finds herself touching his black eye.

He closes his eyes at her touch. He touches her wrist lightly, “I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt your wrist. Are you ok?” Sue Ellen smiles, “I know you didn’t mean it.” She sees his hand in a cast. “What happened?” Nick’s anger returns for a moment, “Ask your husband? He snapped my finger in half yesterday.” Sue Ellen looks at him horrified, “On purpose?” Nick smiles. “Yes on purpose. The fight was over and he picked my hand up and snapped my finger to teach me a lesson.” Sue Ellen starts to walk away but Nick slams her back against the wall. “I’m not done talking to you.” He puts his good hand around her neck, pinning her to the wall. “Why did you ruin everything? How could you do that to me, to us?” Sue Ellen can’t speak or breathe, since Nick is pushing on her larynx. JR walks out and rage crashes into him. JR’s eyes turn almost black with anger as he shoves Nick away from Sue Ellen. She slides to one knee trying to catch her breath as John Ross stands over his mother protectively. JR’s hands go around Nick’s neck and he starts to squeeze. Nick’s eyes start to roll back in his head. Security comes out from the restaurant and tries to restrain JR.

Nothing gets through to him until he hears John Ross call him, “Daddy, Momma needs you.” He abruptly lets go and kneels next to Sue Ellen who is holding her throat. Nick slides down the way and struggles to catch his breath. JR gently takes her hand away and new anger courses through him as he sees bruises forming on her neck already. “Sue Ellen, are you ok?” Sue Ellen looks at her husband and shakes her head. “Yes”, she whispers. “Let’s just go home.”

Arriving home, JR carries a sleeping John Ross upstairs as Sue Ellen tell Clayton and Ms Ellie what happened. Clayton is visible angry as Sue Ellen walks up the steps. He looks t Ellie, “I think it’s time Mr. Pearce and I had a little chat.” Ellie just looks on in worry.

Sue Ellen finds JR tucking John Ross in, reading him a story. He kisses John Ross’ head and shuts the book. “I’m sorry you had to see all that today son. I love your momma so much. When I saw that idiot with his hands on her, I just went crazy. That’s what your momma does to me. I love her, more than my life. I finally have her back and I won’t l anyone take her away again. We’re going to be a family John Ross, one big happy family. I promise.” Sue Ellen slips into the room and kisses John Ross as JR looks at her lovingly. He stands up and they walk out of his room, softly closing he door. They quietly make their way to their bedroom. Sue Ellen walks in and sits in the chair. JR closes the door and stares at her for a moment. He kneels in front of her and takes her hands in his. She pulls away and looks at him. “Did you break his finger on purpose?” She asks with her scratchy voice. JR stands up, “You’re god damn right I did, he’s lucky I didn’t break his neck.”

Sue Ellen looks at him and sighs. “I was hoping you would tell me no. Who are you? When did you become this violent? You almost killed him tonight.”

JR looks at her incredulously, “He almost killed you, or did the blood supply being cut off from your brain make you forget?"

Sue Ellen looks at him angrily. “No it’s a little hard to forget someone’s hands around your throat. You scare me.” JR looks at her, angry for a second and then kneels in front of her once more, “I would never strike you in anger. I did it one time in our life, and I swore I’d never do it again. I love you Sue Ellen, and it’s insane to think we’ll never fight, and no one can make me more angry than you can, but I would never hurt you.” She touches his cheek and feels her heart swell with love at the tender look in his eye. “I know. I’ve never seen this side of you and it worries me. Can we just stay away from Nick until he calms down?” JR kisses her hand, “Yes. I’m going to run downstairs for a nightcap, I’ll be back in a few minutes ok?” Sue Ellen sighs inwardly, “Sure.” JR closes the door and leans against it. Somehow, he would get rid of Nicholas Pearce, for good. He walks downstairs in search of a nightcap. Sue Ellen takes off her clothes and takes a hot shower trying desperately to fight for control of her emotions. Nick may have killed her if JR hadn’t come out. She’d never seen him so angry. She had hurt him and she felt sorry, but she loved JR more than life itself. And he loved her. She finally felt like she was home. As hot water washed away her torment, she prayed things would calm down. Little did she know they were about to spiral out of control.

J.R. Brewing
10-04-2004, 10:14 AM
I cannot believe that fugly sweater wearing wanna be had the nerve. Oh hell yeah, Big Daddy's got some connections of his own. It's time Pearce got the message.

Mitzie
10-04-2004, 10:27 AM
Oooooh, uh-uh...no he didn't! No HE DIDN'T!

I hope Big Daddy busts some straight ghetto, voodoo hurtdown on that business-in-the-front-and-party-in-the-back ugly-ass hair sportin', TJ Max sweater wearin', hung like a half-eaten Slim Jim motherf....

dms22473
10-04-2004, 10:29 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
Oooooh, uh-uh...no he didn't! No HE DIDN'T!

I hope Big Daddy busts some straight ghetto, voodoo hurtdown on that business-in-the-front-and-party-in-the-back ugly-ass hair sportin', TJ Max sweater wearin', hung like a half-eaten Slim Jim motherf.... <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMAO...get it all out Mitz...don't hold back... http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-04-2004, 12:39 PM
Please update soon, you're doing a great job

Nikie
10-04-2004, 02:51 PM
Great DMS!!!

J.R. Brewing
10-04-2004, 03:05 PM
I forgot to post earlier that I love this fic. Sorry.

dms22473
10-04-2004, 03:08 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
I forgot to post earlier that I love this fic. Sorry. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> See if you stopped drinking before noon, you woulda remember...LMAO

J.R. Brewing
10-04-2004, 03:17 PM
I haven't started drinking yet, but it is Karoake night and I have already told someone that I WILL need a ride home.

Mitzie
10-04-2004, 03:19 PM
UPDATE THIS BITCH, KFC...DO YOU HEAR ME?!?!?! I NEEEEEED AN UPDATE. HURRY UP, TRICK!!!!!!

AND WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING JRB!?!?! QUIT FLIPPIN' REPLYING TO THIS AND GO UPDATE YOURS....NOW!!!!!

help.

J.R. Brewing
10-04-2004, 03:21 PM
Sorry Mitz...no update this evenin. I'm just not feeling the groove.

Mitzie
10-04-2004, 03:27 PM
Oh....well, you are not feelin' the groove, how would you like to feel a lil' somethin' else, like my....Sorry, sorry, this smoking thing is kinda making me violent and downright frightening. In fact, my family has put a restraining order against me until I check myself into a facility. Facility, my ass...I will check myself into the cigarette cage at CostCo before that happens.

I mean it though, JRB...u-p-d-a-t-e!

Nikie
10-04-2004, 03:30 PM
I'm so glad that my smoking habits didn't turn into anything...after seeing Mitz...I'm so glad that I stopped!!! I wish JRB would update!!!

dms22473
10-04-2004, 03:45 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
UPDATE THIS BITCH, KFC...DO YOU HEAR ME?!?!?! I NEEEEEED AN UPDATE. HURRY UP, TRICK!!!!!!

AND WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING JRB!?!?! QUIT FLIPPIN' REPLYING TO THIS AND GO UPDATE YOURS....NOW!!!!!

help. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> I updated already today. KFC has got to catch up on her sleep cause she was gettin horizontal and freakydeaky last night with her fireman...I'll update tomorrow morning early...start your day off right....

Robin
10-04-2004, 07:24 PM
Awesome work, dms! I'll echo everyone else's comments by saying we need an update...like...now!

Regarding Nick's sweaters......ROFLMAO!!!! But weren't they sexy in the 80'? lol

http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

dms22473
10-05-2004, 03:26 AM
CHAPTER 18

JR stands by the fireplace with his drink, staring at a picture of him & Sue Ellen, taken right before she found out about Kimberly Cryder. Clayton comes in and gets a drink. Without turning around, “What are we going to do about Pearce?” JR looks at his drink and drowns it in one gulp. Walking over to the bar, he stands next to Clayton. “I’m going to find a way to get rid of him permanently.” Clayton finishes his drink and puts the glass down. “Let me know if you need any help.” Clayton walks away and JR looks after him, smiling.

He makes a phone call to Harry to find out everything about Nicholas Pearce. He got off the phone and looked at the picture once more. He closed his eyes reveling in the fact that he had his wife back and she was upstairs waiting for him. He opened his eyes and silently swore he’d do whatever he had to do to ensure her safety and to make sure she stayed with him. JR stared at Sue Ellen’s picture and was still amazed what just looking at her picture did to him. He started upstairs. For the year she was gone, he looked at her picture every night and fell asleep holding it. Now he had the real thing, and he was going to take advantage of that fact. He was rock hard as he climbed the steps.

Opening the door her found her lying in bed, naked. “Finally, what took you so long?” She smiled seductively at him. JR felt himself harden even more and took his shirt off, letting it fall on the floor. As he kicked his shoes off and unbuckled his pants, she threw the sheet back that was covering her. JR took a moment to look at her. Still so beautiful, so perfect. She was tan, lying against stark white sheets and the moonlight made her almost glow. Once he got to the edge of the bed he kicked his pants and boxers off. Seeing his hard **** standing erect, Sue Ellen smiled at him. He climbed into bed next to her, running his hands lightly over her body. She had taken the bandage off her wrist, but he still kissed it lightly and then set about kissing every other inch of her body, from her toes to her eyelids.

