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02-10-2004, 05:04 PM
This is similar to the Add2story where someone writes a chapter, then someone adds on, so on and so forth.
1. Int. Southfork-Night
J.R. stands on the balcony of his bedroom overlooking the closing of the sunset over the Western Horizon. Meanwhile, the front door opens and a figure walks in. It focuses on the stairwell and walks up. The figure continues until it comes across the closed door to J.R.'s room. It slowly opens it up, making a screeching sound which alerts J.R.
02-10-2004, 05:35 PM
The door swung open. J.R., startled, looked up. "Sue Ellen?" he said. "What are you doing here?"
Sue Ellen barely looked at him as she slunk into a nearby couch. "I have to talk to you," she said quietly. "It's about Bobby. He went to see the doctor today..."
"Why did he go to the doctor?" J.R. asks worriedly.
"Bobby had a blood test today, and the doctor wants him to have a biopsy at Dallas Memorial," she answers.
"What's wrong with Bobby?"
"His prostate is slightly enlarged and they think it may be cancer..."
Next person, please.
02-11-2004, 03:12 PM
Int. Dallas Memorial Hospital-Day
Bobby lies unconscious on his hospital bed after his biopsy. In the bed next to him, which is seperated from Bobby by a screen, is a very frail woman. When she turns over, her identity is revealed to be Katherine Wentworth. Another woman walks in and sits beside her...
[This message was edited by Ray_Krebbs on 02-11-04 at 04:21 PM.]
03-21-2004, 01:27 PM
Dallas Memorial Hosp.
Bobby still is unconicious his Doctor is worried that he may have fallen into a Coma meanwhile Bobby's Doctor is checking over Bobby's Results he sees that his Prostate could very well be infected. http://www.soapchat.net/infopop/emoticons/icon_frown.gif
03-22-2004, 05:27 AM
Bobby still is out cold even though he is showing signs of Brain activity the Doctor just figures that the sleeping gas hasn't worn off yet. meanwhile back at Southfork JR is thinking of what would happen if he lost Bobby he wishes that he could prevent these kinda things from happening to Bobby seeing as how he cares about him and Bobby is the only brother he has even though him and Bobby were never close he still cares about him. Meanwhile back at the Hospital things had gotton worse Bobby was now slipping in and out of conicous all in all that was a good sign.
Suddenly, Sue Ellen came to the hospital. She cried as she enterd the room and Bobby was slipping unto and out of consciousnes.s Oh my god, bobby, she sobbed. You can't die1 Not now! Not without you ever knowing...your daughter!
05-14-2004, 01:22 PM
A young teenaged girl with dark brown (almost black) hair and lightly tanned skin steps off a bus in Braddock and looks around her unknown surroundings. She spots a young man in western attire come out of a bar and rushes up to him.
"Excuse me.... um, could you tell me where Southworth... or is it..."
"Southfork?" the man asks.
"Yes, yes, that's it. Can you tell me how to get there from here?"
05-16-2004, 06:41 PM
After the man gave her direction. She was her way out there. JR was having himself a drink just thinking about how Bobby was just lying in a hostipal bed. After awhile, JR heard a doorknock and went to answer it and was shock to see the young lady on the other side.
"OH MY GOD, After all of these years. I didn't think you would show up here." JR said.
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