I just want to tell you all the things you are
And all the things you mean to me
You’ve been with me forever
Through the changes in my life
Through all the tears and laughter

JR supported himself over top of Sue Ellen smiling down at her. He kissed her and whispered, “I love you.” Sue Ellen touched his cheek lightly. “I know. I love you too.” She spread her legs for him and as he entered her, both cried out from the sensation.

When I find myself believing there’s no place to go
When I feel the loneliness inside my heart

You’re the answer to my prayers
And you’re with me everywhere
You’re my angel, miracle, you’re all I need tonight
Give me shelter from the rain
You breathe life in me again
You’re my angel, miracle, you’re all I need to know, tonight

JR thrust into her as she matched his rhythm. “Jesus honey, you feel so good,” JR whisper into her ear before he assaults her collarbone, biting it and sucking it, causing her to moan out loud. Sue Ellen ran his hands through his hair, moaning his name.

Life is just a moment
We’re blowing in the wind
We’re trying to find a friend
And only time can tell us
If win or if we lose
And who will stand beside us

When there’s darkness all around me
You’re the light I see
When I need someone to ease my troubled mind

JR increased his pace, and Sue Ellen spread her legs wider for him, allowing deeper access, but he knew he wouldn’t last, so he rolled over, putting Sue Ellen on top. She smiled at him for a moment and then started to move forward and then up and down. JR cupped her breasts in each had and pinched her nipples lightly. He smiled as he brushed his hand lightly towards her stomach. His finger gently pushed it’s way into her folds, finding her clit. As he rubbed it lightly, Sue Ellen knew she wouldn’t last long. She started riding him harder, as JR increased the pressure on her clit.

You’re the answer to my prayers
And you’re with me everywhere
You’re my angel, miracle, you’re all I need tonight
Give me shelter from the rain
You breathe life in me again
You’re my angel, miracle, you’re all I need to know, tonight

Sue Ellen’s orgasm crashed into her, and she grabbed JR’s other hand to hold onto. He smiled widely as he felt her tighten around his ****. She threw her head back and called out his name. He quickly flipped he over and spread her legs wide. He looked into her eyes before plunging into her deeply. After a few thrusts he felt her juices flow over him again and he felt his seed spurt inside of her. Out of nowhere a thought crashed into him, he hoped they had made a baby. He smiled to himself and stretched out next to her. JR pulled Sue Ellen into his arms. “I love you JR.” He pulled her into him tighter, “I love you too honey.”

You’re all I need tonight
All I need tonight
All I need tonight
You’re my angel

As sleep claims her she mumbles his name once again, which causes him to smile. Yes, another baby would be perfect, he thinks as sleep claims him as well.

You’re the answer to my prayers
And you’re with me everywhere
You’re my angel, miracle, you’re all I need tonight
Give me shelter from the rain
You breathe life in me again
You’re my angel, my miracle, you’re all I need to know, tonight

J.R. Brewing
10-05-2004, 04:13 AM
You know exactly how to start my morning off right, don't you? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif Great job. BTW I know how to take care of Pearce...make him sit and stare at himself in the mirror...between that nappy-ass hair and those butt ugly sweaters and shirts he wears....that's enough to kill anybody. No wonder the writers had him thrown off the balcony...Hell he probably commmitted suicide. LMAO

dms22473
10-05-2004, 04:45 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
You know exactly how to start my morning off right, don't you? http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif Great job. BTW I know how to take care of Pearce...make him sit and stare at himself in the mirror...between that nappy-ass hair and those butt ugly sweaters and shirts he wears....that's enough to kill anybody. No wonder the writers had him thrown off the balcony...Hell he probably commmitted suicide. LMAO <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO jrb...he probably did..."Oh my sweater is ugly..oh my hair is horrible...SE is better off without me"....aahahhhhh

J.R. Brewing
10-05-2004, 05:26 AM
BTW just for your info, I heard that new Tim McGraw/Nelly duet and you were right. It is AWESOME.

dms22473
10-05-2004, 06:24 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
BTW just for your info, I heard that new Tim McGraw/Nelly duet and you were right. It is AWESOME. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Told ya girl...When I first got that cd I played that shit non-stop for like 3 days....There's another song on there called "My Place"...it's good too...

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-05-2004, 07:37 AM
Brilliant update, excellent smut from the Queen of Smut

Dallasfan8304
10-05-2004, 07:40 AM
Excellent update DMS...I wonder what JR is gonna do about that Nick Pearce! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

J.R. Brewing
10-05-2004, 08:42 AM
He's gonna take one of those nappy sweaters and wring his freakin' neck. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
10-05-2004, 08:54 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
He's gonna take one of those nappy sweaters and wring his freakin' neck. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Hmmm, that's a thought...Or JR could just cut off all his hair... BTW tell your boss you didn't come there to work...LMAO

J.R. Brewing
10-05-2004, 08:58 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
BTW tell your boss you didn't come there to work...LMAO <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Hmmm...nah...you haven't seen my boss...He's kinda scary. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
10-05-2004, 09:02 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
BTW tell your boss you didn't come there to work...LMAO <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Hmmm...nah...you haven't seen my boss...He's kinda scary. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> So what girl...buck up... show him a woman pissed off can be much scarier...

Mitzie
10-05-2004, 09:13 AM
I will TELL you straight-up! Right now, with my twitches, my cravings and lack of sleep - I am scarier than both.

Have you guys ever had a dream where your breasts all of sudden had teeth and a thumb coming out of it, and had a sharp, crazy-ass fingernail? Seriously, I am not right this morning with stuck in head,

dms22473
10-05-2004, 09:15 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
I will TELL you straight-up! Right now, with my twitches, my cravings and lack of sleep - I am scarier than both.

Have you guys ever had a dream where your breasts all of sudden had teeth and a thumb coming out of it, and had a sharp, crazy-ass fingernail? Seriously, I am not right this morning with stuck in head, <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Dam skippy you ain't right...what the hell kinda dream was that??? You see a therapist or go back to smokin'...seriously... http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif

Mitzie
10-05-2004, 09:17 AM
Thanks for that great f****ing advice, KFC. Brilliant! Is that why you got fired from your local Suicide Hotline after the first call, when you said,"I dare you to do it, motherf****er!"

dms22473
10-05-2004, 09:20 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
Thanks for that great f****ing advice, KFC. Brilliant! Is that why you got fired from your local Suicide Hotline after the first call, when you said,"I dare you to do it, motherf****er!" <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Damn, how'd you know?? They said they would keep that shit quiet...hey that trick was crying about her boyfriend...al I said was she was d*ckmatized and to get over it...I told there were others with real problems...how was i supposed to know??

Robin
10-05-2004, 01:42 PM
Awesome update, dms....and smut....I can't wait to find out how JR is going to get rid of sweater boy!

dms22473
10-06-2004, 07:20 AM
CHAPTER 19

JR woke up to Sue Ellen kissing his face lightly. He pulled her closer and smiled without opening his eyes, “What time is it?” Sue Ellen whispered, “Almost 6, I’m going to go running.”

JR smiled, she remembered their deal. “Ok honey, I’ll go with you.” Sue Ellen looked at him, “Are you crazy? I don’t need a baby sitter and I run to actually be alone.” Sue Ellen got out of bed abruptly and got dressed. “I won’t be long.” JR looked after her as she shut the door softly. “Damn.” He fell back onto the bed staring at the ceiling. “Good job, boy. Now she’ll be pissed off.” Sue Ellen looked in on John Ross before walking downstairs and finding Clayton waiting for her.

“What are you doing up so early?” She eyed him suspiciously. “I was hoping to catch you. Want an old man to keep you company on your morning jog?” Clayton looked at her hopefully.

Sue Ellen sighed angrily, “Did JR put you up to this?” Clayton looked at her and put his hands up in mock surrender, “No, I really just wanted to talk to you.” Sue Ellen smiled, “Ok, maybe we can just take a brisk walk.” He hugged her, “Oh good, I thought you were going to make me jog.” She laughs at him as they walk out the door.

They walked briskly for about 20 minutes before stopping to watch the sunrise over the ranch. As she leaned against the fence, Clayton watched her. She was still as beautiful as she was the day he met her. He saw the bruises on her neck and immediately felt anger course through him.

She noticed the change in him. “Clayton, there’s nothing you can do to change what happened. It’s my fault anyway.” Clayton grasps her by the shoulder, “No it most certainly is not. Sue Ellen, I learned a long time ago, you can’t help who you love. We don’t get a choice. You love JR, and he loves you. No one will ever be able to replace you in his heart. You never got over him, no matter what you did to each other. You have a right to make any choice you want. I’m sure Nicholas is hurting, but that does not give him the right to hurt you.” Clayton pulls her to him as tears sting her eyes. He lets her cry in his arms until she gets it all out. “Clayton, what would I do without you?” She looks up at him and he smiles. “You’ll never have to worry about that. You’re the daughter I always wanted, and I’ll always be here for you and I’ll never let anyone get away with hurting you.”

He turned her loose, and smiles down at her, “Now I know you still want to run so go ahead. I’ll see you at breakfast ok?” She smiles, “Thanks. Tell my husband I’ll be around the stables, ok?” Clayton smiles as she runs off, “Ok. Be careful.” She waves in acknowledgement. Her thoughts start to clear after a ½ mile of running. How she loved this ranch. She had missed South Fork and the family. She missed JR most of all. Things just spiraled out of control when she left him. She had no intention of filing for divorce, but she had Nick telling her she should, and that they could have a life together. Her thoughts drift back to signing the divorce papers.

<span class="ev_code_red">Summer 1988

She walked into JR’s conference room with her lawyer and sat down across from JR. She wasn’t asking for any money and she agreed to share custody of John Ross with him. All that was left was to sign. Last night she had spent hours looking at her photo album remembering.

She stayed up all night and cried into her pillow
And fought off the urge to just break down and call
Last night to find the fault seemed so darn easy
But now whose to blame don't matter much at all
She thinks if she calls him it just shows weakness
So the hurt goes on with every tear she's cried
Ain't it sad to see a good love fall to pieces
Chalk another heartbreak up to foolish pride

JR had spent the night getting drunk in his room, cursing himself and his stupid pride. As much as he loved her, he knew he had hurt her enough. It was time to let her go. He’d find a way to get her back or die trying, but for now, he had to show her how much he really did love her. She had asked him that. She came to his office and begged him to let her go. He looked at those beautiful eyes filled with tears once again, and agreed to everything she wanted. So now here he was trying to drink her memory away, but it wasn’t working. He fell asleep listening to her favorite cd of love songs, holding her picture, and crying into his pillow.

Turn out the lights the competition's over
The stubborn souls are the losers here tonight
And while the bridges burn, another hard-hard lesson's learned
As through the ashes passion slowly dies
And this romance goes down to foolish pride

He relives every word they spoke in anger
He walks the floor and punches out the wall
To apologize to her would be so simple
But instead he cries I'll be damned if I'll crawl
If he loses her he's lost his best friend
And that's more then just a lover can provide
So he wrestles with emotions that defeat him
Chalk another love lost up to foolish pride

Sue Ellen signed the papers with a shaky hand. She slid the papers over to JR, and when their hands touched a jolt of electricity surged through him. He looked up into her eyes and fought for control. He looked at her for a moment before sadness washed over him as realization came over him. She signed them, so he had to, for her. He signed his name and that was it. The lawyers walked out of the room and JR and Sue Ellen for left alone in the conference room. She stood up. He whispered her name; so faint she almost didn’t hear it. She looked at him, “What?” JR stood up and stared into her eyes, “I’m sorry for everything. For every tear I ever made you cry. I hope you’ll find happiness. You deserve it more than anyone. I’ll always love you and if you ever need anything, I’ll be there.” Sue Ellen wanted to throw her arms around him and tell him she only needed him, but instead turned her back and walked to the door. “Goodbye JR.” She walked out with her head held high, but broke down as soon as she was safely in her car.

Turn out the lights the competition's over
The stubborn souls are the losers here tonight
And while the bridges burn, another hard-hard lesson's learned
As through the ashes passion slowly dies
And this romance goes down to foolish pride

JR walked back to his office and poured himself a drink. His heart broken, his pride wounded.

Chalk another heartbreak up to foolish pride </span>

Sue Ellen came back to the present shaking her head to clear it. Thank god that was all over. They were together and nothing could keep them apart now. She would do everything in her power to make sure it worked out between them this time, for her sake as well as his and John Ross’.

JR came downstairs, running into Clayton. He said good morning and Clayton told him Sue Ellen was by the stables. JR found her half way. As she saw him, she waved. A look of terror crossed JR’s face as he saw Nick behind her with a gun. Sue Ellen turned to see what he was looking at. Nick called her name as panic swept over her. She whispered his name as he shot her once in the abdomen. JR screamed her name as the shot echoed. Nick ran and JR ran over to Sue Ellen. He screamed, as the ranch hands came over to see what happened. They call for an ambulance and start looking for Nick.

JR cradles Sue Ellen in his arms. “Oh God…Sue Ellen…stay with me…open your eyes god damn it…Honey..” Sue Ellen opens her eyes for a moment. “JR it hurts.” JR rips his shirt off and holds it on the wound as the family comes running. “I know it does honey, it’s ok. The ambulance is on the way.” He puts pressure to stop the blood. God there’s so much blood. JR silently begs God to save her. The ambulance is heard in the distance. “A little while longer babe.” JR kisses her lips. She whispered to him, “I love you…” She closes her eyes as JR screams her name and the paramedics push him out of the way.

J.R. Brewing
10-06-2004, 09:34 AM
<span class="ev_code_RED">PG-13 RATING on this post. Mitz do not read!!!!</span>

You son-of-a-bitch Pearce!!!!!! Oh you're gonna get it now. YOU'RE GONNA GET IT!!!! THE GLOVES ARE OFF!!!!!!


BTW Why did you shock me like this. I just ate, and I come back from lunch to this? (JRB crosses arms and glares at KFC and don't even think about killin her off or else me and Elton will come over and you and Slim may be for dinner. Squirrel (yuck) for me and human (even yuckier) for Elton. Do not take our threats lightly. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gifhttp://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif ROFLFMAO

BTW I cannot wait until tomorrow, update this soon!!!!!!!!

Mitzie
10-06-2004, 09:40 AM
Oh God....OH GOD....OH GOD....SWEET JESUS, MOTHER OF GOD...OH HOLY SPIRIT!!!!

WHYYYYYYYYYY!?!?!

Did I not explain in great detail to the entire delegation of Team Ewing that I am trying to quit smoking?!?! Damn you, KFC!

OK...here is the paln for that foul-ass, Billy Ray Cyrus-lookin' motherf*****, I have sent a green beret, special force-type legion of squirrels to Southfork, and they have located that nasty fettucine-eatin' piece of sh*t and have slowly gnawed off his feet, so now he only has bllody nubs - he is going NOWHERE!

Go with that.

dms22473
10-06-2004, 09:43 AM
Oooohhhhh...Like Hanibal, but they had wild boars...gotcha Mitz...trust me he will get what he deserves...

dms22473
10-06-2004, 09:45 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
<span class="ev_code_RED">PG-13 RATING on this post. Mitz do not read!!!!</span>

You son-of-a-bitch Pearce!!!!!! Oh you're gonna get it now. YOU'RE GONNA GET IT!!!! THE GLOVES ARE OFF!!!!!!


BTW Why did you shock me like this. I just ate, and I come back from lunch to this? (JRB crosses arms and glares at KFC and don't even think about killin her off or else me and Elton will come over and you and Slim may be for dinner. Squirrel (yuck) for me and human (even yuckier) for Elton. Do not take our threats lightly. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gifhttp://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif ROFLFMAO

BTW I cannot wait until tomorrow, update this soon!!!!!!!! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Now JRB...you know I wouldn't kill our girl off...But you know JR is gonna go ballistic when he finds him...

Mitzie
10-06-2004, 09:52 AM
OK KFC...I NEED AN UPDATE, PRONTO!

Although, the wild, highly trained squirrels are holding that stupid footless sob, and his slowly bleeding to death until Big Daddy comes and finishes them off, I am in a bad way.

I haven't slept, had another bad dream (somethin' really nasty with Linda Evans, do not ask) and those damn squirrels stole my crazy red eye in the middle of the night and played some games with it, now it is stuck in their Lite-Brite game and it is glowing like flippin" Rudolph's nose.

10-06-2004, 10:38 AM
I hope JR shoots the bastard! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-06-2004, 11:12 AM
Excellent but you've got to update soon, we need to know if SE is okay. I think JR should do something really painful to Nick but I can't say what here!

BTW DMS you better update soon because if Big Momma catches your last episode she'll have a heart attack

dms22473
10-06-2004, 01:04 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
OK KFC...I NEED AN UPDATE, PRONTO!

Although, the wild, highly trained squirrels are holding that stupid footless sob, and his slowly bleeding to death until Big Daddy comes and finishes them off, I am in a bad way.

I haven't slept, had another bad dream (somethin' really nasty with Linda Evans, do not ask) and those damn squirrels stole my crazy red eye in the middle of the night and played some games with it, now it is stuck in their Lite-Brite game and it is glowing like flippin" Rudolph's nose. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Linda Evans???? http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/22_yikes.gif Well atleast you didn't dream about Nick...ROFLMFAO

J.R. Brewing
10-06-2004, 01:56 PM
Okay now, I just got back in my office and imagine my surprise....no update....what is up with that? (JRB grins evilly and plots) http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

BTW I didn't really think you'd try to kill her, but in the stomach. I mean couldn't it have been the leg or the arm. The shoulder even? Anywhere, but the damn baby area? Build us all up with that baby stuff...then crush us like this....Elton is extremely worried about me, I've already drunk two cases of the Green Apple Smirnoff and have started on the third. Please hurry.

Nikie
10-06-2004, 02:21 PM
Oh MY GOD!!!! What are you trying to do!?!?!?! I'm with Jane...better update before Sarah reads that!!!!! http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/sosad.gif http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/user.gif

dms22473
10-06-2004, 02:59 PM
<span class="ev_code_RED">all right you tricks betta calm down...Thsi is for Mitz & JRB...cause Mitz is going insane and JRB said I pissed in her wheaties this morning....</span>

CHAPTER 20

JR rides with Bobby because the ambulance won’t let him ride with SE. The whole family races to the hospital. JR struggles to keep from screaming, as Bobby floors the gas, keeping up with the ambulance. They pull up front and JR races inside, staying next to her until he can’t go any further. JR is covered in her blood, and finally realizes it. He looks down at his hands and falls to his knees in the hall. Bobby comes up behind him and puts a hand on his shoulder. JR stands up and tries to control his emotions. He calmly walks to the nurse’s station and asks where the chapel is. He walks in and closes the door. He sits in the pew and prays for Sue Ellen’s life. “Please, I know I don’t deserve her, but she doesn’t deserve this. I know you’re not supposed to make bargains, but I swear, if you let her live, I’ll try to change my life. I’ll make amends; I’ll do right by people in business, whatever it takes. Just don’t take her from me. Please don’t let John Ross lose his mother.” JR’s tears fall freely down his face. “I won’t make it without her. I had a hard time waking up each day when she wasn’t with me, but if she’s gone, I don’t want to live. Please God, please let her be okay.” JR sits there for about an hour reminiscing and praying.

How do I get through the night without you
If I had to live without you
What kinda life would that be
Oh I need you in my arms, need you to hold
You are my world, my heart, my soul

If you ever leave
baby you would take away
everything good in my life
and tell me now

JR finally gets up and finds his family. He sits down next to his mother and picks up John Ross. John Ross holds on to his father tightly. “Daddy, is Momma going to be ok?” JR fights for control as he speaks, “She has to be son, because we love her too much to let her go.” The family is quiet as they wait. After a few hours, JR asks Ms Ellie to take the boys home. Ellie tells Clayton to stay. She leaves and takes the boys home. JR lets his head drop into his hands.

How do I live without you?
I want to know
How do I breathe without you?
If you ever go
How do I ever, ever survive
How do I, how do I, oh how do I live

Suddenly he stands up, “Where is the god damn doctor?” AT that moment the doctor comes in. JR rushes over to him, “How is my wife?” The doctor gestures for him to sit. He sits next to JR and starts to explain. “Some one was watching over your wife Mr. Ewing. We removed the bullet, which thankfully didn’t do any irreparable damage to her organs. She lost a lot of blood, but we gave her a transfusion. She’ll be here for a while, but we expect a full recovery. JR closes his eyes, and fights for control once again. “There was one small problem. She lost the baby.” JR looks at him questioningly. “You didn’t know? She looked to be about 6 weeks pregnant, but she lost too much blood for us to save the baby. The good news is there was no damage to the placenta or any other organs, so you’ll be able to have more children. They’re moving her into a private room now; a nurse will come and get you when she’s settled.” He stands up and JR shakes his hand. “Thank you.” The doctor nods and walks out. JR sinks into the chair, as his body starts to shake with relief. Clayton excuses himself, “I’ll call your mother.” Bobby sits next to his brother and puts an arm around him. JR looks at him and smiles through his tears, “She’s going to be okay Bob.” Bobby hugs him, “Maybe we should find some clothes for you before you see her huh? You’re a mess.” JR laughs at him, “Yeah I guess I am.” Clayton walks back in with some scrubs for JR. “This is all they had. They said you could use the bathroom at the end of the hall.” JR gets up and embraces him. “Thanks Clayton.” He goes to clean up.

Without you
There would be no sun in my sky
there would be no love in my life
there'd be no world left for me

And I, baby, I don't know what I would do
I'd be lost if I lost you

If you ever leave
baby you would take away
everything real in my life
and tell me

JR cleans up and looks in the mirror. “Thank you God…Thank you.” He comes out and goes to SE’s room. He sits beside her, carefully picking up her hand and kissing it. “Hi darlin’. The doctor said you’re going to be fine. Thank God because I can’t live without you. I love you so much.” JR sits quietly by her bed occasionally talking to her.

How do I live without you
I want to know
How do I breathe without you
If you ever go
How do I ever, ever survive
How do I, how do I, oh how do I live

Please tell me baby how do I go on

If you ever leave
baby you would take away everything
need you with me
baby don't you know that you are
everything good in my life

She opens her eyes a few hours later and whispers his name. He looks at her and kisses her lips. “Hey…hey..you look beautiful..” She smiles slightly, “I’m sure.” “The doctor said you’re going to be fine, don’t worry about anything right now.” She closes her eyes for a moment, “Will you stay with me?” JR laughs lightly, “Are you kidding me? Did you think I would let anyone keep me from you? I’m not leaving this room until you do. Sleep, you’re safe honey. I’m right here. I love you.”

And tell me now
How do I live without you
I want to know
How do I breathe without you
if you ever go
how do I ever, ever survive
how do I, how do I, oh how do I live

Sue Ellen whispers sleepily, “Love you too.” He watches her sleep for a while and slowly falls asleep himself, not letting go of her hand.

How do I live without you?
How do I live without you, baby?
How do I live without you?

Dallasfan8304
10-06-2004, 03:19 PM
Wonderful update DMS! LOVED IT! More soon! I want to see JR Take down that bastard!!! http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_mad.gif

Nikie
10-06-2004, 03:19 PM
Aww, that was so beautiful!! http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/sosad.gif I'm so glad SE is alright...sad about the baby. But, I'm getting my rifle out and loading it and ready to start a group to look for Nick!!!!

Mitzie
10-06-2004, 03:29 PM
That was beautiful, KFC. I am crying in my tannons and all over my nun gear, and the squirrels keep handing me tissues.

Now, I am really, really, really ready for Big Daddy to lay some unholy anger on nasty N***. But one question, SE is supposed to be 6 wks. preggers, she and JR have not been together that long have they, cuz if you have it be that devil-spawned bastard's baby (even if it is gone) I will be very, very upset.

PS - For the record, I am NOT insane, just a tad delusional with violent tendencies and a slight multiple personality problem, you know the whole Burt Reynolds thing. But that is it. I am officially offended, and JRB needs to quit urinating in peoples food, it is not very becoming of...uh...uh..I think I can type it...you know...a lady.

dms22473
10-06-2004, 04:12 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
That was beautiful, KFC. I am crying in my tannons and all over my nun gear, and the squirrels keep handing me tissues.

Now, I am really, really, really ready for Big Daddy to lay some unholy anger on nasty N***. But one question, SE is supposed to be 6 wks. preggers, she and JR have not been together that long have they, cuz if you have it be that devil-spawned bastard's baby (even if it is gone) I will be very, very upset.

PS - For the record, I am NOT insane, just a tad delusional with violent tendencies and a slight multiple personality problem, you know the whole Burt Reynolds thing. But that is it. I am officially offended, and JRB needs to quit urinating in peoples food, it is not very becoming of...uh...uh..I think I can type it...you know...a lady. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Mitz...offended why? I made no mention of your lite-brite eye, or you hand clawing body parts, or the Linda Evans dream... As for the baby, yes it was Nick's...but check yo self girl...it's gone...I was gonna have her find out she was preggers and wait for a paternity test...but that was too much like John Ross (not quite) but too close...as for JRB she was a tad upset with me shooting SE, so I had to make both of you feel better

Robin
10-06-2004, 04:30 PM
That was great, dms! Simply awesome...

Mitzie
10-06-2004, 04:49 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
That was beautiful, KFC. I am crying in my tannons and all over my nun gear, and the squirrels keep handing me tissues.

Now, I am really, really, really ready for Big Daddy to lay some unholy anger on nasty N***. But one question, SE is supposed to be 6 wks. preggers, she and JR have not been together that long have they, cuz if you have it be that devil-spawned bastard's baby (even if it is gone) I will be very, very upset.

PS - For the record, I am NOT insane, just a tad delusional with violent tendencies and a slight multiple personality problem, you know the whole Burt Reynolds thing. But that is it. I am officially offended, and JRB needs to quit urinating in peoples food, it is not very becoming of...uh...uh..I think I can type it...you know...a lady. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Mitz...offended why? I made no mention of your lite-brite eye, or you hand clawing body parts, or the Linda Evans dream... As for the baby, yes it was Nick's...but check yo self girl...it's gone...I was gonna have her find out she was preggers and wait for a paternity test...but that was too much like John Ross (not quite) but too close...as for JRB she was a tad upset with me shooting SE, so I had to make both of you feel better <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Look, the Lite-Brite incident has passed and I have my eye back, but I keep getting these electrical shocks in my socket and it makes me more tense than usual, and as far as the teeth/sharp thumb/breast dream - I am still freaked out and I called some of my friends and inquired about it and the common response I got was "Uh Girl, that is some sh*t, and you are a freak", and the Linda Evans thing is even weirder cuz I don't even watch Dyansty and she was all up in her Krystle regalia with these huge ass shoulder pads and was doing something funkay. But my offense comes from the insane comment, come on girl, I am sensitve. See I am crying again.

OK , I can accept the N*** baby thing, as long as there was no paternity crap and the poor lil' half-devil, seahorse is put to rest.

PS - With all of you awesome writers in these fics keep injuring JR or SE, you are keeping them from ideal health, which does not lead to ideal smut. Therefore, a healthy JR & SE = healthy smut. Just a thought.

J.R. Brewing
10-06-2004, 04:51 PM
I was not a tad upset. I was downright IRATE. LMAO. However the test drive of the convertible relieved some tension...now I just have to decide whether to sign my life away for the next four years.

BTW..I loved the update, and it's a damn good thing she lost that goomba's baby, BUT how's Big Daddy gonna feel about that? I am still NOT completely happy. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Nikie
10-06-2004, 05:04 PM
Hey Mitz,

I think I added some smut a couple of nights ago to a healthy JR/SE...its their daughter who needs to learn how to have sex without killing herself... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Mitzie
10-06-2004, 05:09 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by JeannieFan4ever:
Hey Mitz,

I think I added some smut a couple of nights ago to a healthy JR/SE...its their daughter who needs to learn how to have sex without killing herself... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Yes you did and Mitzie appreciates it very much, you know with all this nicotine gum coarsing through my clogged veins. I am very concerned about Cassidy, she is very accident prone and she embodies how dangerous sex can be, well that an swimming pools, horses, cars in Atlanta, fences...well the girl is flippin' walking commercial for HMO's - you get my drift.

Nikie
10-06-2004, 05:20 PM
That car accident in Altanta is not her fault. It's Lucy because she was the one driving...she happenly had been the car but later I will explain it because it comes in later the story about it. And the swimming pool...she wasn't having sex then. James just couldn't kept his dirty paws off of her and they're coming back in very soon. SO I would watch out. And the horse thing...well...I can't help I did that...I just thought it would be interesting. I'm a champion horse rider. I was only a beginner in jumping fences but I shouldn't have jump that tall one. Oh well.

dms22473
10-07-2004, 01:34 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
That was beautiful, KFC. I am crying in my tannons and all over my nun gear, and the squirrels keep handing me tissues.

Now, I am really, really, really ready for Big Daddy to lay some unholy anger on nasty N***. But one question, SE is supposed to be 6 wks. preggers, she and JR have not been together that long have they, cuz if you have it be that devil-spawned bastard's baby (even if it is gone) I will be very, very upset.

PS - For the record, I am NOT insane, just a tad delusional with violent tendencies and a slight multiple personality problem, you know the whole Burt Reynolds thing. But that is it. I am officially offended, and JRB needs to quit urinating in peoples food, it is not very becoming of...uh...uh..I think I can type it...you know...a lady. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Mitz...offended why? I made no mention of your lite-brite eye, or you hand clawing body parts, or the Linda Evans dream... As for the baby, yes it was Nick's...but check yo self girl...it's gone...I was gonna have her find out she was preggers and wait for a paternity test...but that was too much like John Ross (not quite) but too close...as for JRB she was a tad upset with me shooting SE, so I had to make both of you feel better <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Look, the Lite-Brite incident has passed and I have my eye back, but I keep getting these electrical shocks in my socket and it makes me more tense than usual, and as far as the teeth/sharp thumb/breast dream - I am still freaked out and I called some of my friends and inquired about it and the common response I got was "Uh Girl, that is some sh*t, and you are a freak", and the Linda Evans thing is even weirder cuz I don't even watch Dyansty and she was all up in her Krystle regalia with these huge ass shoulder pads and was doing something funkay. But my offense comes from the insane comment, come on girl, I am sensitve. See I am crying again.

OK , I can accept the N*** baby thing, as long as there was no paternity crap and the poor lil' half-devil, seahorse is put to rest.

PS - With all of you awesome writers in these fics keep injuring JR or SE, you are keeping them from ideal health, which does not lead to ideal smut. Therefore, a healthy JR & SE = healthy smut. Just a thought. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Ok you're not insane, a little twisted maybe, but not insane...half-devil seahorse???? LMFAO, Thanks for making me choke on my bagel....Damn where do you come up witht his shit cause it is funny as hell... Healthy JR/SE ok...gotcha

dms22473
10-07-2004, 02:23 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Okay now, I just got back in my office and imagine my surprise....no update....what is up with that? (JRB grins evilly and plots) http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

BTW I didn't really think you'd try to kill her, but in the stomach. I mean couldn't it have been the leg or the arm. The shoulder even? Anywhere, but the damn baby area? Build us all up with that baby stuff...then crush us like this....Elton is extremely worried about me, I've already drunk two cases of the Green Apple Smirnoff and have started on the third. Please hurry. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Green apple is da bomb...the orange is good too. I'm on a Schmirnoff Ice Triple Black kick right now...that's some good shit too.

Sarah
10-07-2004, 02:52 AM
OK, so I'm already in tears over the divorce papers being signed and then she gets shot. WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO TO ME???!! http://images.bravenet.com/brpics/smilie/sosad.gif

THAT http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Soapbox.gif PEARCE IS MINE!!!!!!!

Sarah
10-07-2004, 02:55 AM
The blood for the transfusion was Big Momma's. She gave it all to Sue Ellen, and is now dead herself. But it was worth it. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

BRILLIANT BRILLIANT UPDATE!!!! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

dms22473
10-07-2004, 03:43 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Sarah B:
The blood for the transfusion was Big Momma's. She gave it all to Sue Ellen, and is now dead herself. But it was worth it. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

BRILLIANT BRILLIANT UPDATE!!!! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_smile.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Thank you Big Momma http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Thankyou.gif

dms22473
10-07-2004, 07:14 AM
<span class="ev_code_RED">You lucky tricks get another update...KFC is so good to all of you...</span>

CHAPTER 21

Sue Ellen stays sedated for the next week. Clayton brings him a change of clothes and stays with Sue Ellen while JR talks with the doctor in his office. “Dr. Mills, I don’t want my wife to know she was pregnant. No one is to discuss anything with her unless I’m in the room.” The doctor looks up at him, “Mr. Ewing I can’t possibly keep that information from her.” JR grins evilly, “Oh I think you can, or your wife will find out about that cute little nurse you’ve been seeing on your lunch hour.” The doctor looks at him for a minute. “Fine, Mr. Ewing your wife will not find out from me she was pregnant.” JR looks at him for a moment, “I want it erased from her files by the end of the day. When can she go home?” The doctor looks at her chart, “She’s healing beautifully, we started to wean her off the sedative yesterday and she’ll probably be able to go home in a few days.” JR puts his hat on, “Thanks Doc, I appreciate your cooperation.”

JR leaves and goes back into her room. JR has already told Bobby & Clayton Sue Ellen was not going to know about the baby. “Did you talk to the doctor?” JR smiled, “Yep. Everything is fine. She’ll be able to go home in a few days.”

Sheriff Washburn comes into the room. “Mr. Ewing, Mr. Farlow.” JR nods, “What can I do for you Fenton?” Fenton takes off his hat, “I just wanted to let you know we still haven’t found Mr. Pearce yet.” JR’s face contorts in anger, “Fenton, don’t come to me with bad news. You better hope you find him before we do. If we find him first, you won’t have to worry about a trial.” Fenton sighs, “Now JR, I told you…” JR raises his voice and cuts him off. “Fenton, I don’t give a damn what you said. He almost killed my wife. You know what I’ll do when I find him. Bye Fenton.” Fenton quietly walks out.

JR takes a seat next to Sue Ellen. He takes her hand as Clayton sits on the other side. Sue Ellen opens her eyes and smiles at she sees her husband and Clayton. “Hello boys. Been waiting for me long?” Clayton and JR laugh out loud. “Honey, I’d wait forever just see you smile.” Sue Ellen smiles at him lovingly as he leans up to kiss her lips gently but lovingly. JR lets Clayton hug her and then Clayton excuses himself. JR asks him to bring John Ross up after school. JR sits back down and looks at her. She brings her hand up to caress his cheek. He kisses her hand and holds on to it trying to control his emotions. His voice cracks as he speaks, “I missed you.” She looks at him and scoots over carefully and pats the bed. He climbs in next to her and wraps his arms around her carefully, both of them savoring the feeling. She whispers to him, “I missed you. I love you JR.” JR kisses her forehead, “I love you too.”

Remember that blue crystal sky
The sun reflected in your eyes
Kissed me unexpectedly
A moment I just can't forget
We filled the air with promises
Took them up so tenderly
But life never asks you what you want
It's just gonna have its way
Sometimes it doesn't give like it takes

“So, what did the doctor say?” Sue Ellen asks. “He said you are recovering beautifully. No permanent damage, not even much of a scar after awhile.” Sue Ellen smiles, “Thank God for that.” JR kisses her head again, “I figured you’d be happy about that. He also said you could go home in a few days.” Sue Ellen plays with JR’s ring on his ring finger, “Good. I’ll be glad to get home.”

If I never see your face
If wings take you away from me
And tomorrow never happens, baby
If the world comes tumbling down
And crumbles all around us
Fate turns cruel
You're on your knees
So desperate for one truth
Know that I have loved you

“Not as glad as we’ll be to have you home. John Ross has been drivin’ Momma crazy. He’s been worried sick about you.” “Just like his father?” JR closes his eyes for a moment. “Sue Ellen…I almost lost you…Christ I’ve never felt so helpless. I knew I’d never get to you in time to push you out of the way. When the gun went off…it was like being in a nightmare I couldn’t wake up from.”

Don't think I'll write another letter
Or watch another pink sunset
Without thinking about you
I take a walk along the blue seaside
How will I sleep at night
How will I wipe the tears from your eyes

If I never see your face
If wings take you away from me
And tomorrow never happens, baby
If the world comes tumbling down
And crumbles all around us
Fate turns cruel
You're on your knees
So desperate for one truth
Know that I have loved you

“Well, everything is ok now. It’s all going to be fine. How long do you think it will be before I’m recovered enough to resume normal activities?” she asks smiling. JR strokes her arm, “Too long, sugar. Too long. I think I’ll be taking a lot of cold showers.”

Without a single hesitation
Without thought or reservation
Baby, I'll be waiting
Even if I never see your face
And wings take you away from me
And tomorrow never happens, baby
If the world comes tumbling down
And crumbles all around us
Fate turns cruel
You're on your knees
So desperate for one truth
Know that I have loved you

I have loved you

If I never see your face
If wings take you away from me
With all my heart and all my soul
The world comes tumbling down
And crumbling all around
I have loved you

Sue Ellen drifts off to sleep, and JR thinks about the baby. God help him, she was glad she lost it. If she hadn’t, JR knew she may have left him, for no other reason that so the baby knew its father. She was that type of mother. She even let John Ross live at South Fork with him, even when he was being an asshole, Sue Ellen never said anything to John Ross. He loved her for that, more than she would ever know. JR knew he would have never been able to raise someone else’s child, especially Nicholas Pearce’s. The thought of his wife having Nick’s baby makes JR sick to his stomach. JR lets a small smile escape, but it was okay now. It was gone and they could have another baby. When he got his hands on Pearce, JR thought, he would make him suffer beyond reason. Oh yes he would pay for hurting Sue Ellen, and pay for it dearly. He would make sure Sue Ellen never found out about that dam baby. He would protect her from any more pain and suffering with his last breath.

If I never see your face
If wings take you away from me
I have loved you

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-07-2004, 07:22 AM
Excellent Please write some more

dms22473
10-07-2004, 07:28 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Sue Ellen & JR 4ever:
Excellent Please write some more <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> You tricks are so greedy http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-07-2004, 07:42 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Sue Ellen & JR 4ever:
Excellent Please write some more <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> You tricks are so greedy http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

You can't blame us for trying

Mitzie
10-07-2004, 07:54 AM
This lil' greedy biatch, here, wants more - or at least until you get through her healing process and they can roll around in the smut like chocolate chips on an ice cream cone.

Excellent KFC, but I am still having a rough time with why the hell JR is keeping that lil'seahorse a secret from SE. First it is gone. Second the father is an extra on the movie American Werewolf Wears Bad Sweaters set, and her tried to kill her. What does it matter? She is going to find out, probably when flickin' falls off a cliff, cuz you assess keep jackin' her ass up, and the doctor will see all the white-out on her chart, and then JR is in the doghouse and THEN there is no SMUT.

dms22473
10-07-2004, 08:01 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
This lil' greedy biatch, here, wants more - or at least until you get through her healing process and they can roll around in the smut like chocolate chips on an ice cream cone.

Excellent KFC, but I am still having a rough time with why the hell JR is keeping that lil'seahorse a secret from SE. First it is gone. Second the father is an extra on the movie American Werewolf Wears Bad Sweaters set, and her tried to kill her. What does it matter? She is going to find out, probably when flickin' falls off a cliff, cuz you assess keep jackin' her ass up, and the doctor will see all the white-out on her chart, and then JR is in the doghouse and THEN there is no SMUT. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> You are so hard to get along with these days.....JR won't end up in the dog house...calm yourself...There will be smut...extra-hot steamy freakydeaky lovin...

Robin
10-07-2004, 08:05 AM
Come on, DMS! We wanna see JR open a can of whoop-ass on sweater boy! http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

Mitzie
10-07-2004, 08:09 AM
Hey there lil' cowgirl...I wonder why I am being a lil' difficult these, I have terrible nightmares (I will NOT tell you about last nights), you and JRB are turing the twins into freaks, Jane sold me out on .2 secs under the threat of Big Momma's happy faces and capped letters on the Dead Serious Round Robin Thread, JR is about to meet Cally on Soapnet...must I go on.

And as far as the smut, bring it ON!

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-07-2004, 08:11 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
Hey there lil' cowgirl...I wonder why I am being a lil' difficult these, I have terrible nightmares (I will NOT tell you about last nights), you and JRB are turing the twins into freaks, Jane sold me out on .2 secs under the threat of Big Momma's happy faces and capped letters on the Dead Serious Round Robin Thread, JR is about to meet Cally on Soapnet...must I go on.

And as far as the smut, bring it ON! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Hey Mitzie, I'm sorry I dropped you in it!

dms22473
10-07-2004, 08:12 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
Hey there lil' cowgirl...I wonder why I am being a lil' difficult these, I have terrible nightmares (I will NOT tell you about last nights), you and JRB are turing the twins into freaks, Jane sold me out on .2 secs under the threat of Big Momma's happy faces and capped letters on the Dead Serious Round Robin Thread, JR is about to meet Cally on Soapnet...must I go on.

And as far as the smut, bring it ON! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> I know sweetie...that's why I stopped watching SOapnet...do tell about your dream though...please???

dms22473
10-07-2004, 08:14 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Sue Ellen & JR 4ever:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
Hey there lil' cowgirl...I wonder why I am being a lil' difficult these, I have terrible nightmares (I will NOT tell you about last nights), you and JRB are turing the twins into freaks, Jane sold me out on .2 secs under the threat of Big Momma's happy faces and capped letters on the Dead Serious Round Robin Thread, JR is about to meet Cally on Soapnet...must I go on.

And as far as the smut, bring it ON! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Hey Mitzie, I'm sorry I dropped you in it! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Now she's sorry...LMFAO

Mitzie
10-07-2004, 08:14 AM
That was raw, Jane. But what about you? Although much appreciated at the time, you continued to write an add-on to SE's misfortunate flatulence...does "Gone With The Wind" ring a bell?

LMFAO

J.R. Brewing
10-07-2004, 08:16 AM
Great update. I love that Big Daddy kept it from her. Such a Big Daddy thing to do. He should tell Pearce that he killed his own baby, then drop him off a tall cliff someplace. High enough so he can think about it all the way down. I with the rest of these tricks, more.

And before anybody says anything, look for an update from me this evening. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Mitzie
10-07-2004, 08:18 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Great update. I love that Big Daddy kept it from her. Such a Big Daddy thing to do. He should tell Pearce that he killed his own baby, then drop him off a tall cliff someplace. High enough so he can think about it all the way down. I with the rest of these tricks, more.

And before anybody says anything, look for an update from me this evening. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Which one of your fics, trick!?!?! Hey and thanks for sticking up for me in the Dead Serious Thread....ho!

dms22473
10-07-2004, 08:20 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Great update. I love that Big Daddy kept it from her. Such a Big Daddy thing to do. He should tell Pearce that he killed his own baby, then drop him off a tall cliff someplace. High enough so he can think about it all the way down. I with the rest of these tricks, more.

And before anybody says anything, look for an update from me this evening. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Thanks JRB...Mitz is giving me hell about JR keeping the secret...I think she needs some medication...LMFAO

J.R. Brewing
10-07-2004, 08:20 AM
I'll try to update the Could it be too late. That is if I get through haggling with the car dealer tonight in time.

I had to abandon you, I had already been smote earlier in the thread by the AlmightyBigMomma. Sorry trick...you on your own.

dms22473
10-07-2004, 08:21 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
Which one of your fics, trick!?!?! Hey and thanks for sticking up for me in the Dead Serious Thread....ho! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO....

Mitzie
10-07-2004, 08:23 AM
Wuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut!?!?! Medication?!?! Oh, UH-UH....you did not go there!?!?! No, your-trick-ass DID NOT!?!?!

Simma...simma...simma down. OK, better. Look, I was merely pointing out the JR has really no reason to keep it from SE, but he has a lot to lose if she ever finds out (which she will), and fights like that leave very little for down-home, bbq'd smut.

J.R. Brewing
10-07-2004, 08:24 AM
But Mitz they make good opportunities for making it up smut.

dms22473
10-07-2004, 08:32 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
Wuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut!?!?! Medication?!?! Oh, UH-UH....you did not go there!?!?! No, your-trick-ass DID NOT!?!?!

Simma...simma...simma down. OK, better. Look, I was merely pointing out the JR has really no reason to keep it from SE, but he has a lot to lose if she ever finds out (which she will), and fights like that leave very little for down-home, bbq'd smut. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Medication is not always bad... Have faith in yo sista-in-smut Mitz...it will all work out...

dms22473
10-09-2004, 01:45 PM
CHAPTER 22

JR wakes up a short time later and slides out of bed. He sits on the chair and watches her sleep for a moment. She wakes up a few minutes later and looks at him, “Were you staring at me again?” JR smiles at her, “Yes.” She sits up a little. “I can’t wait to go home.” JR kisses her hand, “I know. A few more days.” Sue Ellen looks at him, “I want to see John Ross.” “Momma & Clayton should be here with him any minute.” At that, the door swings open and John Ross yells, “Momma!” “Hi baby.” She looks at JR, “Lift him up here.” JR looks at her like she’s crazy, “I don’t think that’s a good idea.” John Ross looks crestfallen. Sue Ellen looks at JR angrily, “JR, lift him up here.” JR lifts him up carefully and he snuggles into her gently. “I love you Momma. I missed you so much.” “I love you too, baby. Momma missed you.”

A few days later, JR brings Sue Ellen home. As JR passes the gates Sue Ellen sees all the armed guards. She looks over at him, “Did you hire an army?” JR looks over at her. “Something like that. Until I find that sonofabitch, you go nowhere without protection.” Sue Ellen roles her eyes but says nothing.

The family greets her and JR helps Sue Ellen upstairs. After he gets her in their room, she pulls away from him. “I’m not an invalid, JR.” JR just stares at her as she sits in the chair. Nothing is said for a minutes before she looks up at him. “I’m sorry, I’m just…I can’t do anything and it’s driving me crazy.” He comes over and kneels in front of her. “I know honey.” “I know you do. Worst of all, I can’t be with you.” JR gets up and turns the radio on. “Maybe a dance will make you feel better?” Sue Ellen smiles and lets him pull her into his arms. His hands slide gingerly around her waist and her hands slide over his arms and she lets them rest around his waist.

You don't ask for much
And I tremble at the touch of your sweet hand
When I look into your eyes
I realize I'm such a lucky man
You've shown me love I never knew
And there is nothing I won't do for you

He kisses her forehead and they start to sway to the music. He whispers in his ear, “I know this is driving you crazy. It’s not easy for me either, but you’re alive and that’s all I give a damn about. I could not live without you Sue Ellen.”

I'd almost given up
On the hope of having someone of my own
But you came into my life
And you made this empty house into a home
I could never ask for more
And every day I'm thankful for you

She looked up at him and kissed his lips lightly. He kissed her back and then pulled her a little closer. “God, you’ll never know how scared I was that I’d never feel this again. Do you know I actually went into the chapel and prayed?” Sue Ellen looks at him, shocked. “I know, JR Ewing in a chapel. But that’s how much I love you. I would have traded places with you if I could have.”

The first time that I held you girl
I knew that it was real
And now I wake up every morning
Knowing what it's like to feel
So much love for you

They continue their dance. JR inhales her scent, grateful for her to be alive and well and in his arms.

As the years go passing by
There'll be lows and highs
That we'll go through
But I can close my eyes and rest
'Cause come what may I'm blessed if I have you
As time paints silver in our hair
Just turn around, I'll still be there for you

You've shown me love I never knew
And there is nothing I won't do for you

As the song ended, JR stopped and just stared into Sue Ellen’s eyes. His voice cracked just a little as he spoke the last lines of the song to her. She smiled, her eyes watered. He pulled her close to him gently, and held her for a moment. Sue Ellen enjoys feeling safe and loved. “Come on darlin’, let’s get you to bed.” Sue Ellen smiled, “Hmm, I wish to hell we could go to bed. I’m going to be miserable until I make love with you again.” JR smiled, “I know. How do you think I’m gonna be? We’ll just take a lot of cold showers. Hey, at least I get to hold you every night in my arms.” They get into bed and snuggle up contently. “You’re right. It’s better than the alternative of me being six feet under.” JR frowns, “Sue Ellen that’s not funny.” Sue Ellen sighed, “I wasn’t trying to be funny. I’m just thankful to be alive and here with you.” As she drifts off to sleep, JR thinks about how grateful he is for the same thing.

Mitzie
10-09-2004, 01:55 PM
Good, KFC...very good. I like the romance, and the fact that our girl is healing quickly.

However, we have two outstanding issues that we need to resolve:

A) Big Daddy needs to lay some Godfatheresque "sleep with the fishes", horse head in the bed, type of beat down on that freak-of-nature motherf***.

B) Sue Ellen needs to heal faster than the flippin' Bionic Woman, so that there can be SMUT.

Awesome ho!

J.R. Brewing
10-09-2004, 01:58 PM
Nice...I'm anxious for Pearce to find out he killed his own baby though. I am soooo sadistic. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif BTW did you check the id on the squirrel?

dms22473
10-09-2004, 01:58 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Mitzie:
Good, KFC...very good. I like the romance, and the fact that our girl is healing quickly.

However, we have two outstanding issues that we need to resolve:

A) Big Daddy needs to lay some Godfatheresque "sleep with the fishes", horse head in the bed, type of beat down on that freak-of-nature motherf***.

B) Sue Ellen needs to heal faster than the flippin' Bionic Woman, so that there can be SMUT.

Awesome ho! <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> I hear ya girl...I think I'm gonna watch Goodfellas to get some ideas on how JR needs to hadle Spaghettios..

dms22473
10-09-2004, 01:59 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Nice...I'm anxious for Pearce to find out he killed his own baby though. I am soooo sadistic. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif BTW did you check the id on the squirrel? <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> LMFAO...I'm pretty sure it wasn't part of Mitz's...if it was it must have been a slow learner, in which case we didn't need his ass anyway

Mitzie
10-09-2004, 01:59 PM
OH SHIT!!!! Spaghettios....HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! You are funny trick.

virty
10-09-2004, 02:30 PM
I love it. Great job as usual.. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

SueEllen&JR4ever
10-10-2004, 06:49 AM
Brilliant update but let's see a showdown between JR and Nick

Sarah
10-11-2004, 12:18 PM
http://us.i1.yimg.com/us.yimg.com/i/mesg/emoticons/35.gif http://us.i1.yimg.com/us.yimg.com/i/mesg/emoticons/35.gif AWESOME!!!! http://www.world-of-smilies.de/html/images/smilies/tiere/reiter.gif

Mitzie
10-11-2004, 02:35 PM
Update this, trick!!!!! Damn, what the hell are you waiting for?!?!?!

thug love.

dms22473
10-11-2004, 02:37 PM
a'ight...dayum...you're a pushy ho..one love though..one love...KFC will update tomorrow...

dms22473
10-12-2004, 02:41 AM
<span class="ev_code_RED">Here ya go Mitz...I was gonna put Nick through a big meat grinder, but I refrained from going all horror movie loco and went with this instead.</span>


CHAPTER 23

Early the next morning, while it is still dark, Bobby comes in and wakes JR quietly. JR looks at him and Bobby motions for him to come outside. JR slips outta bed and follows him into the hallway. “What’s up?” Bobby smiles at him, “We got him. The boys found Pearce. They’re holding him in the ranch house.” JR smiles evilly. “Let me get dressed.”

He got dressed quietly and slipped out. Bobby, Ray, JR, drove to the ranch house. JR walked in to find Nick tied to a chair, bruised and beaten. He walked up to him, without hesitation. He knelt down to Nick’s level, “Hello Nicholas.” Nick looks up, “You bastard, I swear I’m gonna kill you.” “Oh? I don’t think you’re in much of a position to make threats.” Nick stares at him. “Let’s get him into the car and out to the cliff. They all drive out the spot JR picked. They pour booze on Nick and throw empty bottles in the car. They set Nick in the driver’s seat, wrapped up tight with duct tape. “Now, there are a few things I need to tell you before you accidentally drive off the cliff. The first being this. When you shot Sue Ellen, she was pregnant with your bastard child.” Nicks eyes widen in horror. “That’s right, you killed your own child. But Sue Ellen is fine and when she heals, I’ll make sure she gets pregnant again, and we’ll be a happy little family.” Nick pulls against the tape and cries about the baby. “Now, the last image I want you to be left with is this.” JR pulls out the pictures the photographer snapped when they were on the beach, of JR and Sue Ellen making love. The pictures show everything. Nick is enraged. “That’s right. I love the way her legs wrap around me and the way hew whole body trembles when I make her ***.” JR turns the ignition over and as the car rumbles to life he leans down to him one last time. “You almost killed my wife, as far as I’m concerned, you’re getting off easy.” Nick looks at him and screams. “I’ll see you in hell, you sonofabitch.” JR smiles, “Maybe you will, but not for a long time. You go first and think about how every night for the rest of my life, I’ll be fucking Sue Ellen, and her long sexy legs will be wrapped around me, and she’ll be begging me not to stop, screaming my name, telling me how much she loves me. Have a nice trip Nick.” The hired gun pushes the stick into the gas pedal and pulls the shifter into drive. The car sails over the cliff as JR watches. The explosion is deafening. Ray and Bobby stand next to JR. All three are strangely calm. They walk over to the side of the cliff and watch the car burn, until there is almost nothing left. They hired guns clean up and everyone heads home. JR takes a quick shower in Bobby’s room so he doesn’t wake Sue Ellen. He climbs into bed next to his wife, wrapping her up in his arms. She whispers his name and he smiles, drifting into a peaceful sleep.

Dallasfan8304
10-12-2004, 04:46 AM
LMAO...GREAT UPDATE!!! http://www.ultimatedallas.com/granny/Yeahh.gif

J.R. Brewing
10-12-2004, 05:33 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
They set Nick in the driver’s seat, wrapped up tight with duct tape. “Now, there are a few things I need to tell you before you accidentally drive off the cliff. The first being this. When you shot Sue Ellen, she was pregnant with your bastard child.” Nicks eyes widen in horror. “That’s right, you killed your own child.

<span class="ev_code_RED">Na, na, nana. He told you.</span>

But Sue Ellen is fine and when she heals, I’ll make sure she gets pregnant again, and we’ll be a happy little family.”

<span class="ev_code_RED">Hell yes</span>

Nick pulls against the tape and cries about the baby. “Now, the last image I want you to be left with is this.” JR pulls out the pictures the photographer snapped when they were on the beach, of JR and Sue Ellen making love. The pictures show everything. Nick is enraged. “That’s right. I love the way her legs wrap around me and the way hew whole body trembles when I make her ***.”

<span class="ev_code_RED">You tell him Big Daddy</span>

JR turns the ignition over and as the car rumbles to life he leans down to him one last time. “You almost killed my wife, as far as I’m concerned, you’re getting off easy.” Nick looks at him and screams.

<span class="ev_code_RED">I know that's right!</span>

“I’ll see you in hell, you sonofabitch.” JR smiles, “Maybe you will, but not for a long time. You go first and think about how every night for the rest of my life, I’ll be fucking Sue Ellen, and her long sexy legs will be wrapped around me, and she’ll be begging me not to stop, screaming my name, telling me how much she loves me.

<span class="ev_code_RED">WORD!</span>

Have a nice trip Nick.” The hired gun pushes the stick into the gas pedal and pulls the shifter into drive. The car sails over the cliff as JR watches. The explosion is deafening. Ray and Bobby stand next to JR. All three are strangely calm. They walk over to the side of the cliff and watch the car burn, until there is almost nothing left. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

<span class="ev_code_RED">Okay, that was perfectly evil. I love it, the only qualm I have is when his lil M&M finds out, she will not be pleased therefore the lil smut babies around will not be pleased either, but I LOVE IT...great use of revenge and violence. Um....writing in my little book....do not cross KFC. She can be evil. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif</span>

dms22473
10-12-2004, 05:45 AM
<span class="ev_code_RED">You lucky tricks get another update</span>

CHAPTER 24

Sue Ellen wakes up first and smiles at being in JR’s arms. She kisses his face, causing him to smile, without opening up his eyes. “Good morning beautiful.” Sue Ellen smiles as he opens his eyes, “Hey. I want to go for a walk.” JR’s eyes narrow, “A walk? Sue Ellen you just got out of the hospital.” Sue Ellen puts on her pouty face, “Please? You can go with me, and I promise when I feel tired, we’ll stop.” JR sighs in resignation, “I really hate when you give me the pouty, you know that?” Sue Ellen smiles like a little kid. “I know, but I only use when I really, really want something.”

They get dressed and go for a walk. Holding her hand, JR soul is at ease knowing Nick won’t be bothering them again. He briefly contemplates telling her about the baby, but decides against it. No, he thought she’d have a hard enough time a little later when she found out Nicholas had an unfortunate accident. They walk for a little while just enjoying the weather and each other. True to her word she only walked for about 20 minutes and told JR she was getting a little tired. As they reached the patio, JR saw Fenton’s car in the driveway. JR put on his game face and walked in with Sue Ellen. They walked into the living room where the family was just gathering. “Fenton, I hope you came here with some good news, because I’m tired of hearing you can’t find Nicholas Pearce.” JR helped Sue Ellen sit down, and stood behind her in the chair, briefly catching Bobby’s eye. Fenton cleared his throat. “Mr. Ewing we found Mr. Pearce, about 2 hours ago. It appeared he’d been drinking and had an accident.” Sue Ellen gasped, “Is he all right?” “No mam. I’m sorry but he drove his car off the cliff at Dead Man’s Curve. We found bottles in the car. The bartender where he was last seen said he’d been drinking heavily before they threw him out.” JR kneels next to Sue Ellen, gently cradling her head into his shoulder. “I’m sorry honey. Let me take you upstairs.” JR starts to lead Sue Ellen upstairs and Fenton calls him. “Mr. Ewing I’ll need to talk to you and the rest of the family.” “I’ll be right back down.” JR takes Sue Ellen upstairs and gets her into bed. “I’m really sorry, Sue Ellen, I know you cared about him.” Sue Ellen looks into JR’s eyes, “I cared about the man I knew. Not the one that came out after we got back from Miami. I’m ok JR, I really am. I think I’ll take a nap.” He kisses her lightly, and she kisses him back. “Ok.” He goes back downstairs and Fenton takes him, Bobby, Ray, and Clayton in the den. They all take seats as Fenton starts talking. “I just wanted to let you know this case has been closed as a drunk-driving accident. But I would appreciate no more trouble from this family for a while, if that’s all right.” JR shakes Fenton’s hand, “That’s all right with me. I’m ready for a little peace and quiet.” Fenton leaves and they all look at each other and slowly they all smile.

dms22473
10-12-2004, 05:47 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>
<span class="ev_code_RED">Okay, that was perfectly evil. I love it, the only qualm I have is when his lil M&M finds out, she will not be pleased therefore the lil smut babies around will not be pleased either, but I LOVE IT...great use of revenge and violence. Um....writing in my little book....do not cross KFC. She can be evil. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif</span> <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Of course i can...but NEVA to my crewmates....unless you break a cardinal gangsta rule and try to role up on me... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

J.R. Brewing
10-12-2004, 05:49 AM
Hmmm....no more trouble...let me see....somehow I doubt that'll happen. Hey I'm a greedy trick and not above asking...could we get a third today? If so, I promise to update It was a dream tonight.

J.R. Brewing
10-12-2004, 05:50 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dms22473:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>
<span class="ev_code_RED">Okay, that was perfectly evil. I love it, the only qualm I have is when his lil M&M finds out, she will not be pleased therefore the lil smut babies around will not be pleased either, but I LOVE IT...great use of revenge and violence. Um....writing in my little book....do not cross KFC. She can be evil. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif</span> <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Of course i can...but NEVA to my crewmates....unless you break a cardinal gangsta rule and try to role up on me... http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_wink.gif <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Hence why I wrote...remember neva to cross KFC http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

dms22473
10-12-2004, 05:51 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
Hmmm....no more trouble...let me see....somehow I doubt that'll happen. Hey I'm a greedy trick and not above asking...could we get a third today? If so, I promise to update It was a dream tonight. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Just for you JRB...just for you trick....What the hell...I'm feelin' kinda creative today...

J.R. Brewing
10-12-2004, 05:55 AM
I feel the love trick....you go girl. btw I think you'll like the next ep of too late...I promise it tonight also..I too am feeling creative.

dms22473
10-12-2004, 06:06 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by J.R. Brewing:
I feel the love trick....you go girl. btw I think you'll like the next ep of too late...I promise it tonight also..I too am feeling creative. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE> Excellent.....

dms22473
10-12-2004, 06:42 AM
CHAPTER 25 (Ok…just so you know Nick’s parents are dead, so he has no one)

A few days later Sue Ellen flies to New Jersey, without telling JR. She has set up his funeral and paid for everything. JR comes home, “Say Momma, do you know where Sue Ellen is?” Ms. Ellie looks up from her book, “She went to New Jersey this morning. Nicholas’s funeral was today, she arranged it and was flying back for the small ceremony.” JR’s eyes blaze with anger. “Do you know what time she said she was coming back?” She looks at her watch. “Her plane should be landing within the hour.” “Thanks Momma.” JR takes the limo to the airport, trying to calm down before Sue Ellen lands. The limo pulled up as the plane came to a stop. As the doors opened, JR got out of the car. Sue Ellen caught his trademark Stetson. Shit, he was going to be pissed. She knew she should have told him what she was doing but she didn’t want to fight about it. Sue Ellen walked down the steps and came to a stop in front of him. She looked up at him. “I’m sorry I didn’t tell you. I wanted to do this for him, I needed to. I’ve said goodbye and closed that chapter. I knew you would want to go with me or even forbid me to go, so I didn’t tell you. I owed him that JR. Now, you and I can truly put the past behind us, and live our lives together.” As he listened to her, and saw he beautiful face, his anger melted away and he pulled her to him, hugging her. “I love you honey.” Sue Ellen felt relief wash over her. She hugged JR back, “I love you, too.” She pulls back and looks at him. “Now, let’s go home, handsome. I’m a little tired.” He held the door for her and she got in. JR got in and pulled Sue Ellen into his lap, holding on to her for the ride home.

Once home, they eat dinner and JR sits on the balcony as Sue Ellen takes a shower. When she comes out she walks out to find him deep in thought. She touches his shoulder, “Hey.” He opens his arms and she sits in his lap.

Like the sound of silence calling
I hear your voice and suddenly I'm falling
Lost in a dream
Like the echoes of our souls are meeting
You say those words, my heart stops beating
I wonder what it means
What could it be that comes over me?
At times I can't move
At times I can hardly breathe

When you say you love me
The world goes still, so still inside and
When you say you love me
For a moment, there's no one else alive

You're the one I've always thought of
I don't know how but I feel sheltered in your love
You're where I belong
And when you're with me if I close my eyes
There are times I swear I feel like I can fly
For a moment in time
Somewhere between
The heavens and earth
I'm frozen in time
Oh when you say those words

He hugs her close and inhales her scent. She always smelled so good. “God you smell good.” She smiles at him, “Its just soap.” JR smiles, “I know, but it’s your soap. When you were gone, I would wash my hands with your soap that you left here, and just inhale that scent. And I kept some of your perfume, and sprayed it on the pillow so I could sleep.” Sue Ellen kissed him lovingly, “Well now you have the real thing.” JR smiles, “I do, and I’m never going to screw it up again. I promise you that.” She kisses his cheek and rests her head on his shoulder. JR thinks this must be heaven, having Sue Ellen in his arms, feeling her breath against his cheek. “I love you.” JR smiles, yes this was heaven. “I love you too.”

When you say you love me
The world goes still, so still inside and
When you say you love me
For a moment, there's no one else alive

And this journey that we're on
How far we've come and I
Celebrate every moment
And when you say you love me
That's all you have to say
I'll always feel this way

When you say you love me
The world goes still, so still inside and
When you say you love me
In that moment, I know why I'm alive

When you say you love me
When you say you love me
Do you know how I love you?

They sit, enjoying the night air. As she fell asleep in his arms, he pulled her closer, vowing he’d never let her go again.

Mitzie
10-12-2004, 07:33 AM
WOW!!!!! (Mitzie humbly bows and toasts her coffee with Bailey's to KFC).

Trick, I am speechless. That was some tight retribution....PERFECT!!!